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Demonic:Never to Return....A book by SilverShadows<3

Postby SilverShadows » Tue Aug 30, 2011 1:53 pm

I enjoy writing....a lot. So, I wanted to share some of my old-ish novels that are still in the process of being written! This is only a piece of the Novel that will hopefully be published someday that I got the idea from a Topic I was Role Playing on this site with one of my friends. I haven't written much of it, sadly, sorry, but I'm pretty confident. I'm in the process of writing a currently 78 page book I started a while back. Well, hope you enjoy, and feel free to comment! Do not steal this! I wrote this with my own tears and blood! Jk about the blood... and tears..:P But I put a bunch of work into this! It's only a fragment of it. Enjoy!

Demonic:Never to Return

Ever since I was born, bad things have happened to me and my sister, White. Being mostly demon had it’s up and downs. My father killed my mother when I was around 6 months old. My sister vowed to keep me from changing... completely into a demon. When I was a year old, I was flying. My big ebony wings carrying my ebony body through the sky. I was 17.6 hh by then. My sister was 16.7 hh. I flew happily, undisturbed for everyone knew what I could become… When I was 1 and a half, I was challenged by another half demon. I transformed into a creature of pure darkness. White prevented me from changing fully, but it was bad enough, changing halfway. My soul clenched in the bony fingers of demons all my life. I killed the other pegasie, swiftly, and silently. That began my reputation. My sister and I were forced from the land, being called monsters, demons, foul, pitiful, merciless demons. I hated that word, just saying it makes me want to kill myself now! I might as well, but not until you know my tale; hate me or feel pity, I don’t need any of it. My name is Shadow, and this is the story of love, hatred, and murder…


I might comment on this to post a few otehr short stories, so, be prepared!<3
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Re: Demonic:Never to Return....A book by SilverShadows<3

Postby SilverShadows » Mon Sep 19, 2011 2:12 pm

Painted on Speed


“Get up! We’re going to the Ranch!” A sickly familiar voice caught my ears.
I mumbled through a mouth full of pillow, “Mhy erre we ‘oim oo a frm?”
“What?” The voice yelled at me.
“Why are we going to a farm?!” I yelled back.
“Don’t play stupid.” She pushed me out of bed. I tumbled off my covers and thudded onto the floor of my room. I leaped up, and yelled at her, “Alice!-“ I was cut off by my mother saying, “Don’t you two start fighting! You wanted to do this, Safania. Don’t forget your money this time, I don’t think they’ll appreciate it too much twice in a row.” I groaned and glared at my sister. I dropped back onto my bed, and reached over to the bed stand beside my bed. I pulled it open, and picked up a black leather wallet with a chain attached to it. I opened it up just to make sure my money was in it; to make sure Alice didn’t steal it again. “I got it!” I yelled down to my mom. I pulled off my shirt and put on a black T-shirt, and pulled on blue denim jeans. I jumped out my door, and flew down the stairs. Today was the day! I wouldn’t forget my money either!! A red bowl sat in front of me when I sat down at the table. I looked in the middle of the table, and looked at the variety of cereals I could pick from. I automatically went to the chocolate flavored cereal. I ate fast; first one done. I got back up, and walked to the living room. I grabbed my jacket from the coat hanger, put it on, and then went back into the kitchen. “When are we leaving?” I eagerly asked my mom.
“After your sister is done with her breakfast.” She mumbled around her shirt. I groaned, and looked outside at the large open grass field. We had just moved here a year ago from Chicago. Big change, but I liked it. Alice didn’t, but Mom and I do. I walked out the door, and walked to a whitewash fence near the edge of our big white house. My Great Dane, Milly, was sleeping by her red, non-original doghouse. I whistled to her, and her head shot up. She jumped toward me, and jumped up the fence. Her big front paws were on the top of the fence. I pat her head, and walked to the gate. I let her out, and we walked around. Her black and white coat shone brightly in the sunlight. I smiled at the big puppy. She was a show dog, so her head was always high, her walk neat, and her tail up all the time. I walked around the field. Lots of trees grew around the edges of the field, with nice lush green grass. I felt the weight of something hit my leg, almost knocking me to the ground. I looked down and saw Milly; she’d gotten out of her cage again. I pat her head, and walked on. We were a rich family, but none of us acted like it. Well, my little sister did… I heard the engine start in the car. I turned and ran; telling my dog not to follow. I jumped in, and watched as we slowly back up, the trailer hooked to the back of the truck.
We drove for about 2 hours. When we got there, I couldn’t believe how much my best friend’s farm grew. Paint horses, Appaloosa horses, Friesians, Arabians, Thoroughbreds, Standardbreds, anything you could think of. They had hundreds of acres! I’m not even kidding! I hoped someday I would have the same too…
We pulled up to a big white house with a brown trim. My friend, Alice, came running out, and hugged me. I hugged back, asking, “Is your mother here?” She nodded, pointing to the house. We came in, seeing her mother baking some pie, and cutting apples for the horses. I asked, “Can I make a purchase…for a horse? Preferably a cheap one that I have to train, or that you can’t go near because she’s wild maybe?..” Alice’s mother, known as Lilly, laughed. She walked out of the house, me following like a duckling. She led me to a seemingly empty pasture. She stood there, waiting. I was getting bored. Then, suddenly, a loud scream split the still air. On the horizon, a black shape drifted into the air. It came dashing at us like a train.
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Re: Demonic:Never to Return....A book by SilverShadows<3

Postby dead poets society » Mon Sep 19, 2011 2:49 pm

Keep going!
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Re: Demonic:Never to Return....A book by SilverShadows<3

Postby SilverShadows » Mon Sep 19, 2011 3:01 pm

You liked it? Awwwwwesome:3 I thought it was a bit.. overboard on the I's.
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Re: Demonic:Never to Return....A book by SilverShadows<3

Postby SilverShadows » Mon Sep 19, 2011 3:31 pm

The horse like form sped to the group at the small call of a single whistle blow. My friend asked her mother, "Wha?.. You're giving Saf...her?! I thought you didn't want her killed!"
Saf only stared at the horse. Something ran beside her, smaller, but almost the same shape. As the mare slowed, she trotted up to them, the thing that ran beside her hidden. Lilly said, "No, I'm not giving her Whitey, I'm giving her the foal, Alice. How do you like her, Safania? Come here!" She waved me over when I looked at her questioningly, thinking, what is a...foal? When I stood beside Lilly, I saw her, the most beautiful mini-horse I had ever seen. I asked, "A mini...horse?"
Lilly laughed, saying, "No! A foal, a baby horse. She's a filly." I knew what a filly was, at least. I was startled as my mother said, "How much is she?" Lilly said, simply, "Free. Just a warning, she is very fierce, adn spirited. I wouldn't be surprised if you returned her within a day. She's ready to go, she's a yearling almost." Saf looked at her better. The little filly was almost as tall as the mother. She was black and white with 4 dark brown socks. She had two black rings around her eyes, a black and white infused tail, and the same with her mane. She only had a few other black patches, but the one that caught my eye was the heart shaped black spot on the mares neck. I reached out my hand to touch the filly, rejected by the filly baring her teeth and snapping at it. I looked sadly at her. Then my mother said, "Alright, well, let's load her into the trailer. Lilly, you said we could buy some tack off you too?"
Lilly replied, dragging my mother away to a big red and white barn, "Oh, yes! Top notch Racing, English, and Western saddles, bridles.." I stopped listening, and looked at the beautiful filly as her mother raced her. The filly ran faster than her mother! I was shocked. Then, I felt a nudge. I looked into my best friends eyes as she said, "Please, Saf, be careful around her... She's different..meaner. Her heart belongs to the wild." I looked back at the filly as she screamed, reared, and bucked through the meadow. I said, quietly, "I...I know."
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Re: Demonic:Never to Return....A book by SilverShadows<3

Postby dead poets society » Mon Sep 19, 2011 4:24 pm

I still love it. When you're done with this one I wanna hear about the other one.
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Re: Demonic:Never to Return....A book by SilverShadows<3

Postby SilverShadows » Mon Sep 19, 2011 4:32 pm

Alright(= I have to go):
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