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The story of Sun and Moon(Warrior's)lChapter Two Up l

Postby flamestar1315 » Thu Aug 18, 2011 12:27 am

I know ,I know there are alot of warrior cat stories.Some people have to be getting super bored of them.Well I'm sorry if you dont want to read it then please dont look an say things that are mean about the story. Now that i got that out of my mind please enjoy this story.The two main charries that are used are brother an sister . They are charries from a real story that i made along time ago though I do not claim the warriors as mine in any way shape or form .All the credit for the idea of doing cats like this gose to Erin HunterI will update the clans as changes come about so watch the two clans closely.
The two theme songs of the two cats
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H4-Dmf1OiV0&NR=1

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DarkClan
Leader:DeathStar
Deputy:NightRose
Medicine Cat:TornPool
MedicineCat Appertince:Jewelpaw
Warriors:
BoneRush
Jaugarpelt
DragonFlight
RageWing
BlackenHeart
WrathTail
Appertinces:
Hazelpaw
Droppaw
Shatteredpaw
Streampaw
Brokepaw
Stonepaw
Crisompaw
Hopepaw
Queens
DawnSplash(Scarkit's mother)
FernHeart(Oakkit's mother)
DarkDawn(Whiskerkit's and dreamkit's mother)
Kits
Oakkit
Dreamkit
Scarkit
Whiskerkit
Elders
PaleBlaze
CrackedTail

BrightClan
Leader:MarshStar(Sunkit and moonkit's father
Deputy:JadeFlight
Medicine Cat:RobinFeather
MedicineCat Appertince:Leafpaw
Warriors:
BladeTail
HawkFire
TalonFleet
Riverleap
BoulderClaw
SilverBlaze
Appertinces:
Eaglepaw
Falconpaw
Rainpaw
Scarletpaw
Ripplepaw
Stormpaw
Shadepaw
Whitepaw
Queens
BlazeWing(Sunkit and moonkit's mother)
IceHeart(Bloodkits mother)
HazelDawn(Jaggedkit's mother)
Kits
Moonkit
Sunkit
Bloodkit
Jaggedkit
Elders
LeopardShriek
YellowNose
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Re: The story of Sun and Moon(A warrior Story)

Postby flamestar1315 » Thu Aug 18, 2011 12:27 am

Chapter One
Blazewing purred as she glanced down at her two beautiful kits.The fluffy orange queen bent her head an licked each of their tiny heads an curled her tail around them.Small squeaks of protest escaped them as the two kits where pushed closer to their mother's belly.A shadow of a cat filled the nusery enterance before the cat slipped in."How's our kits doing BlazeWing."Came the rumbled of MarshStar.The massive tom smiled down at her an nuzzle the queen's pelt affectionatly.

The dark brown tom flicked his black capped tail as the blazing yellow eyes of his mate looked up at him."They're fine MarshStar."
She said firmly pinning her ears back,worry flicking through her eyes at the though of something happening to them.A soft sigh escaped him before the clan leader settled down behind her,grooming her flank."Your right BlazeWing.Our kits are fine."He purred reasurringly.The golden she kit squrimmed away from her mother and started to walked over her brother.The pure black kit started to flick his tail in annoyance.Laughing MarshStar picked the golden one up by her scruff an set her on the nursey floor."There Sunkit now your not being crowarded by you mother and brother."He mewed watching her.Electric blue eyes stared up into his pale blue ones."Daddy when can me and Moonkit play in the camp?" she asked pouncing on to his long dark tail.

"Yeah dad when can we go out and play?"Moonkit pipped up scrambling over the large form of their mother.His dark cobalt blue eyes shone before he tumbled from ,BlazeWing's back.BlazeWing rolled her eyes an flicked her tail on top on the young tom."When your a little bigger sweetheart."She mewed watching Moonkit play with her tail.MarshStar sighed an shook out his pelt and glanced at the bright camp."Speaking of camp,I have a clan to control."He grouned flicking his ears down in mock sadness."Mabey I'll just stay in here with you queens and chitter all day."He mewed winking at Blazewing.The pure white queen narrowed her eyes an the tip of her tail began to twitch slightly."Dont get me wrong,MarshStar we love you and all but..... No kits no staying in the nursey."IceHeart mewed.Laughter came from all the older cats in the den.The slightly bigger bundle of red fur poked his head over the she cat's tail."But it's so boring listening to them."Bloodkit whinned looking up at their leader.

Shaking his head at the young cat ,MarshStar flicked his tail in a surrender."I can see when I'm not wanted."He said lifting his muzzle in mock outrage.Still laughing BlazeWing stood up and nugde her mate from the den."Alright you overgrown furball get out of here an let the kits and us get some sleep."She mewed licking his fur flat.The two older cats purred before going their seperate ways.Turning around,BlazeWing looked at her kits who had scampered to the enterance of the den.Sighing BlazeWing glanced back at the other two queens.The she looked exhausted from their one kits.Shaking her head the orange queen glanced down."I'll watch the kit's as they play for a little while."She mewed.The calico queen and snow white queen glanced at eachother before looking at her sheepishly."Would you?"HazelDawn asked as her kit scrambled off of her pelt.BlazeWing noded smile kindly at them."Yes ,Come along kits.Today your playing out here.But don't get in the other cat's way"She warned at all five young kits raced out of the nursey.

Once out of the nusery,Sunkit and Moonkit looked at each other excitement pouring from them.Sunkit could barely sit still.Without warning the golden she kit took of to the appertince den."Sunkit."Came a chorus of mews as the three toms chased after her.Moonkit soon broke away an charged after her.Letting out a shocked mew of her brother coming at her Sunkit quick skitted around the giant pile of fresh kill.Moonkit not being about to turn as quick slammed right into it.The coblat blue eyes stared up at the sky slightly dazed.Three face slowly came into his vision.Sunkit's Golden one,Bloodkit's red on and The multi color face of jaggedkit."What's amatter can't control your turn?"Teased Sunkit.Her whiskers twitching in amusement."His alright mom!!"Sunkit yowled stepping back for him to sit up.

A young grey striped appertince paded over shaking his head."Where we're you going in that kind of rush?"Eaglepaw mewed righting the prey that had been knocked off the top of the pile.Moonkit glanced down at his paws , he flattened his ears "I -was - I mean " he stammered.Sunkit reared up an placed her paws on the bigger toms legs.Trying to get nose to nose with Eaglepaw."Hey don't yell at him."She hissed her tail lashing.Moon kit,jaggedkit an Bloodkit all just stared at the little she cat picking a fight.Eaglepaw let his eyes widen."He just needs to be more careful."The grey tom said looking at her with a grin."Easy Oh firey Sunkit.I only was doing my duty."He mewed flopping on the ground.Taking the advanage Sunkit flicked her tail to the other's "Get him."She hollered scrambling onto the older cat.Laughing the other kits joined in on attacking the appertince.

A shadow fell over the five playing cats.Smiling Eaglepaw leaned up an grinned at the clans deputy."Jadeflight I've been attacked by tiny warriors from lionclan.Help."He mewed as bloodkit pulled on his ear playfully.The pale she cat shook her head."If kit's can get you down we should all be worried."The she purred in amusement.Looking down at bloodkit and the rest of the ,Jadeflight noded to the ground."I'm sorry kits but I need my appertince."She said flicking her tail.Small cries of protest escaped the kits as they slid off of the appertince."Thats's not fair ."Jaggedkit mewed pouncing on the deputy's tail.Sunkit sighed an looked at her paws."Now what are we going to do."Moonkit asked padding over to his sister.The dark kit watched at both of the others before watching his sister again."Mabey we could go explore."Bloodkit mewed flopping down on his side.Jaggedkit narrowed his eyes an pawed at the other tom."Thats'd going to get us in trouble.We'd never be let back out of the nursey until we we're Warriors"He exclaimed.

~ that sounds like my kind of trouble~ Sunkit though glancing over at Bloodkit with a grin and then turned to her brother.A new look had come into his eyes as well."Are you think." she began as he finshed."What i'm thinking?" the two kits laughed an rubbed against each other."Moonkit bowed his head an flicked his tail for the the other two to come closer.Once their head where basically touching ,Moonkit grinned."We're going to escape into the forest...But in two seperat groups." he mewed poking his head up from the group to look around the camp.None of the warriors elders queens or appertinces had even glanced over at the plotting kits."I'll go with Bloodkit and Sunkit you go with Jaggedkit."He mewed pointing out the groups."Together the four of us will cover the whole clan territory!!!!!!"He exclaimed bouncing away from the group.

Jaggedkit gulped as sunkit started to the right not waiting for him.Shaking his head the torieshell tom scrambled after the golden she."H-hey wait up."he panted pulling even with her.The electric blue eyes narrowed as she turned to look at him.The enterance of the camp was in full view an they only had a few seconds to get through it."Look scaried kit if you don't want to come with me .Stay here." she snapped.Without another word Jaggedkit shoved pasted her an dartted into the tunnel.-Scaried kit?Him .No never - His fur fluffed out in anger at her words.Waiting in the tunnel he watched as the shadows coated sunkit's golden fur.It looked let someone had made her in a dark red now.Her electric blue eyes glimmed as sunkit came closer to jaggedkit."Well do now...Run"She mewed with a laugh as she took off through the tunnel.Smiling the young tom chased after,small blurs pulling his pelt and dead leaves sticking in their pelts.All that both kits heard in the long tunnel was the pounding of their paws.A small speck of light rapidly grow as the two eruptd through.Sunkit turn her head to look at him over her shoulder."We did it..We're free."Sunkit said softly.Jaggedkit noded his head an licked his chest .

Bloodkit rolled his eyes as he followed moonkit through the undergrowth.Their smaller bodies worming against the roots and branches. The blood red tom blow the black toms tail off of his nose."Moonkit....What are you doing ?"He hissed crawling to the side of him.Bloodkit's ears flicked down .now he saw what the other kit was watching.A small patrol was passing by with fresh prey dangling from their jaws.-Please let the scent cover ours.- he though excitement rushing through his blood.Moonkit smiled and licked his lips as he watched the hunting patrol walk on by."All of us only have one more moon to go before we are appertinces."The shadowy black tom pulled free of the bush as his tail curled against his body.Slower then moonkit ,Bloodkit crawled out from under the bush."No more nursey for us after that." he mewed looking at his paws.Every cat had to leave there one day.But shaking his head bloodkit glanced up at the rooftop that was made of the dark leaves of trees.Everything seemed so different now that they had left camp for the first time.Moonkit sighed an his tail dropped."Mabey I should have kept us all together...Sunkit and Jaggedkit could be hurt."Bloodkit blinked as he listen to the words of the tom.Just as him was about to reassure moonkit a pair of jaw clamped down on his scruff lightly.Struggling with no away of escaping bloodkit hung limp in the cat's jaws.Glancing over he saw moonkit in someone else jaws too.The tom was fighting like his life depended on it.His black claws swiping at the she cat that held him.

A pretty rusty red tiger tabby she cat angled her head up as she held the fighting black kit in her jaws."MarshStar tell you kit to relax.Before he claws my eyes or something."Hawkfire mewed her voice muffled by moonkit.Moonkit froze an blinked his eyes going wide.The patrol had circled around the two cat that held him an Bloodkit.A shiver went through moonkit.His father's form stepped out of the circle.Amusement made his whiskers twitch, but his eyes were stern."Moonkit......"He began.Sitting infront of Hawkfire an the kit."You know that you're not suppost to be out of the camp...You're mother is frantic."The bigger tom shook his head "Where are the others?"He asked his voice taking on a hard edge.Sometime Moonkit forgot that his father was the leader.."I dont know...Honsetly." he mewed not wanting to squeak on his sister."She probly headed back home."He lied to his dad.Gulit scrathed at his stomach.Bloodkit glanced down an looked at the darker red paws that boarder on a dark brown.Shame rushed through him an the tom pinned his ears down.He had gotten catch by his father,TalonFleet.Sighing the others glanced at each other an started back.MarshStar shrugged his shoulders having no way to say he was liing."I'll think of what your punshiment shall be."He stated before walking ahead of Hawkfire and TalonFleet.

Sunkit sighed an got to her paws .Her and Jaggedkit had ran and walked through the forest.Her paws hurt and she wanted to go home.But sunkit would not leave the forest with out her brother or bloodkit.Slowly she resumed pacing in a circle.Her pawprints covered by new tracks of her that had started the other way."We should just head back,sunkit.Your brother and Bloodkit probley already saw what they wanted to and went back to camp."He hissed for the fifth time.It was slowly starting to get to Sunkit."If you open your mouth and say that again Jaggedkit.I'm going to hurt you."She snapped pausing to glare at him.Her tail lashed behind her as the two stared at each other.Jaggedkit snorted and dropped his gaze ."Fine I wont say that." he grumbled rolling a small pebble around under his paw.A soft russle of leaves startled the young she and Sunkit jump whipping around to catch a glimse of a large fluffy tail with a single black stripe that divide the reddish coat from the white tip.Fear flooded through her.There was a fox .And they where out in the forest alone."This is what i meant when I said trouble."Jaggedkit hissed flatting to the ground an crawling closer to her.Sunkit slaped her tail over his muzzle.Her wide blue eyes turned an looked in his pleading for him to shut up.

Jaggedkit swallow a fright fill moun an noded.The scent of Sunkit drift to his nose which brought back the scents of the nursey.Calming down enough he backed up so her tail fell away from his muzzle.A loud snap echoed from behid him.Glancing down he say the broked twig that layed under his paw an glanced up in horror.Sunkit's head was turned to him eye wide.Looking above her he watched as the fox leapt from the bushes.-No- he though racing infront of her only to get battered to sthe side.Jaggedkit hit the ground with a hard thump.His body bouncing a few times.White spots had formed in his vision , as he struggled to sit up.The fox towered over Sunkit .The golden kit 's pelt fluffed out to twice its normal size.Barks and snarls rang out from the male fox as it stalked forward."Sunkit Don't"He yowled pushing his lower half off the ground.But she had already leapt onto the fox's deadly jaws an was clawing like a wild cat"Don't touch my den-mate you dog breathed thing." she hissed looking into its amber eyes.
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I like it alot! Keep writing! :D
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Postby flamestar1315 » Thu Aug 18, 2011 6:44 am

Thank you^^ and chapter two will be coming up soon
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Re: The story of Sun and Moon(Warrior's)Editting Chapter On

Postby SarahLovesMusic » Thu Aug 18, 2011 7:48 am

I love it!
If time was still, the sun would never, never find us,
We could light up the sky tonight,
I would see the world through your eyes,
And leave it all behind.

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If it's you and me right now,
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So won't you fly with me?
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Re: The story of Sun and Moon(Warrior's)lChapter One l Up

Postby flamestar1315 » Thu Aug 18, 2011 2:46 pm

Thanks just finshed the first chapter and will begin the second after iceskating .^^Please do feel free to comment on something you think may need to be re written or better words.
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Re: The story of Sun and Moon(Warrior's)lChapter One l Up

Postby flamestar1315 » Fri Aug 19, 2011 2:00 am

Chapter Two
"Relax you three,MarshStar or one of our clan mates will find them."The pale grey she cat with dark ringlets around her paws an tail mewed."Relax?! Are you Really telling us to Relax JadeFlight."IceHeart hissed pushing her pure white muzzle into the deputy's face.Her pace icey blue eyes narrowed into tiny slits.BlazeWing let her claws slid out an worry the moss bed into small bits.Her yellow eyes scanned the camp and the enterance as her ears pricked back to the agruement.-Poor JadeFlight.-She though glancing back at the young deputy.The poor she cat had taken a step back as if the white queen would turn into a badger and eat her."Ye-Yes I am .Your upseting the rest of the Clan who mind you are already worried about your missing kit's."JadeFlight managed to mew.She had swallowed a growl that had rose up in the back of her throat.Turning on her paws ,JadeFlight stormed over to BlazeWing.Her jadegreen eyes flashing as she sat down hard next to her."I can't talk to her."She hissed bowing her head.

BlazeWing sighed an rested her tail on the deputy's back."IceHeart is just upset...Bloodkit is her only son and now his gone."She mewed softly flattening her ears.The kits had been in her watch and the second Jadeflight and eaglepaw had stepped away the kits had soon gone.The orange queen sighed an looked down.JadeFlight lifed her head as the russle of cats entering the camp reached her ears.MarshStar strolled through carring four voles and a mouse but no kit.But just as the light grey she cat was about to drop her gaze Hawkfire and TalonFleet paded in side by side .Each carring a tom.IceHeart was oput of the nursey as if bees had swarmed around her.Pelting to her mate an kit the white she cat purred .TalonFleet set Bloodkit down on the ground an the dark red tom placed a browish red paw on his son's tail, keeping him in place.IceHeart pushed her nose into the toms's shoulder her body shaking with emoistion.Before TalonFleet rested his head on his mate'she caught JadeFlight's eyes.In that moment she knew why everything she had said to the queens might had scared and angered them more.His Green eyes where alive with a feral light .

"It's alright.IceHeart.Sweetheart ,Bloodkit is safe.His home."TalonFleet mewed softly ,his muzzle an tiny mouse tail away from her white ear.His mate shook slightly as silent cries escaped her.Shaking his head TalonFleet licked his mats ear repeatedly in soft little strokes.IceHeart had finally calmed down and pulled back a little to look at TalonFleet."Thank you for finding him..."She mewed her voice threating to crack once mew.Bloodkit flattened himself to the ground.He never though that the clan or his mother for that point would go crazy that he was gone for a little bit.Glancing up he saw his mother's muzzle in his face with out a warning.
Her pale eyes where red rimmed but rage roared its ulgy head once more."Your lucky that they found you Bloodkit.What where you thinking...Mabey I'll tell MarshStar to cancell your appertince cermony for pulling this."She growled grabbing him toughly by the scruff.Bloodkit blinked.Cancell the ceremory.His aqua blue eyes glanced at his father. His expression must have show because TalonFleet smirked an shook his head."Mom..Mom please i'll never do it again.Just don't go to MarshStar." he wailed as him an his family marched into the nursey.

MarshStar noded to HawkFire to set Moonkit down on the ground.The rusty red Tiger tabby noded an lower her head an released the kit.Flicking her feathery tail the warrior stalked away muttering about crazy kits an not looking forward to being a mother .Glancing at his son,MarshStar flicked his tail for BlazeWing to come to them.A sigh escaped the queen and she walked over to her family.Her pur welled up as she licked Moonkit's head."Crazy tom."She murmured to her son before looking up at marshstar.Her yellow eyes hopefull.MarshStar gulped an dropped his eyes to his paws,his dark brown ears flicking back."No..We didn't find Sunkit or."He swallowed harder"Jaggedkit.Not yet any ways."MarshStar lifted his head an met yellow brimming with unshed tears.Turning her head away Blazewing let out a ragged breath."I know you're trying you best.."She mewed unevenly. Bloodkit flattened his ears an placed a paw on hers"Mom?"He asked softly .When he didn't get an answer he gentally nudged her with his head."Sunkit will always come back home.She'll bring jaggedkit home too."

BlazeWing fought to keep the tears at bay.She won't break down infront of the two tom's that mean the world to her.But it was getting harder an harder with moonkit being a gental tom.Worry an concern in his words.Letting asnother shakly breath out ,BlazeWing glanced down at the young tom."I hope so." she mewed trying to smile an failing.Before MarshStar could comfort her ,Blazewing bent down and grabbed moonkit dartting back into the den.The leader sighed an dropped his head.What was he going to do...The queens where upset from lossing the kits.-Expecillay BlazeWing.- he though glancing back at the nursey.She told him before the patrol that she had been watching the kits.So he knew she was blaming herself for not watching them close enough.
Shakinging his head MarshStar leapt up to the smaller stones an zig zagged his way up to the high rock"Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey gather here beneath the Highrock for a Clan meeting". He yowled his voice ringing loud an clear through out the camp.Cats from each den began to walk out an settle under the rock.Flicking his tail as Jadeflight broke away from the nursey an made her way to him.Her pale pelt moving swiftly through the sea of cats.Jumping on to the smaller rock the was a littl higiher off the ground ,Jadeflight looked up at him.

Clearin his throat ,Marshstar looked down at his clan an sighed."There is good news and bad news."He started"We have found Moonkit and Bloodkit and now their safely back in the nursey.."He mewed.Several cheers called up as cat seemed to glow with happyness." A pure silver tabby shake her head an reared up on her hind legs."But what about jaggedkit and sunkit?" Riverleap mewed letting herself fall back on all four legs.A murmurr ran through the crowad all asking the same thing.Waiting for the clan to quiet down Marshstar kneed the rock.His claws sharpening on the rock ."That's the bad news.... Those two are still out in the forest." he finshed closing his eyes.They where pushing the boarder patrol because of DarkClan.How much more stress could he force on to his clan.An appertince pusehd through the crowad grinning ,-Eaglepaw- Marshstar though looking down at the tom."Yes?"He aske tipping his head.Eaglepaw glanced around an cleared his throat a few time the young cat sat up tall."I believe I speak for the appertince when I say then wha are we waiting for?"He yowled.The younger cats cheered an purred calling out yeahs an lets go.Purring Marshatar look down at him."Well I'm not sure what we're waiting for. Lets go get the kits.JadeFlight...Get patrols of every cat and sent them out in different dircetions"With that MarshStar flicking his tail an jumped down heading to the cats below.

Sunkit felt like she was in the middle of a huge storm.As the fox tossed is head back an forth snapping at her,Sunkit clung on.-This might not have been my best idea.-She though for the hundred though.She didn't know why but the moment the fox had gone after jaggedkit she had felt a rage brake through her terror.Glaring into the other animal's eyes Sunkit bit down on its muzzle.She hadn't seen jaggedkit since she had lept on to the fox.As the fox let out a yelp it's paw with claws out came up an swatted her off its muzzle.Pain exploded through her as she flew through the air.Blinking rapidly as she landed on her paws ,she looked at the four scratches.-RobinFeather's gonna kill me.- she mused.Blood had started to well up on the cuts and a hiss sounded from the other side.Jaggedkit had lundged forward and clamped his jaw around the fox's back paw.Purring Sunkit dartting to its side and lept up once more.Her claws kind of digging into its back..Even though they where landing blows on it Sunkit knew that two kits would not even beable to chase this thing away.Shaking her head,Sunkit glanced down at the fightint tom an took a breath an let out a yowl of all yowls.Birds scattered from the branches.Though it startled the fox into shaking her an jaggedkit off.Once agains sunkit felt herself flying through the air.Only this time she didnt land as nicely as before.Hitting the ground on her right side ,she whimpered.The male fox snarled at jaggedkit before turning to her an stalking forward.Its semi rounded ears flatted against its skull.Blood dripped from its muzzle, back and hind leg.Jaggedkit hissed at it trying in vein to get its attention once more.Yellow green eyes stared over at her wid with worry an fear.Strangly sunkit stared calmly back at jaggedkit.her electric blue eyes fearless."i'll be ok." she mouthed trying to give him comfort even though it looked like she would join starclan before her life ever began.Pulling her gaze up she hissing at the fox her eyes slitting.

-I'll be ok....Is she serious?- he though shaking his head.There was no way he would be able to scramble over to help her in time.The multi-colored tom flatted his ears an growl still praying the fox would give heim at least a look so that she could run.But no the massive dog had cornered the golden she cat. Shaking his head once more he pushed up.His legs wobbling under him as jaggedkit staggered trying to reach her.-Please let the clan or someone hear us.- he though sending up another pray to star clan.
SilverBlaze lifted her head as she heard a feint snarls an snapps and a loud yowl.Shaking her head the pure silve she cat that looked like a phantom turned her light green eyes to BoulderClaw."I think their that way." she mewed flicking her tail up the stream .The dark grey tabby tom noded an took off his paws carrying him quickly to the fight.Silverblaze glanced down at the two appertince who fllattened their ear determination written in their body stand."Falconpaw ,Ripplepaw lets move."She mewed finally chasing after the tom.The white silver appertince darted right beside her.The she cats eyes bright.On her other side the grey blue tabby tom raced with her.Pulling to a stop she breathed in ,the scent of fox an the kits.Growling silverblaze leapt over the bush an on one side of the fox.BoulderClaw had placed himself inbetween the fox an sunkit.Already on his hind legs the tom had foced the dog back.His long claws scoring wicked marks in it muzzle.Desicding to protect jaggedkit in case the fox turned around to go after him SilverBlaze noded to the appertinces.

Falconpaw let out a shriek an slid under the russtle colored pelt an flipped onto her back.Getting a great view of its stomach ,she performed the belly rake.Crisome blood falling onto her cover.Letting out a short whimper the fox jumped back growling.Only had run into Ripplepaw.The tom had bit down on its tail an was pulling his head back.A frantic light had appered in the fox's eyes at more cats coming in.Flicking its tail the fox tryed to get the other tom off of its tail.But Ripplepaw just du ghis claws into the ground barely holding his ground.Blood had started to show from his claws as they threated to rip."Ripplepaw...Let it go."SilverBlaze yowled seeint the fox started to run away.The tom obeyed an collaped to the ground panted.As he shook his head ,ripplepaw looked up at falconpaw an spat out a mouth full of red orange fur."Thats bloody disgusting." he hissed .

Jaggedkit smiled an dipped his head.His clan mates had come just in time.The fox had just been about to take a bit from sunkit when Boulderclaw had leapt from the bush.It had taken the fox by surprize.Glancing over at sunkit,Jaggedkit blinked.-Was she hurt badly?-He hadnt seen her try to get up from the fall.Mabey she had broken a paw or a leg.Hissing in sypthly he looked up at sliverblaze an shriank back."The silver she was glaring at him like he was another fox."Do you know the worry you have caused the clan!!!!!!!!!!1"She growled cuffing him over the ear.Stars bloomed in his vision once more at the blow bowled him over.Scrambling away from the crazy she ,he went to sunkit.The other kit licked his ear softly her tongue a slightly rough warmth.Turning his head jaggedkit blinked woundering if star clan had come for him."Thank you.. jaggedkit you could have run an left me for the fox to kill."She mewed struggling to her paws.Pain flicked through her eyes as her first right paw touched the ground.Jagged kit flicked his ears back."I won't have left you."He mewed before BoulderClaw picked him up by the scruff.SilverBlaze rolled her eyes an very gentaly grabbed sunkit."MarshStar is going to have our fur..."She muttered through sunkit's fur."come on guys lets go."She whipped around an started back to the clan.

Falconpaw sighed her ears down.Boy where they ever going to get in trouble.One the kits had gotten hurt .Two they hadn't stoped it.Alreadty she could pitcure the leader's claws on her pelt.Shaking her head falconpaw let her mind wander back to eaglepaw as he stood up an told Marshstar what they had said lets night.Affection for the tom her come from her as she purred.Glancing over she looked at ripplepaw who was wincing with each step."Pulled to hard on my claw.... Just tender."He mewed looking at her with a grin.The cats headed back to the camp.As the leaves parted from to the tunnel Falcon paw sighed in relief.At least they had found the kits.Now all that was left was what would happen now that they where back.
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Re: The story of Sun and Moon(Warrior's)lChapter Two Up l

Postby wet noses » Fri Aug 19, 2011 6:22 am

This is a amazing story! Continue soon! It's super good! I can't tell the difference between your's and Erin's! :clap: :thumbup:
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Postby flamestar1315 » Sat Aug 20, 2011 4:23 am

Awww thank you so much. an i will keep writing .But (^_^) you have no idea how good it makes me feel that others like my stories
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Postby flamestar1315 » Sun Aug 21, 2011 1:09 pm

sorry guys ive been super busy.So chapter three may come a bit later :( but it will be written>.<
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