..: Raindrops on the Window Pane:..

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..: Raindrops on the Window Pane:..

Postby AmitySoul » Fri Aug 05, 2011 10:37 pm

..;: Info on the Story :..

Main Character: Lily Daneese Carol Micheals
Her bestfriend: Katara Mae Whittner
She goes to a private school far away from anyone she really knows. She is bullied physically, on the internet, and mentally. It causes her to have really bad depression. Anyways that's all you really need to know now.



..: Chapter 1 :..


She walked over to a window zipping her jacket keeping herself warm as she watched each rain drop hit the ground she couldn't help but wonder what it would be like to be one of the rain drops. She loved the smell after it rained and the smell of the newly watered flowers. She loved the muggy feeling after the rain had gone and the sunshine came out. She wanted to see a rainbow. But it hadn't happened to her in weeks.
After being scent her its been different she wanted to stay but was home sick. How could she be home sick if she culdn't go home to anybody she thought relentlessly. She missed her old friends she missed her family that she vanished herself away from. She looked up at the appearing sun and felt releif for once she leaned her head agianst the window watching everything outside.


To Be Continued!
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Postby AmitySoul » Fri Aug 05, 2011 10:55 pm

Need ideas and a name for it! please!
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Postby AmitySoul » Sun Feb 05, 2012 5:02 pm

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Postby Meredith's Whiskers » Sun Feb 05, 2012 5:18 pm

It sounds very good but you may want to put in the girls name.Name ideas.
Raindrops on the Window Pane?
I've got the girl that makes me wanna live
And she's got the hear that makes me wanna give more
Now I've got amore amore amore, I've got amore amore amore
She gives me amore amore amore, I've got amore amore amore
We've got the whole world together
We've got our whole lives to spend together
We've got all our time to press our lips together
We've got our whole world forever
Drawing pictures in the sky
Swearing we could fly
Knowing others would die
Just to be you and I
Amore, OH!Hello

Catching Your Clouds Taylor Swift OH!Hello Sleeping With Sirens All Time Low
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Postby AmitySoul » Mon Feb 27, 2012 4:52 am

Sounds great thanks I should be able to add more within the next three days or so.
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