ωєℓ¢σмє тσ тнє ∂ιαяιєѕ σƒ α ѕιвєяιαη нυѕку Chpt. 8 finally!!

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Re: ωєℓ¢σмє тσ тнє ∂ιαяιєѕ σƒ α ѕιвєяιαη нυѕку

Postby RαrєHuskíєs » Sat Jul 30, 2011 3:14 pm

Thank you :D I feel so happy :3 You made my night!
“𝙳𝚘𝚐𝚜 𝚍𝚒𝚎. 𝙱𝚞𝚝 𝚍𝚘𝚐𝚜 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎, 𝚝𝚘𝚘. 𝚁𝚒𝚐𝚑𝚝 𝚞𝚙 𝚞𝚗𝚝𝚒𝚕 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚍𝚒𝚎, 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎. 𝚃𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎 𝚋𝚛𝚊𝚟𝚎, 𝚋𝚎𝚊𝚞𝚝𝚒𝚏𝚞𝚕 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎𝚜. 𝚃𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚙𝚛𝚘𝚝𝚎𝚌𝚝 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚒𝚛 𝚏𝚊𝚖𝚒𝚕𝚒𝚎𝚜. 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚕𝚘𝚟𝚎 𝚞𝚜. 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚖𝚊𝚔𝚎 𝚘𝚞𝚛 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎𝚜 𝚊 𝚕𝚒𝚝𝚝𝚕𝚎 𝚋𝚛𝚒𝚐𝚑𝚝𝚎𝚛. 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚍𝚘𝚗'𝚝 𝚠𝚊𝚜𝚝𝚎 𝚝𝚒𝚖𝚎 𝚋𝚎𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚊𝚏𝚛𝚊𝚒𝚍 𝚘𝚏 𝚝𝚘𝚖𝚘𝚛𝚛𝚘𝚠.”
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Re: ωєℓ¢σмє тσ тнє ∂ιαяιєѕ σƒ α ѕιвєяιαη нυѕку

Postby RαrєHuskíєs » Sun Jul 31, 2011 2:44 am

BUMP!
“𝙳𝚘𝚐𝚜 𝚍𝚒𝚎. 𝙱𝚞𝚝 𝚍𝚘𝚐𝚜 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎, 𝚝𝚘𝚘. 𝚁𝚒𝚐𝚑𝚝 𝚞𝚙 𝚞𝚗𝚝𝚒𝚕 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚍𝚒𝚎, 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎. 𝚃𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎 𝚋𝚛𝚊𝚟𝚎, 𝚋𝚎𝚊𝚞𝚝𝚒𝚏𝚞𝚕 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎𝚜. 𝚃𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚙𝚛𝚘𝚝𝚎𝚌𝚝 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚒𝚛 𝚏𝚊𝚖𝚒𝚕𝚒𝚎𝚜. 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚕𝚘𝚟𝚎 𝚞𝚜. 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚖𝚊𝚔𝚎 𝚘𝚞𝚛 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎𝚜 𝚊 𝚕𝚒𝚝𝚝𝚕𝚎 𝚋𝚛𝚒𝚐𝚑𝚝𝚎𝚛. 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚍𝚘𝚗'𝚝 𝚠𝚊𝚜𝚝𝚎 𝚝𝚒𝚖𝚎 𝚋𝚎𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚊𝚏𝚛𝚊𝚒𝚍 𝚘𝚏 𝚝𝚘𝚖𝚘𝚛𝚛𝚘𝚠.”
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Re: ωєℓ¢σмє тσ тнє ∂ιαяιєѕ σƒ α ѕιвєяιαη нυѕку

Postby RαrєHuskíєs » Sun Jul 31, 2011 5:11 am

BUMP
“𝙳𝚘𝚐𝚜 𝚍𝚒𝚎. 𝙱𝚞𝚝 𝚍𝚘𝚐𝚜 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎, 𝚝𝚘𝚘. 𝚁𝚒𝚐𝚑𝚝 𝚞𝚙 𝚞𝚗𝚝𝚒𝚕 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚍𝚒𝚎, 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎. 𝚃𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎 𝚋𝚛𝚊𝚟𝚎, 𝚋𝚎𝚊𝚞𝚝𝚒𝚏𝚞𝚕 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎𝚜. 𝚃𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚙𝚛𝚘𝚝𝚎𝚌𝚝 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚒𝚛 𝚏𝚊𝚖𝚒𝚕𝚒𝚎𝚜. 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚕𝚘𝚟𝚎 𝚞𝚜. 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚖𝚊𝚔𝚎 𝚘𝚞𝚛 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎𝚜 𝚊 𝚕𝚒𝚝𝚝𝚕𝚎 𝚋𝚛𝚒𝚐𝚑𝚝𝚎𝚛. 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚍𝚘𝚗'𝚝 𝚠𝚊𝚜𝚝𝚎 𝚝𝚒𝚖𝚎 𝚋𝚎𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚊𝚏𝚛𝚊𝚒𝚍 𝚘𝚏 𝚝𝚘𝚖𝚘𝚛𝚛𝚘𝚠.”
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Re: ωєℓ¢σмє тσ тнє ∂ιαяιєѕ σƒ α ѕιвєяιαη нυѕку

Postby •.мὄᾗṩҭἔʀ.• » Sun Jul 31, 2011 6:51 am

This is well, simply amazing. I love it so far! I hope you continue to tell this puppies tale.I love it so far ♥. Instant luff.
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Re: ωєℓ¢σмє тσ тнє ∂ιαяιєѕ σƒ α ѕιвєяιαη нυѕку

Postby RαrєHuskíєs » Sun Jul 31, 2011 9:03 am

Why thank you! I am glad to hear you like it. I will most likely write more tonight (:
“𝙳𝚘𝚐𝚜 𝚍𝚒𝚎. 𝙱𝚞𝚝 𝚍𝚘𝚐𝚜 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎, 𝚝𝚘𝚘. 𝚁𝚒𝚐𝚑𝚝 𝚞𝚙 𝚞𝚗𝚝𝚒𝚕 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚍𝚒𝚎, 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎. 𝚃𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎 𝚋𝚛𝚊𝚟𝚎, 𝚋𝚎𝚊𝚞𝚝𝚒𝚏𝚞𝚕 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎𝚜. 𝚃𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚙𝚛𝚘𝚝𝚎𝚌𝚝 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚒𝚛 𝚏𝚊𝚖𝚒𝚕𝚒𝚎𝚜. 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚕𝚘𝚟𝚎 𝚞𝚜. 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚖𝚊𝚔𝚎 𝚘𝚞𝚛 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎𝚜 𝚊 𝚕𝚒𝚝𝚝𝚕𝚎 𝚋𝚛𝚒𝚐𝚑𝚝𝚎𝚛. 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚍𝚘𝚗'𝚝 𝚠𝚊𝚜𝚝𝚎 𝚝𝚒𝚖𝚎 𝚋𝚎𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚊𝚏𝚛𝚊𝚒𝚍 𝚘𝚏 𝚝𝚘𝚖𝚘𝚛𝚛𝚘𝚠.”
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Re: ωєℓ¢σмє тσ тнє ∂ιαяιєѕ σƒ α ѕιвєяιαη нυѕку

Postby •.мὄᾗṩҭἔʀ.• » Sun Jul 31, 2011 3:45 pm

I can't wait to read more! =D
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Re: ωєℓ¢σмє тσ тнє ∂ιαяιєѕ σƒ α ѕιвєяιαη нυѕку

Postby Phoenix Down » Sun Jul 31, 2011 4:06 pm

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Re: ωєℓ¢σмє тσ тнє ∂ιαяιєѕ σƒ α ѕιвєяιαη нυѕку

Postby RαrєHuskíєs » Sun Jul 31, 2011 4:37 pm

¢нαρтєя 3: єαяℓу ѕησω





I believe it was around a week or so after I had opened my eyes that the young girl, Tara, had run in, her cheeks a frosty pink, her eyes almost covered by her fluffy pink hat. She always amazed me, and well, I guess I had always amazed her. I think she liked me for my bravery and stability, how, even though my brother and sisters eyes were open now, I was still the only one exploring new things everyday, and staying on my toes.


Well, that day, she had run in, squealing excitedly, my mother getting up to go to her side, sniffing her fingers, and licking them, looking up at her, whining profusely. My mother rarely left, but when she did, she wasn't gone for long, though when she came back, she always smelled fresh and like some other things, that did not yet register in my head.


Tara smiled at my mom, opening the stall door, my mother running out quickly, meeting up with my father at the large doors a few yards ahead. I tilted my head, always interested, as usual. I looked up at Tara, her blue eyes sparking with enthusiasm. Before I knew it, I was being picked up, carried quickly out the door, the girl giggling happily, running out the huge doors.


My eyes were wide open, my paws and body shaking from nervousness. I had never left the stall, and I hadn't planned on it, really. As I was carried, we slowed down, the full view of the 'out' in my eyes. I gulped lightly, whimpering softly, when my mother ran up to Tara, but her eyes focused on me intently. "Young Koda. This is the out, where when you are older, you will live. Cherish this experience, my sweetling. Explore, do not be afraid" she spoke gently, her voice reassuring. I knew I could trust her.


After a few minutes of looking around from up high, I was slowly let down to the ground, the soft, cold ground pressing against my tiny paw pads. I pushed on it expectantly, and when it did not move, I bounced on it a slight bit, my fur flowing in the wind, my blue eyes excited and getting more and more by the minute.


I must say I played and ran for around an hour, my mother and father watching contentedly, the girl Tara, sitting with them. It seemed as if everyone was interested in my first day out, even if they weren't sure how good it was. It was probably around a few minutes later when a cold breeze blew in, bit fluffy things covering the skies. I yelped, and ran to my mother, hiding under her fur. She tilted her head, blinking her eyes, then chuckling. "Koda, they are clouds, and they are here to bring you a present" she whispered, licking my fur, then nudging me out from under her.


I whined, and tried to crawl back, but then I was mesmerized, as soft flakes of cold landed on me, sticking to my nose, looking like the stars my mother had described that filled the skies at night. I had never seen them, but I imagined this is what they would look like. I stood there for a few seconds as it clung to my fur, and stayed there, forming a light cold coat, but that did not make me cold, for my fur was thick. My mother approached me, and smiled warmly. "Dear Koda, this is snow. What a lucky pup you are, how extraordinary you are. It's snowing earlier than it is supposed to, and it's all for you" she winked, licking me warmly.


We stayed out for another hour, frolicking in the soft falling snow, having the time of my life, and when it was time to go back in, I was relieved, because I knew what the upcoming days would hold for me....
“𝙳𝚘𝚐𝚜 𝚍𝚒𝚎. 𝙱𝚞𝚝 𝚍𝚘𝚐𝚜 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎, 𝚝𝚘𝚘. 𝚁𝚒𝚐𝚑𝚝 𝚞𝚙 𝚞𝚗𝚝𝚒𝚕 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚍𝚒𝚎, 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎. 𝚃𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎 𝚋𝚛𝚊𝚟𝚎, 𝚋𝚎𝚊𝚞𝚝𝚒𝚏𝚞𝚕 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎𝚜. 𝚃𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚙𝚛𝚘𝚝𝚎𝚌𝚝 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚒𝚛 𝚏𝚊𝚖𝚒𝚕𝚒𝚎𝚜. 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚕𝚘𝚟𝚎 𝚞𝚜. 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚖𝚊𝚔𝚎 𝚘𝚞𝚛 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎𝚜 𝚊 𝚕𝚒𝚝𝚝𝚕𝚎 𝚋𝚛𝚒𝚐𝚑𝚝𝚎𝚛. 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚍𝚘𝚗'𝚝 𝚠𝚊𝚜𝚝𝚎 𝚝𝚒𝚖𝚎 𝚋𝚎𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚊𝚏𝚛𝚊𝚒𝚍 𝚘𝚏 𝚝𝚘𝚖𝚘𝚛𝚛𝚘𝚠.”
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Re: ωєℓ¢σмє тσ тнє ∂ιαяιєѕ σƒ α ѕιвєяιαη нυѕку Chpt. 3 UP!!!

Postby Phoenix Down » Sun Jul 31, 2011 4:47 pm

Aww, I loved the line his mother said: "Dear Koda, this is snow. What a lucky pup you are, how extraordinary you are. It's snowing earlier than it is supposed to, and it's all for you"
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me whats inside
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Re: ωєℓ¢σмє тσ тнє ∂ιαяιєѕ σƒ α ѕιвєяιαη нυѕку Chpt. 3 UP!!!

Postby RαrєHuskíєs » Sun Jul 31, 2011 4:57 pm

Thanks! (: It was a heartfelt one indeed :3
“𝙳𝚘𝚐𝚜 𝚍𝚒𝚎. 𝙱𝚞𝚝 𝚍𝚘𝚐𝚜 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎, 𝚝𝚘𝚘. 𝚁𝚒𝚐𝚑𝚝 𝚞𝚙 𝚞𝚗𝚝𝚒𝚕 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚍𝚒𝚎, 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎. 𝚃𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎 𝚋𝚛𝚊𝚟𝚎, 𝚋𝚎𝚊𝚞𝚝𝚒𝚏𝚞𝚕 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎𝚜. 𝚃𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚙𝚛𝚘𝚝𝚎𝚌𝚝 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚒𝚛 𝚏𝚊𝚖𝚒𝚕𝚒𝚎𝚜. 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚕𝚘𝚟𝚎 𝚞𝚜. 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚖𝚊𝚔𝚎 𝚘𝚞𝚛 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎𝚜 𝚊 𝚕𝚒𝚝𝚝𝚕𝚎 𝚋𝚛𝚒𝚐𝚑𝚝𝚎𝚛. 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚍𝚘𝚗'𝚝 𝚠𝚊𝚜𝚝𝚎 𝚝𝚒𝚖𝚎 𝚋𝚎𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚊𝚏𝚛𝚊𝚒𝚍 𝚘𝚏 𝚝𝚘𝚖𝚘𝚛𝚛𝚘𝚠.”
― 𝙳𝚊𝚗 𝙶𝚎𝚖𝚎𝚒𝚗𝚑𝚊𝚛𝚝

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