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Re: DON'T READ ME!!!

Postby TSF11 » Sun Jul 31, 2011 3:56 pm

Hi guys!
I have been having writers block. :( The next chapter should be out his week. :)
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Re: DON'T READ ME!!!

Postby Marian5390 » Sun Jul 31, 2011 4:39 pm

Yay! :D
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Re: DON'T READ ME!!!

Postby Darleo » Sun Jul 31, 2011 4:45 pm

Wow, love your writing style and ideas, reminds me of a better version of something I tried to write once.

Just want to point out that you're meant to start a new line when a new person speaks so that two people aren't speaking on the same line.
E.g.
"Well, yeah. I've been since I was 2 months old." said Becca.
"WHAT?" said Sophie.
Instead of:
"Well, yeah. I've been since I was 2 months old." said Becca. "WHAT?" said Sophie.
Hope it's okay for me to say that, and please don't stop writing, I love it.
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Re: DON'T READ ME!!!

Postby Secret.Kitteh.! » Mon Aug 01, 2011 11:22 am

omg moree!
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Re: DON'T READ ME!!!

Postby Hukkelberry » Mon Aug 01, 2011 11:53 am

This is really cool.
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Re: DON'T READ ME!!!

Postby ThisAndThat » Fri Aug 05, 2011 11:09 am

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Re: DON'T READ ME!!!

Postby TSF11 » Sat Jan 07, 2012 11:08 am

I am so sorry I haven't written in such a long time! I added a new chapter, so enjoy! I will message you all to inform you, too.
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Re: DON'T READ ME!!!

Postby TSF11 » Sun Jan 08, 2012 6:13 am

Hi everyone! I was wondering if any of you wanted to post your own book? Just send it to me and I will post it in. Thanks!
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