Shadows ~~A original story on Real life fantasy~~

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Shadows ~~A original story on Real life fantasy~~

Postby ~Night and Darkness~ » Fri Jul 29, 2011 9:00 am

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Hey guys! for all of you who used to read the old shadows that I had posted this is the new one!...The reason I quit the old one is because I made the old one better by putting new ideas into it and editing it so I hope you enjoy the new one as much as you enjoyed the other .....ps. for those who love spoilers ask me to Pm you what will happen and the characters full info if you just want the characters full information pm me too ........pps I know it is a little diffrent and that some people may think that it is horrible and not worth reading but please give me a chance...I know I am new to this and everything but I will accept anything you give me...anything :)


Characters
Gabriel(Main character)17 years old
Micheal(Main characters best friend)17 years old
Admara(Main characters younger sister)16 years old
Scarlet(Main charcters sister)17 years old
Jack(Main characters younger brother(twin brother of Admara))16 years old
Matthew(Ivory's twin brother)17 years old
Ivory(Matthews younger twin sister)17 years old
Sam(Second in command vampire)22 old
Seth(Werewolf Gabes Master)20 years old
Mark(Werewolf Seths Master)19 years old
Dakota(Head vampire)25 years old
Curtis(Wizard)18 years old
Holly(Matthews older sister)18 years old



Chapters:
Chapter 1
Last edited by ~Night and Darkness~ on Sun Jan 01, 2012 7:52 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: Shadows(In construction.....:) )

Postby ~Night and Darkness~ » Thu Aug 11, 2011 11:14 am

Character Info:


Gabrial Adrian Baily Evergreen(Gabe)

Born November 1st,17 years old.He has three younger siblings;Scarlet,Jack and Admara.He is the oldest out off all.He and his friends Lore and Micheal Help him Take care of his family.Since his parents died three years ago in a train collision(Their car got stuck on the tracks :( ).He has blackish brown hair with greenish blue eyes.When he turns into a vampire he has burgendy eyes with sploches of gree.When a wolf he has pure black fur.

Scarlet Lera Evergreen

Born December 1st,17 years old.She is 1 month younger then Gabe(and that is because she was adopted).Her real parents left her in the hospital so she was sent to adoption and Mr. and Mrs.Evergreen adopted her.She has black hair with blue streaks and grey eyes


Jack Eliot Evergreen

Born January 1st at 12:00(witching hour starts),16 years old.He is 1 year and 2 months younger then Gaberial.He has a twin sister Admara.His best friend says he is a apprentence to a wizard.But Jack thinks he is crazy.He has Dark brown hair with hazel eyes.

Admara Caline Evergreen

Born January 2 at 1:00(end of witching hour),16 years old.She is the youngest by one hour.She is very sensitive to things that happen.She has the same hair color and eyes as Gabe.She loves her brothers more then her sister,but she does love her sister.

Micheal Immanuel Colbie Avavian(Evergreen since he is basicly a brother in the family)

Born October 31st,17 years old.He is one day younger then Gabe.He lives with Gabrials family.His mom died in the crash with Gabes parents and his dad took it hard and began to drink and abuse him so he left and moved in with Gabe.He treats gabe and his family as if it were his own.He has Black hair and dark blue eyes.He is a grey wolf.

Lore Rebecca Norton(Evergreen :) )

Born August 12,18 years old.She is older then Gabe obviously.She is Gabe's friend.She acts as the mom in Gabes family and helps him take care of them.She just recently graduated and had decided to move and live with with Gabes family basicly becoming part of the family.She has Light brown hair and dark brow eyes.

Seth Jacobson

Born June 6th ,20 years old.He was bitten when he was 17 by Mark.He was running away thn and Mark found him and bit him.He is now Micheals and Gabes master.He has Blue hair that was originally blonde and brownish greyish hair.

Mark Olive Romeraz

Born Febuary 2, 19 years old.He was bitten by a Tyrann when he was 13 .He was roaming the streets because he was a orphan when this happened.He bit Seth when he was 16.He has brown hair and hazel eyes

Matthew Xaviar Yern

Born May 20 10:00,17 years old.He was appenticed to Curtis when he was 10 by his parents who are witches.He has 2 sisters,Ivory and Holly.Holly is older by a year and Ivory is his twin sister.Since they are both witches and are twins witch twins can feel each others emotions and connect in a unquie way.He has Black hair with light green eyes.When he is using his powers his eyes turn yellow.

Ivory Valentine Yern(Ivy)

Born May 20 11:00,17 years old.She is a witch and are twns with her Matthew.She is younger then Matthew by and hour.she has light brown curly hair with dark brown and red natural streaks with lavenderish blue eyes.Her eyes turn purple when she uses her powers.

Holly Emenia Yern

Born April 3rd,18 years old.She is a witch and she is really rude and mean.Has dirty blonde hair with hazel/blue eyes.They flash florencent blue when she uses her powers.has crush on Curtis

Curtis Arin Damien

Born January 23rd,18 years old.He is a wizard.He loves Ivory and is very protective of her.he is cruel and evil.He has light brown hair with light green eyes that turn yellow when he uses his powers.


Tyrann (unknown)

Born (Unknown),24 years old.He bit Mark when he was 21.Was born a werewolf.He has black hair with blackish brown eyes.He is a brown eyes.

Dakota Rennie James

Born July 5th,1830,20 years old when bitten.He is the head vampire.He has white hair and green eyes.

Sam Curon


Born September 8th,1940.Bitten when he was 19.2nd in charge Vampire.Has Dark brown hair and blue eyes.
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Re: Shadows

Postby ~Night and Darkness~ » Sun Jan 01, 2012 7:51 pm

And now to begin this story...again XDDDDD...but before I do I just wanna say that I have a Rp that has the same Idea and title so if you wanna check it out that would be cool..anyways lets us begin :D...
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Re: Shadows ~~A original story on Real life fantasy~~

Postby ~Night and Darkness~ » Sun Jan 01, 2012 8:41 pm

Chapter 1

The world that swirled around me was pitch black.Not a thing could be seen or heard.The smell of dirt and forest overpowering my nose and making me feel like snezzing.This strange place was cold and numbing,making me think that the worst had happened .Death.Even the word sent shivers down my...My back? did I even have a back or body anymore ?Did I even have shivers??? So many questions whirled around me then ,and I felt like screaming.One question in particular stayed with me though.Was I dead? I thought about this for while ,and then I realized I couldnt feel a thrumming against my chest where my heart was supposed to be.Its not like I could feel anything else anyways ,but not being able to feel my heart beat anymore,just chilled me to the bone.
Maybe I was dead.I thought about it again and again.Asking the question at least a thousand times before a small voice inside spoke up.I couldnt be dead ,otherwise I wouldnt even be able to hear those strange footsteps coming towards me.Wait! footsteps!!! I snapped out of my train of thought and payed more attention to my senses,which were telling me that indeed someone was coming towards me. "Damn it Seth! you killed them!"Yelled an deep angrey voice that was coming somewhere upahead to my left."No I didnt Mark! I swear! their hearts were beating when I left them!"Said a person that had to be the one called Seth.I heard an angry growl then shuffling and sticks breaking."Does it look like their still breathin?! the one right here is but this one aint!"Snarled Mark.Then something kicked me in my leg and a burst of pain splashed around inside of me,burning up my leg and spreading up to my neck and face.It felt like fire and I opened my mouth and screamed with pain.I heard them Jump back in shock and then they were yelling again."What the hell!"Said Mark with shock."Theres no possible way he could feel that...hes dead...his hearts not even beating so how can he still be...""Oh My God!Mark! You dont think that maybe...,"started Seth sounding frightened ,but Mark interupped."Yes I do! Now hurry! wrap him up in those blankets and run him as fast as you can to the old abandoned medical building! He can not be seen or heard so gag him! and hurry before we lose him!!!,"He yelled."But what about the other kid?!"Seth asked in a panicked voice."Dont worry I'll take him back to camp but Go! Go Now! I'll meet ya there for the operation!"he said.Then Seths arms were around me and I screamed even louder as the pain intensified.I felt like I was being torn in peices and burning! Seth shoved something in my mouth ,and my screams became a faint and muffled cry.I felt wind on my face and the sound of snapping branches and breathing filled my ears.Then I was laid on my back ontop of a cold and hard surface.Even that burned and my muffled screams became louder."Shhhhhhh..."Seth tried to soothe as he strapped me down in chains.I struggled against them my body trembling and shaking with pain and fear then I really was shaking and I started chocking on the gag.My eyes shot open to blinding bright eyes and My brain couldnt process anything anymore.I just felt...out of control and on fire.Mark appeared in the room with wide eyes as I chocked."hes having a seizure grab the shots and the tools now! we have to do this fast or he'll die!"Mark said taking charge.Seth nodded and pulled my gag out then went into another room.I couldnt focas and I couldnt even scream anymore.They shoved and IV into my skin and I shrieked as the cold liquid shoved into my blood system and made the burning worse.The heart moniter that was hooked up to me beat faster and faster."SETH HES DYING HURRY!!!"I could hear Mark yelling then my vision got dark again and I heard the heart moniter go into a never ending BEEEEEEPPPPPPPPPPPPP.....
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