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Re: Emo/sad Poetry.

Postby Octember » Mon Jul 18, 2011 3:52 pm

Why thank you! I love your poems on the other page!
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Re: Emo/sad Poetry.

Postby Xiphire » Mon Jul 18, 2011 3:53 pm

thank you! *blush!*
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Re: Emo/sad Poetry.

Postby Octember » Mon Jul 18, 2011 3:56 pm

XD
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Re: Emo/sad Poetry.

Postby Xiphire » Thu Jul 21, 2011 2:39 pm

You lied,
you always have,
Then you cried,
Just to get me back,
But I caught you with her,
So now it's my turn,
To break your heart,
and tear you apart,
You saw me cry,
I watched you die,
as my life fell apart,
I don't need you,
I don't want you,
So fly away,
And steal some other heart.
~I wrote this poem for my friend that recently broke up with her BF~
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Re: Emo/sad Poetry.

Postby Octember » Thu Jul 21, 2011 2:40 pm

Awesome!

~I wrote this poem because I'm creepy-minded~

This man is everyone's evil

He wears black
It hides no guilt
He has no guilt

He's playing games
With your life
Your life is his

He's non-discriminatory
No one is immune
This plague of him

He shares his pain
It's to his gain
This game of life

He rolls your dice
Makes you think twice
He's not on your side

Call him friend
Still meet an end
This enemy friend

You can't touch him
Respectable killer
Untouchable

He doesn't need dark
He can see light
But he doesn't want it

Steady hand and calm
He kills with a smile
But it's been this for a while

He loves the pain
But it's not the same
He's always had pain

This man is everyone's evil
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Re: Emo/sad Poetry.

Postby Xiphire » Thu Jul 21, 2011 2:44 pm

*shivers*nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^
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Re: Emo/sad Poetry.

Postby Dovahkiin » Thu Jul 21, 2011 2:44 pm

I like it! Meh, feel mean for saying that 3:
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Re: Emo/sad Poetry.

Postby Octember » Thu Jul 21, 2011 2:56 pm

?

Oh well ^^

The sky is red
The moon is black
Time to launch your last attack

Turn the keys
In your lock
They had you chained to stone and rock

Enemies hide
At your sight
You take their day and bring your night

You're the secret
Shackles and all
This is how the mighty fall

Did you hear
Cries of terror
You're deaf to any course of error

You have won
But chains will stay
Until you are needed another day
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Re: Emo/sad Poetry.

Postby Xiphire » Thu Jul 21, 2011 2:56 pm

wow i like that one alot!
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Re: Emo/sad Poetry.

Postby Octember » Thu Jul 21, 2011 3:00 pm

Thanks! It has some awkward bits, but it's still okay. :3
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