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Re: Random Poetry.-Any types welcome!

Postby Darleo » Wed Sep 28, 2011 9:21 pm

I like it too Silver~Moon, especially the second one.

Anyway, I usually suck at writing poetry but the person this is about really irks me so I churned out something that's actually half-way decent for once...

Liar, liar pants on fire,
You took a fall down a spire.

You hurt,
You break,
You suffer,
You fake.

You struggle with life,
Through all of your strife.

You give to the needy,
You'd never be greedy.

I don't know how you do not tire,
Liar, liar, you're on fire.
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Re: Random Poetry.-Any types welcome!

Postby Dovahkiin » Thu Sep 29, 2011 7:40 am

That's awesome :D Loved the first two lines :3
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Re: Random Poetry.-Any types welcome!

Postby Octember » Thu Sep 29, 2011 1:03 pm

I agree! C: Love it!
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Re: Random Poetry.-Any types welcome!

Postby voidsounds » Thu Sep 29, 2011 1:20 pm

While you sleep oh safe and soundly
Dark nightmares swirl around me
You have no idea what you've done to me


I only wanted you to stay strong and undaunted
But unwillingly you left me haunted
Oh, how I wish you could open your eyes and see


While I lay in the black midnight
You stay in bed and sit tight
Not giving a spare thought to the shattered


Hopefully you wake fully up to the world
And look at the future you unkindly hurled
Along with the one you didn't think mattered


And lucky me, now you hate romance
How will I ever regain our lost stance
If I can't even wrap my arms around you


Now hopefully you've learned your lesson
And put away the smith and wesson
To realize just how much I miss us, too


Now I can embrace and love you
Now I understand us two
It's a strange thing, love, but all that matters is that I love you.


Oh, I love this! I might make a song from this poem!
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Re: Random Poetry.-Any types welcome!

Postby Xiphire » Thu Sep 29, 2011 5:04 pm

woo go Darleo! your poetry's on fire!
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Re: Random Poetry.-Any types welcome!

Postby Darleo » Thu Sep 29, 2011 5:10 pm

Haha, nice... I see what you did there.
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Re: Random Poetry.-Any types welcome!

Postby Xiphire » Thu Sep 29, 2011 5:12 pm

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Re: Random Poetry.-Any types welcome!

Postby Alice Cullen. » Fri Sep 30, 2011 1:20 am

wow, Nightgaze!! Ur poetry rocks!
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Re: Random Poetry.-Any types welcome!

Postby voidsounds » Fri Sep 30, 2011 1:24 am

d'aww, thanks! :3
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Re: Random Poetry.-Any types welcome!

Postby Alice Cullen. » Fri Sep 30, 2011 1:32 am

:)
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