Random Poetry.-Any types welcome!

[Alice Cullen.]

I don't think ur allowed to post if ur 12 u have to be at least 13..

[Dovahkiin]

I don't think ur allowed to post if ur 12 u have to be at least 13..

You can post, but a mod has to check your post and they choose to allow it or not.

[sorryIquitCS]

Broken.
A poem by me.

When I was ten, you left my Dad.
Left all the fun we had.
You turned me into a makeup mess.
A barbie doll,
A satin dress.
I want jeans,
Give me skulls,
But no.
It's just pink and roses and gumdrops crap.
I gave up rhymes.
I'm to depressed.
I may dye my hair black,
I think I'll burn my dress.
Anything that will set me free.
That will repair the broken soul,
That is me.

[Chirai]

im horrible at poetry...any critiques?

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the love triangle;
in sick of it
all i want
is a love line.

the pattern of love
is cut inhalf,
she likes him
but him likes who?

i want love,
not a pony
or a doll
just give me one chance

I want a lover,
who i can talk to
about anything
even love

i want a friend,
who listens
who doesnt speak,
but only gives
hugs

i want him
my only love

i want you
and only you.

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I love you

[Chirai]

and...another...

when the cowboy is alone
sitting on his saddle throne
he ponders about his queen
with her shining eyes of green

he loves her so
she loves him no
but he always whispers in her ear,
"my little bluebird, my little dear"

He wants to let her free
but he cant bear to see
his little bluebird fly
up into the big blue sky

But he loves her all to much
to see her sad because its too much
so he opens his hands for all to see
he's willing to let his bluebird go free.

[sorryIquitCS]

Open your eyes,
Look at this scene.
You see the pain,
and yet you luagh.
And yet you clap.

They flip and twirl,
If they dont they are punished,
their skin is turned.
From soft to rough.

And yet you luagh,
andf yet you clap.
These creatures who have
Been taken from home.

How would you like it?
to be forced to dance,
Taken from your family,
Living in a cage?

And still you laugh.
And still you clap.
We need to stop this pain,
Not support it.

[voidsounds]

a spark in the heart
painful but nice
i saw you
you must be mine
you started the fire
that consumed me so
no other man
will have me
you must be mine
you are my fire
my spark in the heart
i must have you
you must be mine

[sorryIquitCS]

A teardrop.
Its spirals down,
silently.

What, I ask,
Will you do now?
As you watch the tears?

You stand alone.
You see my pain.
And then you leave.

But I will miss you,
Although you broke my heart
in two.

[Chirai]

would someone please critique mine?

[sorryIquitCS]

I like it :3