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Re: Emo/sad Poetry.

Postby Octember » Mon Jul 25, 2011 12:45 pm

Why thank you!
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Re: Emo/sad Poetry.

Postby Xiphire » Mon Jul 25, 2011 12:52 pm

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Re: Emo/sad Poetry.

Postby ~SNCastiel<3~ » Mon Jul 25, 2011 5:04 pm

Xiphire wrote:you can write a poem if you want i doesn't have to be sad or morbid.:)


:3 i cant write poetry sadly... my talent is drawing (even if im not the best at it haha!)
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HAD I the heavens' embroidered cloths, enwrought with golden and silver light,
the blue and the dim and the dark cloths of night and light and the half-light,
I would spread the cloths under your feet. But I, being poor, have only my dreams;
I have spread my dreams under your feet; tread softly, because you tread on my dreams.
~William Butler Yeats~
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Re: Emo/sad Poetry.

Postby voidsounds » Tue Jul 26, 2011 12:30 am

I sit and stare down
at the world below me
tugging at the rope
that still hugs my neck
threatening to choke me
once more.
But what do I fear?
Nothing, for I am dead
haunted by the rope that
still hugs my pale neck
drained of blood
and hope.
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Re: Emo/sad Poetry.

Postby Dovahkiin » Tue Jul 26, 2011 2:54 am

I still love Innocent Until Proven Guilty :D That's like my best poem I think.
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Re: Emo/sad Poetry.

Postby Alice Cullen. » Tue Jul 26, 2011 4:06 am

Sometimes I feel lonley.
My friend is a diary.
But it never writes back.
I pray, every night for a friend.
God seems to never listen.
I feel a sudden ping of jealousy.
I'm jealous of the other girls.
They all have friends.
I don't.
To ease my pain I ate.
And ate.
And ate until I could eat no more.
I feel to the heavens of god and asked,


Why?
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Re: Emo/sad Poetry.

Postby Alice Cullen. » Tue Jul 26, 2011 4:14 am

I didn't write this.
Her Only Friend....
She was only five
This is what happened
When she was alive…

Her dad was a drunk
Her mom was an addict
Her parents kept her
Locked in an attic

Her only friend
was a little toy bear
It was old and worn out
And had patches of hair

She always talked to it
When no one’s around
She lays there and hugs it
Not a peep of sound

Until her parents
unlock the door
Some more and more pain
She’ll have to endore

A bruise on her leg
A scar on her face
Why would she be
In such a horrible place?

But she grabs her bear
And softly crys
She loves her parents
But they want her to die

She sits in the corner
Quiet but thinking,
“Please God, why is
My life always sinking? ”

Such a bad life
For a sad little kid
She’d get beaten and beaten
For anything she did

Then one night
Her mom came home high
And the poor child was beaten
As hours went by

Then her mom suddenly
Grabbed for a blade
It was sharp and pointy
One that she made

She thrusted the blade
Right in her chest,
“You deserve to die
You worthless pest!”

The mom walked out
Leaving the girl slowly dieing
She grabbed her bear
And again started crying

Police showed up
At the small little house
Then quickly barged in
Everything quiet as a mouse

One officer slowly
Opened a door
To find the little girl
Lieing on the floor

It must have been bad
To go through so much harm
But at least she died
With her best friend in her arms
I cried at the end :(
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Re: Emo/sad Poetry.

Postby Alice Cullen. » Tue Jul 26, 2011 4:18 am

Nightgaze wrote:I sit and stare down
at the world below me
tugging at the rope
that still hugs my neck
threatening to choke me
once more.
But what do I fear?
Nothing, for I am dead
haunted by the rope that
still hugs my pale neck
drained of blood
and hope.

Did you copy me? :(
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Re: Emo/sad Poetry.

Postby Alice Cullen. » Tue Jul 26, 2011 4:32 am

I got this idea based off my favorite series, "The Clique" Its not that sad but... whatever.

I sworm down the halls wearing dark blue keds,
The Clique wearing designer clothes in shades of green, yellow and red.
I think "Wouldn't it be nice to be like them?"
I know this will never happen, my clothes break at the hem.
The kids fear them in their Jimmy Choo heels,
They move so quickly, its like their feet had wheels.
They insult people's fashion,
like its their passion.
They all like boys,
as if their toys.
They are the best!
They pass the test!

If only I were like them...
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Re: Emo/sad Poetry.

Postby East » Tue Jul 26, 2011 4:34 am

Pfft..wouldn't believe how many sad songs/poems I've written.

"Could I do
Anything to make
The world go back in time
For our lives' sake
Could I say
Anything to pass
This cloud of darkness
That's making us lose the last

Hold on tight, it's breaking
With all your might, it's taking
Away the thing that keeps us close

Shattered tears
Broken on the floor
Reflecting the light
From my eyes once more
Turning back
Wont help at all
Fate is fate
Just watch it fall

Should I do
What I really want
To make it all be simple
To get away this haunt
Should I show
The side of me that's hurt
To get out all my feelings
The ones I can't avert


Hold on tight, it's breaking
With all your might, it's taking
Away the thing that keeps us close

Shattered tears
Broken on the floor
Reflecting the light
From my eyes once more
Turning back
Wont help at all
Fate is fate
Just watch it fall

Where's the sunshine
Seems like only clouds
In the gray, the fog all day
Can't see anything
Hope wants to reach me
But my hand keeps slipping
Further every second

Heartbeat
Moment

Shattered tears
Broken on the floor
Reflecting the light
From my eyes once more
Turning back
Wont help at all
Fate is fate
Just watch it fall

Watch it fall..
Watch it fall..
Just let it fall..."

It has a major inner meaning ><
Every heart has | Characters | a story to tell.
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