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Re: Emo/sad Poetry.

Postby Xiphire » Sun Jul 24, 2011 12:19 pm

lucky you! :)
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Re: Emo/sad Poetry.

Postby Xiphire » Sun Jul 24, 2011 12:44 pm

Addy Nat wrote:I'll try. haha.

I'd h8 to see u when your hyper!


Mwaaaaaaahahahaha!Ask Octember she knows! :D :D
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Re: Emo/sad Poetry.

Postby Xiphire » Sun Jul 24, 2011 12:46 pm

Different


I'm different,
I'm unique,
I'm loyal
I'm neat,
That's what I'm told,
From all my friends,
that are always beside me until the end,
They like me,
They love me,
They want me,
They need me,
That's what I'm told,
From all my friends,
that are always beside me until the end.
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Re: Emo/sad Poetry.

Postby Octember » Sun Jul 24, 2011 1:05 pm

LOVE IT!

I've revisited that Mirror thing... but still no inspiration.

Mirror, mirror, on the wall
This is how the mighty fall
Break and take
And hate and hide
Why weren't you
On his side?
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Re: Emo/sad Poetry.

Postby Xiphire » Sun Jul 24, 2011 1:11 pm

OMG SSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD AWESOME COOL AMAZING EPIC!
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Re: Emo/sad Poetry.

Postby Octember » Sun Jul 24, 2011 1:17 pm

Well, I guess that's good then.... XD

The dancing guy in your signature: Hypnotizing me over and over again.... >.<
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Re: Emo/sad Poetry.

Postby Xiphire » Sun Jul 24, 2011 1:26 pm

thanks!
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Re: Emo/sad Poetry.

Postby voidsounds » Mon Jul 25, 2011 12:09 am

Death is coming,
You knew it all along
You greet him
As he sweeps you away
From the mortal world
Away, away from the sun
Into the deep black
Of eternity.
Castles of black marble
Spires rising against the grey sky
This is the final frontier
The Palace of Death.

I got insparation from "The Shadow Thieves", by Anne Ursu, when Charlotte goes into the Underworld and first sees the Palace of Hades. About those earlier comments, I could do a lot better poetry if I had the time; I was rushing. Compare them to my other poems.
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Re: Emo/sad Poetry.

Postby Octember » Mon Jul 25, 2011 12:35 pm

^ That is awesome!

Xiphire, I re-re-visited that Mirror thing.... bleh!
Mirror, mirror, on the wall
This is how the mighty fall
Break and take
And hate and hide
Why weren't you
On his side?

Win some, lose some
He's never lost
Eyes like ice and
Heart like frost
Stare too long and
You'll get lost

If dark's his friend
Then light's his love
Hands in the fire
Don't need black gloves
Eyes in the night
Aren't innocent of

Needs to win
So cheat the hand
It's just that way
He's made a plan
Always had no friend
He's met an end

Ashes to ashes
Dust to dust
His life was his
But he left at dusk

Mirror, mirror, on the wall
This is how the mighty fall
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Re: Emo/sad Poetry.

Postby Xiphire » Mon Jul 25, 2011 12:39 pm

That.Is.Just.So.Freakin.Awesome!
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