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Re: Between Enemy Lines ◊ Octember's Writ

Postby Octember » Thu Aug 11, 2011 5:07 pm

Yep. ^^
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Re: Between Enemy Lines ◊ Octember's Writ

Postby Xiphire » Thu Aug 11, 2011 5:14 pm

he better have!
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Re: Between Enemy Lines ◊ Octember's Writ

Postby Octember » Sun Aug 14, 2011 7:26 pm

You were
The stars
You're in
Her heart

You make her scream
She won't know why
You won't remember her

You were
So close
You were
Her star

You make her cry
You don't know why
She knows what you
Don't know

So tell her
You miss her
You are
Her star

But you're her star
But you're her scar
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Re: Between Enemy Lines ◊ Octember's Writ

Postby Octember » Sun Aug 14, 2011 7:45 pm

You turned your face to the sky
And it was gold
And it was red

He can't see the fire in your eyes
But he'll see it tonight
Stars killed by stars
And he'll see it tonight
He'll see it tonight

You fought for what you loved
And it was in your eyes
You never knew this feeling
And you know

He'll see it tonight
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Re: Between Enemy Lines ◊ Octember's Writ

Postby Octember » Sun Aug 14, 2011 7:53 pm

This is your life
Rejected, broken, misunderstood
No one knew
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Re: Between Enemy Lines ◊ Octember's Writ

Postby Octember » Mon Aug 15, 2011 3:47 pm

Hate me
I thrive on your ugly thoughts

Need me
Want my blood on the floor

I want you
To try and kill my sharp edged hate

I hope you
Die I'll bring you back again

I'll heal you
Knives can't take this feeling away

I'll be waiting
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Re: Between Enemy Lines ◊ Octember's Writ

Postby Octember » Wed Aug 17, 2011 12:33 pm

Listen
Can you hear
The man who never was

Lonely voices
Cold fingers
The man who never was

Broken glass
Hardened heart
The man who never was

Dark night
Lights flicker
The man who never was

Fading sanity
Now you're lonely
The man who never was

Hiding, hating
Watching, waiting
The man who never was
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Re: Between Enemy Lines ◊ Octember's Writ

Postby Octember » Sat Oct 08, 2011 2:42 pm

This is a combination of lines from three songs. Ignoring the music, the words themselves fit together nicely. I may do several of these.

You are the reason that I breathe
You are the reason that I still believe
I need you more than ever
But it's time to face the truth
I will never be with you


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Jai Ho - Pussycat Dolls
Total Eclipse of the Heart - Bonnie Tyler
You're Beautiful - James Blunt
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Re: Between Enemy Lines ◊ Octember's Writ

Postby Octember » Mon Oct 10, 2011 3:44 pm

The lights are on
But there's no one home

You're terrified
They'll be coming soon
Shaking in the corner
Of your darkened room

Squeeze your heart dry
Nothing left to lose
You're lying low
The only option to choose

Burning fire and
Breaking bones
Crack your own windows
Throwing stones

Remember how it went
It'll happen to you
Crying in the end
Not a thing you can do

But until then
Keep the door closed
The lights are on
But there's no one home

The lights are on
But there's no one home
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Re: Between Enemy Lines ◊ Octember's Writ

Postby Octember » Tue Jan 03, 2012 6:53 pm

We're a broken people living under loaded gun
You're guaranteed to run this town
And it can't be out fought
It can't be undone
It can't be out matched
It can't be out run

Say what you mean
Tell me I'm right
To symphonies of broken light
When I close my eyes tonight

When oceans bleed into the sky
Give me a sign
I want to believe

There's nothing wrong with just a taste of what you paid for


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The Catalyst - Linkin Park
The Ballad of Mona Lisa - Panic! At the Disco
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