Between Enemy Lines

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Re: Between Enemy Lines ◊ Octember's Writ

Postby Octember » Wed Jul 27, 2011 5:11 pm

Thanks ^^
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Re: Between Enemy Lines ◊ Octember's Writ

Postby Octember » Fri Jul 29, 2011 12:43 pm

This isn't finished, but I'm posting it anyway.

Tell me about yesterday
And why I wasn't there
Tell me about yesterday
Try and make me care

Tell me why I walk this road alone
And why my heart is made of stone
Tell me why I hurt and bleed
When loving you is what I need
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Re: Between Enemy Lines ◊ Octember's Writ

Postby Xiphire » Sun Jul 31, 2011 2:10 pm

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Re: Between Enemy Lines ◊ Octember's Writ

Postby Octember » Sun Jul 31, 2011 2:14 pm

I guess you liked that then... XD

It's kind of more lyrics, but this isn't just poetry, so yeah.
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Re: Between Enemy Lines ◊ Octember's Writ

Postby Xiphire » Sun Jul 31, 2011 2:31 pm

it still really good!
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Re: Between Enemy Lines ◊ Octember's Writ

Postby Octember » Sat Aug 06, 2011 1:46 pm

Shadow, shadow, take my hand
Whisper stories, make your plan
What cold night could give you life?
Heart like stone and eyes like ice?

From what distant skies you knew
You won't take me back with you
In what time are nightmares made?
When sky is teal and river is jade?
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Re: Between Enemy Lines ◊ Octember's Writ

Postby Octember » Sat Aug 06, 2011 1:53 pm

Mirror, mirror, on the wall
This is how the mighty fall
Break and take and hate and hide
Why weren't you on his side?

Win some, lose some, he's never lost
Eyes like ice and heart like frost
Memories, nightmares, all the same
Pointing fingers don't share this blame

If he could win he'd cheat the hand
It's just that way, he's made a plan
If stars would fall they'd make it last
Present to future, future to past

Ashes to ashes and dust to dust
His life was his but he left at dusk
Mirror, mirror, on the wall
This is how the mighty fall
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Re: Between Enemy Lines ◊ Octember's Writ

Postby Xiphire » Sun Aug 07, 2011 3:52 pm

oh oh! thats my fave! well one of them! XD
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Re: Between Enemy Lines ◊ Octember's Writ

Postby Octember » Tue Aug 09, 2011 3:18 pm

Thanks! I used it for English. ^^
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Re: Between Enemy Lines ◊ Octember's Writ

Postby Xiphire » Thu Aug 11, 2011 5:04 pm

did ya teacher like it!?!?!?!?
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