Between Enemy Lines

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Re: Between Enemy Lines ◊ Octember's Writ

Postby Octember » Sun Jul 03, 2011 6:37 pm

He can't tell you what he's really thinking
You know that some things can never change
But it can't stop your feeling sinking

Conversation never lasts so long
He can't tell you why he knows you'll fade
You know that there is something wrong

He can't tell you what he knows will happen
But you can guess and it scares you now
There's nothing either of you can do

You're fading
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Re: Between Enemy Lines ◊ Octember's Writ

Postby Octember » Mon Jul 04, 2011 7:06 pm

He won't listen when you plead to him
He doesn't care about what you think
If he had anything to say he would tell you
But he has nothing left to say

He sits in the dark
A hole in his heart
And death seems like his friend

He always thought things could stay the same
He never thought of what he always knew
But at night it all comes clear
If he'd noticed would she still be here?

He sits in the dark
A hole in his heart
And death seems like his friend
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Re: Between Enemy Lines ◊ Octember's Writ

Postby Octember » Wed Jul 06, 2011 6:51 pm

King of the World
It doesn't matter

On top of the world
He doesn't need your pearls
His life is diamond

He's walking alone
And he love hates it
He couldn't care more
But he doesn't care

If he could tell you anything
He would tell you nothing
King of the World
Don't even look his way

He doesn't lie and it's hate
He's never cried it's too late
So the silver won't touch
But he's found it's enough

If he would listen and hear
But he still doesn't care
He's not impatient, he's waiting
For too long, he was made for this

King of the World
He knows it matters
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Re: Between Enemy Lines ◊ Octember's Writ

Postby Octember » Sun Jul 17, 2011 12:57 pm

That man is proud
Pass him on the street
Sit near him on the bus
Don't even look his way
He doesn't care

That man is proud
Don't have to see it
He's always near
You couldn't tell
He's different

That man is proud
He makes your life lies
You can't tell
It's all the same to him
He's everyone's evil

That man is proud
He'll take your life
Break it and take it
Red hands in his pockets
That man is proud
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Re: Between Enemy Lines ◊ Octember's Writ

Postby Octember » Sun Jul 17, 2011 1:36 pm

This man is everyone's evil

He wears black
It hides no guilt
He has no guilt

He's playing games
With your life
Your life is his

He's non-discriminatory
No one is immune
This plague of him

He shares his pain
It's to his gain
This game of life

He rolls your dice
Makes you think twice
He's not on your side

Call him friend
Still meet an end
This enemy friend

You can't touch him
Respectable killer
Untouchable

He doesn't need dark
He can see light
But he doesn't want it

Steady hand and calm
He kills with a smile
But it's been this for a while

He loves the pain
But it's not the same
He's always had pain

This man is everyone's evil
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Re: Between Enemy Lines ◊ Octember's Writ

Postby Octember » Tue Jul 19, 2011 12:29 pm

The sky is red
The moon is black
Time to launch your last attack

Turn the keys
In your lock
They had you chained to stone and rock

Enemies hide
At your sight
You take their day and bring your night

You're the secret
Shackles and all
This is how the mighty fall

Did you hear
Cries of terror
You're deaf to any course of error

You have won
But chains will stay
Until you are needed another day
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Re: Between Enemy Lines ◊ Octember's Writ

Postby Octember » Sat Jul 23, 2011 4:21 pm

Casts his face into the stars to see them fall
It's hard to know if he's the baddest of them all

He's had chance to change but still you couldn't tell
Even though he knows it feels this way to ring death's bell

If the Sun would show her face you'd see him cry
Because he looks at her each day and wonders why

You can't make him turn away he wants her so
But she's left for the skies that made her go

He'll stand on cliffs where he was watched but no one stops
They all know that there's no hope for when he drops

They'll keep him here for even only one more day
Then he'll fall because that's his only way
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Re: Between Enemy Lines ◊ Octember's Writ

Postby Octember » Mon Jul 25, 2011 10:52 am

Mirror, mirror, on the wall
This is how the mighty fall
Break and take
And hate and hide
Why weren't you
On his side?

Win some, lose some
He's never lost
Eyes like ice and
Heart like frost
Stare too long and
You'll get lost

If dark's his friend
Then light's his love
Hands in the fire
Don't need black gloves
Eyes in the night
Aren't innocent of

Needs to win
So cheat the hand
It's just that way
He's made a plan
Always had no friend
He's met an end

Ashes to ashes
Dust to dust
His life was his
But he left at dusk

Mirror, mirror, on the wall
This is how the mighty fall
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Re: Between Enemy Lines ◊ Octember's Writ

Postby Octember » Mon Jul 25, 2011 7:58 pm

Did you try to keep her here?
But she's lost to the atmosphere
And is it good to be insane?
Just to take away the pain

Fire lives in your veins
Hold on to your heart's remains
Crawl away to your cave
This place will be your grave

If you have no reason for life
Stray away from your knife
Because you have no reason for death
So don't take that last breath

Someone needs you now
Don't wonder why or how
But do you even care?
You still wish she was here
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Re: Between Enemy Lines ◊ Octember's Writ

Postby Xiphire » Wed Jul 27, 2011 4:59 pm

Wow Octember!these are great!
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