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Between Enemy Lines

Postby Octember » Thu Jun 30, 2011 4:04 pm

Between Enemy Lines

There are voices in my head. Two are at war and one is dead.

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This is my thread for any writing that I can't put anywhere else. Thank you. c:
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Re: Between Enemy Lines ◊ Octember's Writ

Postby Octember » Thu Jun 30, 2011 4:27 pm

Raise the fire
Kill the stars
We're the ones that start the wars

Take the day and
Bring the night
She never wanted to fight this fight

Paint it red and
Paint it black
You’ll always have to watch your back

Hide the evidence
Hide away
We are going to make you pay

Apologise
For what you’ve done
It’s still not going to raise the sun

Apocalypse
Acid rain
Because you made her death in vain
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Re: Between Enemy Lines ◊ Octember's Writ

Postby Octember » Thu Jun 30, 2011 4:29 pm

One wears black
One wears white
They both live for the devil on bonfire night

One lives night
One can't sleep
They both missed heaven on the lonely steep

One tastes fear
One tastes blood
They both live cold on the godly flood

One knows bad
One knows good
They both know each other and where they stood

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Re: Between Enemy Lines ◊ Octember's Writ

Postby Octember » Thu Jun 30, 2011 4:30 pm

Black
Like the look in his eyes
Scarlet
Like the blood on his hands
Yellow
Like the light that he seeks
Grey
Like the stones in his pockets

White
Like the salt on the windows
Green
Like the bottle of tears
Silver
Like the chain unseen
Black
Like the hole in his heart
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Re: Between Enemy Lines ◊ Octember's Writ

Postby Octember » Thu Jun 30, 2011 4:31 pm

Breaks away
From something more
Waits with patience
Doesn't understand
Stares at you
Innocently
Can't move
Won't understand

And the fire comes
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Re: Between Enemy Lines ◊ Octember's Writ

Postby Octember » Thu Jun 30, 2011 4:32 pm

Gives anything
To roll that dice
Deal his cards
Win that game

But he's lost before
He's lost and he's stolen

Gives anything
To spin that wheel
Name his bet
Pick his hand

But he's lost before
He's lost and he's stolen

Gives anything
Not to lose
To bring her back
Take him instead
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Re: Between Enemy Lines ◊ Octember's Writ

Postby Octember » Thu Jun 30, 2011 4:34 pm

She died and he cried
Because she always thought he lied

He never thought
It was her he'd lose
But blood doesn't lie
She had to die
To change the days
To change his ways

She died and he cried
Because she always thought he lied

For the better
For the worse
Either way
The undertaker's day
Burn the sun
Blood has run

She died and he cried
Because she always thought he lied
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Re: Between Enemy Lines ◊ Octember's Writ

Postby Octember » Sat Jul 02, 2011 5:17 pm

Skeleton Man
Give her your hand
Take her away

Keep her safe
She's made a mistake
Never trust who you trust

It's been not long
SInce you met her
But nothing will change

Because Skeleton Man
He had to take her hand
Skeleton Man
Keep her safe
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Re: Between Enemy Lines ◊ Octember's Writ

Postby Octember » Sat Jul 02, 2011 5:43 pm

She's touching the flowers
He's watching her there
She's picking up stones
He's hoping she'll care

But the stars do not want
The light has to stop
She will not know who she is

She's walking sweet pathways
He's cautiously near
She's murmuring softly
Words he can not hear

The stars do not want
The light has to stop
She will not know who they were

And she falls
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Re: Between Enemy Lines ◊ Octember's Writ

Postby Octember » Sun Jul 03, 2011 12:18 pm

Did you stare into the sun
And did you make it to the moon
Where ever he will go
You know you'll follow too

But the sun gives to the night
And the moon wanes at the sight
You feel yourself hoping now
As he throws you his black shroud

When the night gives to the day
He's taken you away
There's nothing you can do
But let the darkness carry you
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