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by ~Night and Darkness~ » Sat May 28, 2011 7:41 am
INTRO
Okay hi guys Im new to this and yeah Im not really good at this on the computer but I am working on my writing and want to start writing on here to see if I could make it to being well ......good ,so critism is needed please and now I will write my story.......Or begin to that is.........^^Characters:Info:
Gabrial:Main Character 17 years old,Pics Page 1
Ivory:Witch 17 years old Page 2
Micheal:Best friend 17 years old,on page 2
Admara:Little sister 16 years old pics on page 1
Lore:Human Friend 18 years old page 2
Jack:Brother 16 years old twin of Admara page 2
Scarlet:Sister 17 Page 2
Mark:second in command 19 years old Page 3
Seth:Maker 20 years old Page 3
Tyrann:Pack leader 25 years old Page 3
Sam:Head vampire 19 years old Page 3
Dakota:Vampire 20 years old Page 3
Holly:Witch 18 years old Page 3
Matthew:Wizard18 years old Page 3
Curtis:Wizard 18 years old Page 3
CHAPTERS:
Proloug
Chapter 1 Made
Chapter 2 How?
Chapter 3 Im going to die?!
Continued chapter 3 page 3....
Chapter 4 trained
Proloug-
My heart beat faster as I ran through the woods in terror.Shooting arrows and trowing rocks in all directions not paying attention to who I hit.The wolves.I could hear their howls they were coming closer.Im almost there.Only 10 more yards and Ill make it.Just a little closer.I can see it now.Micheal.He there urging me on screaming my name.5 more feet.Is that a tug at my legs.Yes.They have caught me.

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by ~Night and Darkness~ » Sat May 28, 2011 9:17 am
Chapter 1-Made
Black the only color i could see now.Black darkness and nothing else.The silence rang in my ear over and over and over again.The smells of dirt and forest.Over powering. Strong.Something dripped down my neck and arm.It was cold,wet,and sticky.The numbing sensation taking hold of my body was a warning that tremendous pain was to come.I opened(or tried to open)my mouth,But it seemed like it was shut and unmoved.My heartbeat.What had happened to the sound of it thrumming against my chest?Am I dead?No I cant be.I was walking through the woods, thats all! and there were....wolves? Yes wolves!....Did they kill me?if they had why didnt I fight? Maybe I did and I lost. I cant remeber it though.How long has it been? 'I dont know' says a small voice from inside.At least something is functioning.The ringing stoped and footsteps maybe a few inches or feet away took over.I listened."Did you kill them!"Said a deep voice.Them? ..."No I bit them on the arm like you taught me sir."said a young nervous voice.Bit them?! What?!!! I was puzzled by that."Well then explain why this one!"...he kicked my leg...."Why this one has a bite mark on his neck???!!!" said the first voice angeredly."I....I.....I...lefttttttt....sir." said the second one quietly."Well now hes dead and thats your fault.." Said the first somberly.Me!I was not dead.I had felt it!I had felt the kick!That could only mean i had my feeling back....Crap I have my feeling back.right at that moment a burst of pain erupted from my neck and arm running through my body like the hungry flames of a fire licking away at the wood.I held my mouth shut with all the streghth I had until I couldnt Take it any longer and screamed.My scream pierced the silent air so loudly that the dead would have probably poped out of their graves and yell "What the heck!!!Shut Up!!!! Trying to sleep here!!!!"."what the hello!!!!!" said the first voice shocked."I thought you said that our bite and VP's bites cant mix or it would kill the host!!!"said the second paniced. "I did!!!!'Shouted the first coming to me and holding my arms down."Then what the hello is this!!!!!???"said the second grabing my legs."I dont know!!!! now help me get these guys out of here!!!!You take that one Ill take this one!!!!Now Hurry!!!".I felt him pick me up and screamed louder as another wave of pain shot through me burning me from the inside."Hurry Seth!!!!!!!!!"He yelled while running."I am Tyrann!!!!!! I am!!!!!!!!!" seth yelled back panicking.I was kicking and screaming the whole way there.The only sense that was still not working now was my eyesite,but that changed when they set me on a hard metal table next to some other person in a hopitial looking room.I was still screaming and i dont think i would ever stop.My body tugged at the chains as I was shaking like a crazed madman until some how they snapped from my hands and legs like a broken branch.Seth or Tyrann,shocked rehooked the chains to me and tried to place my bpdy still among the table.All of a sudden the shaken stopped and I dropped to the table like a dead fish.I had gone silent and the monitor that checked my heart went into a never ending beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp!
"Now Seth Now before its too late!!!" was the last word before everything went black.
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by ~Night and Darkness~ » Sun May 29, 2011 9:30 am
Like I said Im new to this whole thing and it woulld be nice just to have a commet here and then.On my behalf i think that stunk so I'll probably scratch this out and try again....
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What I'm starting: The second season of Stranger Things (Finally)
What I'm waiting for: Miraculous Ladybug season two
What I should actually be doing: Applying for scholarships and rewriting my Short Story
What I want to do: Edit my short story, Watch Stranger Things, Eat chocolate, and finish some puzzles.
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by ~Night and Darkness~ » Thu Jun 02, 2011 9:53 am
heres chapter 2
Chapter 2 how?
My eyes fluttered open to a dark hospital room."Gabe?" the voice sounded so familiar but I couldn't see the person in the dark.My eyes hadn't yet adjusted to the darkness yet."Are you awake?" The voice asked."yes."I croaked.My throught was so dry I could barley speak.Something moved in the shawdows."Who are you?" I asked searching the darkness.There was a figure of a man in the corner of the room."You dont know me?!" He asked suprised.The figure shuffled closer to the moonlight but not close enough that I could see him.'No..."I responded confused."Come closer to the light." I asked .he shuffled some and then stepped into the moonlight shining through my window.He was tall and young.He had Bright night blue eyes and shiny black hair that went across his forehead.His eyes had shawdows under them (probably because he hadnt really slept).He looked concerned."You dont remeber me at all?" he asked me again sitting on the bed now.I sat up a little bit."No."I said again.now that I could see him he looked familiar too.He frowned at me. I stared at him for a while thinking and thinking but I couldnt figure out who he was.I went back to a time that I remeber.Me and him (I think) were walking through the woods talking quietly."Oh come on Gabe you know she likes you shes had a crush on you for a while..."He said laughing."Thats so not true besides shes a year older than me...dont you find that disgusting?" I pursued."face it she likes you Gabe and she will most likely take you to senior prom" He said grinning."Micheal your just plain out wierd you know..." . Micheal? "Micheal!!!"I said out loud looking up at him.He grinned "Took you a while...I was wondering when you would wake up?"He said quietly."What happened?" I asked."You died" said a voice from the hall.Me and Micheal both looked at the door.A shawdow came in and turned on the lights.Another young man but older than Micheal walked in.He had brown hair with dark green eyes.Micheal smiled up at him."Hi Seth!"He said.Seth??? "Hi Micheal."He responded cheerfully.I just looked at him confused.He walked up to me and smiled."Hi Gabe.. glad to see your finally awake thought we had lost you"He said quietly a small smile on his face."Hi..."I said."So what do you mean by I died?" I asked sitting up a little higher.Micheals smile dropped."Hows your arm and neck?"Seth asked feeling my arm and changing the subject.I winced at his touch."Fine" I lied."Good maybe tommorow we can start your training..."he said nodding at my arm and neck."Okay......But that still doesnt anserw my..."."Youll need your rest first though so I should leave you for the night as should you micheal..." He said interrupting me and looking sternly at Micheal.Micheal nodded."But..."."Come Micheal he needs his rest...".And like that Micheal and Seth were both out of the dark room.I huffed angeredly.Why was he avoiding me? I thought.I would pursue him tommorow .I shut my eyes expecting sleep and found it to come an hour later,but it didnt matter.
The next morning when I awoke Seth was sitting in the corner this time sitting in a chair.Micheal was no where In sight."Wheres Micheal?"I asked sitting up."getting lunch..."he said cooly."Lunch!!!"I almost screamed."Yes lunch.you'v been asleep for a while Gabrial"He said matter-a-factly.I sighed"You said I died...how?" I asked hoping he would anserw me.He sighed too."Gabe Iv been trying to not anserw that...do you really want to know?"."Yes and why are you keeping it from me?" I asked."okay But we have to keep quiet about this I didnt want to tell you because Micheal was in the room and he doesnt know about this and second off because you just woke up" "Well you can tell me now" I said raising my eyebrows."Okay you probably dont remeber this but you and your friend Micheal were walking in the forest and you werent really paying attention to where you were going and you got really far in here and you saw me change from a werewolf into a human and you guys screamed and ran off and long story short I chased you both I bit you both and you both were knocked out then I left and came back found out you had been bitten by a Vp me and Tyrann thought you were dead till you started screaming from the venoms mixing then we dragged you here at the camp ground fixed you up and waited for you to wake up there!"He spoke this really quickly.I nodded."Whats a Vp?' I asked."A vampire sometimes we call them vamps or vps never by their name though." what happened to the vampire who bit me?" "Its vamp or vp...anyway we hunted him down and killed him...ripped him to pieces and burned him....serves him right to be crossing the boumdries."he said quietly glaring at the chair."Boudries???" "yes boundries we have boundries every mythical being does"He said still staring at the chair." "tell me more?" "well all the mythical beings are either withches ,wizards , werewolves(us),faries(but they live with the withches),Vampires and ZOMBIES." he said gravley."Zombies?"."Yes ZOMBIES...they were used during the great war that seperated us into groups...we didnt always be in boundries and seperated...now the ZOMBIES are locked up...never to be used again....we tried to burn them all once but these beings CANT DIE" he said a haunted look coming upon his face.it made me shiver."tell me about the great war" I pleaded.KNOCK!"open up its me Micheal!".I sighed."I'll tell you more later" Seth said quietly."Come In Michal!!!"Seth shouted to the door turning from me.Micheal opened the door with a dead elk in his hands."Lunch!!!"he said throwing it too me."Lunch?"me and Seth both said at the same time."I heard everything" Micheal said quietly shutting the door."Everything."
Its not as long as I wanted it to be but oh well

₩ᄐᄂᄃᄋϺᄐ Țᄋ Ϻע ᄂΙԲᄐHow I feel: Ready for eternal hibernation
What I just finished: Yona of the Dawn
What I'm starting: The second season of Stranger Things (Finally)
What I'm waiting for: Miraculous Ladybug season two
What I should actually be doing: Applying for scholarships and rewriting my Short Story
What I want to do: Edit my short story, Watch Stranger Things, Eat chocolate, and finish some puzzles.
What I am doing: Watching Disney Movies, Crying, and eating chocolate.

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by ~Night and Darkness~ » Wed Jun 15, 2011 4:30 am
Chapter 3

"Everything?"I asked shocked."Yes Everything..."Micheal said quietly staring at me wierdly."Why didn't you tell me!"Micheal yelled at Seths his voice breaking a bit.Seth stood up and but his hands up defensivly and was about to say something but Micheal cut him off."Why didn't you tell me what he was! You know he could be killed for being here the way he is!!!!"He yelled sounding really angry"I was just trying to protect him and everyone....."."NO!!!!!!!" Micheal yelled."What you did to him can't save him! even if he hides out here or anywhere they will find him and kill him!!!!!!!"He yelled angredly."Hes NOT SAFE ANYWHERE!"Mark yelled back"NOT in the real world NOT in this territory and NOT in the other territories!!!!!"He continued.Micheal began to shake"Their going to come after him and kill him!!!!!!!!!!!"He yelled.He shaked harder."Calm down Micheal"Seth said slowly backing up."DONT TELL ME TO CALM DOWN WHEN MY FRIENDS GOING TO DIE!!!!!!"Micheal yelled.Shaking so hard I thought he would blow up.I was suprised nobody could here this."MICHEAL CALM...".All of a sudden a really loud rip erupted from Micheal and strands of clothing ripped from him.Then a large Gray wolf jumped up from the ground and onto Seth.Seth with wide eyes moved out of the way just in time."Stop Micheal!!!!" Seth yelled ,But it was to late Micheal had already jumped at Seth.Time seemed to slow down all of a sudden in my eyes and Micheal was slowly jumping onto the terrified Mark.I jumped in front of Seth then time went back to its speed.Micheal jumped onto me instead and once he touched me he flew across the room.Seth stared at me with wide eyes."You were so fast!!!! How the...."He backed up."What?" I asked when I saw Seth's and Micheals terrified faces."Your eyes Gabe they flashed Dark black!" Seth said his eyes still wide."So......"I said quietly."Vamps eyes dont change colors and niether do ours..."Seth said backing up further from me."Whats that supposed to mean" I asked confused.Micheal limped towards me and looked up at me with eyes full of confusion and fright.I looked back down at him."Gabe your not just half vamp and half werewolf..."Mark said a haunted look on his face."Well then what am I!" I yelled."You may be part evey being......"Seth said staring at the floor with that expression again.Micheal stared up at me with shocked and terrified eyes."What does That mean!!!" I yelled frustrated.Seth sat on his chair."Your not safe anywhere Gabe.....you not safe here...If they find out what you are they'll come for you and kill you for your blood...."Seth said quietly."WHO CARES ABOUT MY BLOOD WHAT DO I HAVE TO DO!!!!!"I Yelled."Gabrial your blood is IMPORTANT!" Seth said sternly looking up at me."YOU ARE now the most powerful being the world has since the ruler!"He said looking back down."What can I do about it?!" I asked quietly."Did you know that the ruler was killed for his blood...?"Seth asked randomly."No..."I anserwed."Thats whats going to happen to you..." he said."You mean Their going to drain me of my blood then throw me in with the zombies like the old ruler?!" I asked ."Yes." he anserwed putting his hands in his hair.Micheal whimpered."Theres nothing I can do can I ?"I asked looking down at my feet."The only thing you can do is stay alive.." Seth said getting up and putting a hand on my shoulder.I stared at my feet."We need to train you...the more you train the stronger you get...and the harder it is for anyone to kill you."He said quietly nodding his head and walking back to his chair.Micheal nodded his head too and sat besides Seth."I promise to teach you everything I know"Mark oathed then he sat down.The room went awkwardly quiet."EAT." Mark said to me breaking the silence.I shrugged and picked up the elk and held it to my mouth.I was so hungry but was I willing to eat a deer.My stomach rumbled in a response of yes. I Breathed in the sweet secnt of blood and opened my mouth.Another secnt caught my attention.The secnt was Micheals.I stared at Micheal and licked my lips.'NO!' I thought 'hes your friend NO!' I felt an urge to bite him but pulled it aside and took a bite of the elk.The moment my teeth hit its skin My fangs sprang out from my mouth and I began to suck in the sweet blood.It was so good!!! I gulped down more and more until it was emptyless.I wanted more.I then turned to Micheal and I thirst for his blood.I thought of pulling him towards me and drinking him dry.Then I heard a yelp and looked at my hands and found that it was Micheals neck.I stared at him with longing as his paws and legs kicked and struggled to get out of my grasp."Gabe let him go!!!!" Seth yelled getting up and trying to pull my hands from his neck.Micheal yelped and barked.It was as if I was dazing and when I realized it was Micheal I let go and ran to the wall terrified of what I had done.Micheal layed on the floor as a human gasping for air and shivering he had shorts on that looked really streached out and there was a bruise around his neck where my hands were gripping him.the bruise was black a dark blue."Im so sorry Micheal! Im so sorry!"I yelled putting my hands in my hair and ripping some hair out."Im so sorry
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What I just finished: Yona of the Dawn
What I'm starting: The second season of Stranger Things (Finally)
What I'm waiting for: Miraculous Ladybug season two
What I should actually be doing: Applying for scholarships and rewriting my Short Story
What I want to do: Edit my short story, Watch Stranger Things, Eat chocolate, and finish some puzzles.
What I am doing: Watching Disney Movies, Crying, and eating chocolate.

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