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Re: Bella The Brave

Postby happysam09 » Sun Jun 12, 2011 1:06 pm

no, im serious! she is sooo loud!
MAAAAAAHHHHH!!!! she is even louder then the last loudest! (mah other baby, boy.) omg, so annoying.....grrrrrrrrrrrrrr
can't really sleep at night knowing she's my alarm clock with no off mode......
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Re: Bella The Brave

Postby Toxic Hunter » Sun Jun 12, 2011 1:49 pm

LOL that's my SIS she calls me every night saying she can't go to sleep!!! :D
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Re: Bella The Brave

Postby happysam09 » Sat Jun 25, 2011 12:39 pm

Hiya! Sorry for the wait. My computer data got scrambled through all the storms my town has been having! Right now, I'm trying to find my story. The next chapter should be out sunday (hopfully). I understand you've waited forever for the next chapter, but I'm trying my best, Im only one person! thank you for understanding! XD

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Re: Bella The Brave

Postby happysam09 » Mon Sep 12, 2011 11:44 am

Sorry it took forever guys, I've been super busy. But I promise, the next chapter will be out next week.

(Chapter 3)

Josh and I traveled for an hour before I started complaining.
“I’m hungry. I’m tired. I’m thirsty. I’m bored.”
“Yeah? Well, I’m gonna kill someone if ya don’ shut up!” Josh snapped.
I quieted down after that.
We walked for 10 miles. “We need to lighten the load.” Josh said.
“Huh?”
“Drop the crud.”
“Bu- but the food! The sleeping stuff. The extra clothes!”
“If you’re gonna whine the whole trip…I’m gonna drop you in a ditch!”
“Okay, okay. Geez!”
We walked longer, I struggled to keep up with Josh…
Josh found some money on the sidewalk. “Let’s get something to eat.” he said. We went into a little diner. We were seated, we only found twenty dollars in the two hours that we walked. We only bought small choices.
“Welcome to ’Louie’s Chicken’. How may I help you?” the waitress asked.
She was pale skinned, a red head, too. She said her name was ‘Cynthia.’
“Yeah, a double cheeseburger, hold the mayo.” Josh said.
“And for you?” Cynthia asked in a kind voice, too kind. It made me suspicious.
“I’ll have a…Salad, please.”
“Okay, I’ll be right back with that!”
That voice, so suspicious…
“Don’t you think the waitress is a bit suspicious?” I asked Josh.
“Yeah, a little…” He said.
She soon came back with our meal. “Enjoy!!!” she squealed in a really high voice. I held my ears when she hit that note…
“Sam, she’s staring to freak me out, let’s get outta here, fast!” Josh said.
I called the waitress over. “Two boxes please.”
“Okay! P.S. You’re lucky to have a hottie like him to be your boyfriend.” she said. “What?!” from that point it was just a jumble of yells and screams, Josh threw a few punches, some kicks….my food! We ended up finally getting out of there, by that I mean someone called the cops, and we were dragged out. We were on our way to the Station….
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Re: Bella The Brave

Postby chibi unicorns23 » Mon Sep 12, 2011 12:12 pm

OMG your story is awsome!!! i'm makeing up a story to with a friend when it gets out tell me if you like but your story is way better!!!
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Re: Bella The Brave

Postby happysam09 » Wed Sep 14, 2011 10:11 am

Thank You!!!!!!
Send me links to your story! I'm looking forward to reading it! All of them in fact, I have had other people that told me they were writing stoies, good luck to you, and everybody!
I will try as hard as I can to get the next chapter out soon. I have tons of homework almost everynight....I might put the story on a flash drive and work on it in my spare time. Thank you so much for all of your patience! I hope I haven't lost my fans.



[size=200]Remembr: Just send me a link to your story and I will try to read all of them! :D :D :D
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Re: Bella The Brave

Postby happysam09 » Sun Sep 18, 2011 5:28 am

Yes! I got it done. I'm on my way to my friends house, so I should be on a lot. I'm so lucky I got this done. I'll try to get every chapter out over a weekend. Thanks for waiting. I hope you enjoy!!! :D

(Chapter 4)
“Why would you kids throw food, and punch and kick people for no reason?” the cop asked.
“She said I was dating him!!!!” I screamed at the cop.
“Don’ make me taze you!”
“Whatever.”
“What she is trying to say officer, is that we aren’t dating. And when she said that, it ticked us off.” Josh said to back me up. I had never heard him talk like that before… it was always, ‘Listen up, I did it cuz I wanted to! Step off, man!’ But this was unlike him to be so polite.
The cop, Charlie, let us go. I guess Josh made him think that it was all part of growing up, that kids learn from their mistakes. And they do….just, not always. Because while looking for the criminal that killed Joshes father…when we went to eat we always got in fights. And this one cop, didn’t let it slide…His name was Ben. This guy was a real jerk.
We were in a prison cell. “What the heck did you two think you were doing? Ya think you can jus’ walk in a restaurant and say you got no money, then ya steal da food? Unacceptable!” He yelled.
Ben just kept going and going. I tried to stop him while the endless talking was in session. He quickly turned and pointed a gun at me. “What did you say?” he asked.
“I…uh….I said…” I stumbled, I think he was gonna shoot me and kill me.
“She said ‘Can you stop talking!’ Now here’s what I say…You-”
“Kid, you need to hush up and lemme tal-”
“No. You let me talk. Shut up and use the thing YOU call ‘listnin’ holes’.
We are only 14 yr old, well I’m 15, but we are only teens. Teens do things, and they aren’t always good things. But we really need to go, I have to go look for someone important!” Josh finished.
“You ain’t gonna play no mind games on me!” Ben hissed, he shot Josh, it just skinned him though…but it did get him in the arm. Josh grabbed his arm and dropped down to the ground, he howled in pain. I knelt down beside him. “What is wrong with you?!” I screeched. He then pointed the gun at me. I was bursting with fury! I rammed into the cell door. Again. Again. Again. I felt the screws giving out. Ben just chuckled in what he thought to be a failed attempt. I knocked down the door somehow. It smacked right down on Ben. He shot all around. “Come on Josh!” I hollered.
He raced out holding his arm.
We were two blocks down when Ben showed up. He pointed a gun at us again, no surprise on that. “Game. Over.” he cocked the gun, aimed…I wish I hadn’t left Bella at home. Josh had a, ‘think fast’ moment. He yanked his pocket knife out. And there we were, kind of like in a freeze frame, in the alley one gun at us, a knife at him. ‘Game Over’, I thought that through for a moment. “Game Over!” I shouted. Ben looked confused. “Josh, remember when you were little, Game Over. You hate game over’s. Battle of Ataray! Your favorite game. Game Over.”
Josh remembered. “Not today.” he slowly said. He did his signature move he always did on video games when he one, just as Ben made a shot…
Flying bullet, flying knife…
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