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Bella The Brave

Postby happysam09 » Fri May 27, 2011 10:55 am

Hello! This story is about my pygmy goat, Bella. She is really small, black with white ears, and the cutest thing you’ve ever seen!
I’ll post new chapters, whenever I have time. Probably the weekends, you’ll be seeing more. Feel free to PM me comments, or post them. Warning! If you post them, I might get really confused and the story will be thrown off track! If you want to be in the story, or if you want one of your CS or maybe at home pets, pm me. I’ll give you the credit for your pets! J
I call this story, “Bella the Brave” because before I got her, her mommy died. She was bottle fed, and could never find the herd. Another goat, Itsy-Bitsy, she always helped Bella find them! She would run around a place she didn’t know, just to find the herd! Itsy-Bitsy might be in the story too! She looks like Bella, but she’s bigger. This story is fiction! But Bella is real!!!
(I’ll use the name, “Sam” for “I” because, Sam is in my username.)

Bella The Brave
By: happysam09

Bella and I were strolling through town. “Hey Bella!” the people would call. I would wave and Bella would do a small yelp. I saw some trouble in a nearby alley. A girl was cornered in between five boys. Two times her size! The girl was crying, kinda bleeding too. The large boy, the leader I’m guessing, he said something to the girl.
“Leave her alone!” I yelled. The boys turned to me. I felt a little stupid.
What! “Leave her alone?” Why would I say something so stupid?! I thought to myself.
“What! You think you can come down here, and tell me what to do?” the leader hollered.
“I’m telling’ you right now, leave her be!” I answered as strongly as I could.
“Do you know who you’re messing with?!”
“I don’t need to, as long as I know I can beat you up!”
At that moment, he swung his fist at me. It hit my cheek, hard. I yelped in pain. The boy chuckled. Out of nowhere, Bella swooped in and kicked the boy in the face! For my little baby, that was a hard kick! You could here the boy’s jaw snap a little! The others stared in amazement. “Get…that….goat!” The leader mumbled, through his bloody mouth.
Another boy picked up Bella and punched her! “Hey! That’s my baby! Don’t be punching my baby girl!” I screamed. “Fine.” the boy said with a filthy grin on his face. He put Bella down and kicked her!
“Oh my god. You’re gonna get it now!” I screamed loudly. I kicked his shin and then punched his face. Bella crawled behind a dumpster, bleeding bad. She would normally help, but she was hurt, bad.
Two other boys held down the small girl, the last came to fight me too!
I was being pounded! I was down on the ground being punched and kicked.
I recognized one of the faces. Josh. My old friend Josh. He’s not my friend anymore. One day, he went crazy and stabbed me. I still have the scar. On my stomach, too.
“Josh!” I yelped pitifully. Josh stopped kicking and looked at me. He told the others to stop too. “Sam?” he asked bending over to see my face. I moaned. He grabbed my hand and pulled me up. “Hey guys! This is Sam. The girl I’ve told you about!”
The boys nodded and shook hands with me. I think Josh told them that we’re still friends. They apologized for hurting me so badly. Gosh, I was bleeding form head to toe, almost. My face and stomach, legs, hands, all those were bloody. The boys pulled Bella out and handed her to me. They shoved the girl to me too. They told me to get lost. I shrugged and walked the girl home.
When I got home, I patched Bella and I up. She did a small, “Mah?” as she always did. My parents were out for the month. A month?! They better have a good reason! I thought. Bella walked toward the door, then she trotted out the doggy door. “Where are you going?” I asked her, I walked out the door to see her in a full run down the street! I raced after her.
She ran to the old cemetery. At night. (Ironic, huh?)
She stood on a headstone. “What?” I asked her. “Mah!” Bella yelled jumping and stomping on the tomb. I bent down to read it. “Andrew Blounter, 1936-2009.” I looked at it, puzzled.
When Bella did these things, she usually led me to something useful. I’m not so sure this time….Yes I am! “Wait a second,” I began to say. “Andrew was Josh’s father! Yes, I remember! It was all over the news! ‘Boy kills father in stunning rage!’ That’s right, he ran away after that! That’s probably how he ended up with the gangsters. He’s an orphan now. You wanna help him, don’t you. You know he’s capable of so much more.” I asked Bella.
She did a small mah, in approval.

(next chapter will be coming soon!)
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Re: Bella The Brave

Postby ➳ hoot » Fri May 27, 2011 10:18 pm

Cool ^^
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Re: Bella The Brave

Postby happysam09 » Thu Jun 02, 2011 12:03 pm

working on next chapter now... :D
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Re: Bella The Brave

Postby Smitty » Sat Jun 04, 2011 12:35 pm

Wow thats good! :thumbup: Can't wait for next chapter:) good luck :D
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Re: Bella The Brave

Postby Toxic Hunter » Sun Jun 05, 2011 4:48 am

OMG best thibg i ever read :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
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Re: Bella The Brave

Postby happysam09 » Tue Jun 07, 2011 12:19 pm

omg! you guys are so nice. the next chapter should be coming out soon. really soon. (dumb school, dumb stupid un-needed sitter! i would like to sit on HER!) [getting out my anger... sorry] yeah, should be out this weekend.
hey, everybody, thanks for taking the time to read this! you all rock! XD
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Re: Bella The Brave

Postby happysam09 » Fri Jun 10, 2011 7:19 am

((AH-HA! I did it! Chapter 3 should be here sooner then you think!))
(Chapter 2)

I nodded. “Well, lets see if we can find and talk to him.”
Bella ran around in circles. We ran down the street. “Bella, I think this is bad. I mean, we’re in a town, that has gangsters, and people who want to kill other people. And some pretty weird rumors…” I said.
Bella stopped running and shot a stern look at me. “Ok, ok. Fine, but if we die…I blame you!” Bella rolled her eyes.
“Yeah! And stay out!” a voice called. A boy rushed out of another alley. I grabbed his shirt. “What is it?” I asked. “*Huff* It’s *huff* It’s J-Jos-ahh” *THUD* He fainted. “Typical.” I moaned. Josh, I knew who it was. “Josh!” I called. “What do you want. Can’t you see I’m busy?”
“Busy? You’re sittin’ on a trash can humming till your lips go numb!” I snapped. He got up ready to punch me. I covered my head and closed my eyes, expecting pain. He looked down. “Who’s this?” he asked, picking up Bella. I gasped. “Put her down!”
“I just wanna look at ‘er.”
“Yeah, well you looked enough last visit!”
“No, but that was when I had those orders. I’m alone now. And, just because I act mean when with my posse, doesn’t mean I don’t have a heart or feelings.” he said. “Be really careful! Her name is Bella, she’s my pygmy goat.” I said. He nodded. “Pygmy. What does she eat?” Josh asked.
I snatched Bella. “Josh, why did you kill your father?”
“Got tired of him. Got boring.” he stammered.
“Hmm, well. We’re still friends, right?” he nodded. “Well, what happens when you get bored with me? Will I be your next victim?”
He snapped then. Josh grabbed Bella, now he knew how much she meant to me. He ran and ran and ran. “BELLA!!!!!!!” I screamed. Itsy-Bitsy came down the corner. “Itsy? Is that you?” I asked, drying my eyes.
She did a ‘mah’ and ran. I followed. She ran up a ladder and jumped across a building. “Whoa.” I murmured as I followed. She pointed with her nose where I should jump. “Are you crazy?! I’m not jumping down there!” I yelled. Gosh, 50 feet down, no way! Itsy-Bitsy ran behind me and head butted me down! “Ahhhhhhhh!!!” I landed on Josh’s shoulders. “Give me my Bella!!!!” I hollered. He screamed and punched me off. Bella was infuriated! She bucked and kicked and butted until she was in my reach.
He was on the ground now crying. “I- I didn’t kill my dad!” He said. “What?! Bu- but the news! The evidence!”
“All lies! A robbery at my house is what happened. Dad told me to stay in the closet. He got up to stop the jerk. And he shot my dad!” He bawled.
I came over closer to him, I comforted him. Josh cried for a long time.
“Now what?” I asked a little bit after midnight, when Josh had calmed down. “I’ve been wanting to get revenge on that jerk.” he said.
“Ok then. Let’s go get him and teach him a lesson!” I declared.
“Wait, wait, wait, wait! You can’t even throw a good punch!” Josh said.
“I broke a guy’s nose!”
“Yeah, but you need to break something important!!!”
“A nose is important!”
“Yeah, but would you rather have a broken nose, or a broken arm?”
“Nose…I see your point.”
“Let’s hit the gym! But don’t break your fist while hitting it.” Josh teased.
We did some exercises, then some practices, then real punches.
“You’re ready, well close enough…” Josh declared.
Then we packed bags, gathered info., brought cash, and some other crap.
We soon set off on our epic journey to find the killer.
“Uh, do you really think we should be trying to injure or damage a little, to a full grown man robber? With a gun!!” I asked.
“Yeah, wait…do you have a gun?”
“No.”
“Do you have any weapon?”
“No.”
“Nothing?”
“Well, I do have a pocket knife…”
“That might do, if we get the gun out of him hands fir- hold on… We don’t even know where this guy is!!!”
“Well, my parents are gone for a month… If we walk a certain amount of miles, we can cross over half of the U.S.!”
“Yeah, sure ok.”

So we set off.

(next chapter, already on its way!!)
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Re: Bella The Brave

Postby Toxic Hunter » Fri Jun 10, 2011 10:23 am

LOL awesome! i might right a story!! that means i'm ethier following your footsteps, or i've been inspiered. it's probaly both!!!! :)
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Re: Bella The Brave

Postby happysam09 » Fri Jun 10, 2011 11:36 am

thanks! Bella says thanks too! (although, she says it too much. sometimes i have to yell 'shut up!' ) XD
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Re: Bella The Brave

Postby ➳ hoot » Fri Jun 10, 2011 2:43 pm

Hahaha!
You've GOT to add me to the stalkers X3
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