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Re: Silent Hills Academy for the Gifted

Postby shala95 » Sun May 22, 2011 2:52 pm

loving it Eve!!!!
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Re: Silent Hills Academy for the Gifted

Postby Llamalicious » Sun May 22, 2011 8:04 pm

This is amazing..I want more!<3
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Re: Silent Hills Academy for the Gifted

Postby Fizzlebee » Mon May 23, 2011 7:49 am

Thanks guys! ^-^ My idea is pretty intense but I'll tell you a small part of it. A masquerade party. I can't tell you what happens, though.

Beeep Beeep Beeep! My obnoxious alarm clock jolted me awake and I stumbled around my room, opening drawers and pulling clothes out. I dressed quickly, pulled on some flip-flops, and grabbed a beach bag for my books. "Er, hair," I muttered right before my door. I walked into my bathroom and brushed my hair back into a smooth ponytail, and added a small, blue headband to match my outfit. There was a knock on my door and I opened my door to see Anna and Morgan standing there. "Ready?" Anna asked. I nodded and we went to Kristen's room and gathered her. Then we walked to the school, chatting about our classes. I had Biology, History, Calculus, 3-D Art, Chorus, Language Arts, and German. The small number of students defiantly made school much better than at home. There were more of my friends in my classes, less students in classes, and a lot less students in the hallways. I was walking from Art to Chorus when Nick and Joey caught up to me. "Hey, do you know where the Bio room is?" Joey asked. "Yeah, down this hall and to the left, it's room 14," I answered about to enter the Chorus room. "Thanks, see ya," he said, and raced down the hall. Nick and I walked in to find Morgan and Ben already in the room. "Hey, we're all meeting at the dock after school," Morgan said, quietly. "Awesome, I'll be there," I replied, just as the teacher walked in.
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Re: Silent Hills Academy for the Gifted

Postby standardpoodleluv » Mon May 23, 2011 12:37 pm

Masquerade party? Hmmmmmm
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Re: Silent Hills Academy for the Gifted

Postby Fizzlebee » Sat May 28, 2011 8:16 am

Short post to be finished later. D:

Ten more seconds..........yessss. The final bell rang and I rushed out the classroom door. I jammed the books I needed into my bag and dropped the others off at my locker. I walked out of the school and into the dorm building. Inside my room, I flung my bag onto the small couch and hunted for my swim suit. I slipped into my suit and grabbed my towel. Almost running to the pier, I couldn't suppress the suspense inside me. We were going to swim then decide what t do about the hole today. Ryan was already at the pier and I slowed down. "Beat you," he teased. "Dang, I thought I was flying along," I laughed. Morgan came shortly after, and Joey right after her. "Okay, 4 more people then," I said.
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Re: Silent Hills Academy for the Gifted

Postby DJ Savvy » Sat May 28, 2011 2:06 pm

OMG! I am on the edge of my chair and I am begging you to write more. I might die if you don't. I need you to make a book out of this when you get a little older that way I can read it over and over again so that I can learn how to be such a great writer!
AAAAAAAAAAAAAH! I just love it so much I had to scream.
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Re: Silent Hills Academy for the Gifted

Postby Fizzlebee » Sat May 28, 2011 2:18 pm

:O Thank you so much! ^^ Feel free to PM me any time.

The rest of the group arrived and we stood on the dock, arguing over who should go first. In the end, the guys ended up pushing us girls in first, but I managed to grab Ben and drag him in too. We laughed and splashed the three guys remaining on the dock. They finally got in and we had a great time, swimming and talking. Then Morgan brought up the hole in the ground, and we all stopped talking. "What are we going t-," I started, but Nick stopped me. "It's not safe to talk about here," he warned. Soon after we left the beach and walked to the meadow. The were no watchtowers near here, and the tall grass hide us from sight. "Tonight at 12:30 we should meet back here," Anna suggested. I nodded. "We should at least try to explore the tunnel a little tonight," I said. "So it's settled then, 12:30" Kristen asked. "Yup," answered Ryan. "Let's hope that all goes well tonight," whispered Joey.
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Re: Silent Hills Academy for the Gifted

Postby DJ Savvy » Sun May 29, 2011 1:19 am

AAAAAH!
I had to scream again.
Write More!
Write More!
Write More!
Write More!
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Re: Silent Hills Academy for the Gifted

Postby Astraia » Sun May 29, 2011 3:06 am

This story is really good. Can't wait to read more!
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