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Re: Silent Hills Academy for the Gifted(Indecisive about fut

Postby Fizzlebee » Tue May 17, 2011 9:34 am

Thanks! ^-^ I think I'm too young to be taken seriously anyways though.
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Re: Silent Hills Academy for the Gifted(Indecisive about fut

Postby Fizzlebee » Tue May 17, 2011 1:36 pm

I think I'll just keep the title.
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Re: Silent Hills Academy for the Gifted(Indecisive about fut

Postby standardpoodleluv » Tue May 17, 2011 2:28 pm

Where? Me no understand!!
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Re: Silent Hills Academy for the Gifted(Indecisive about fut

Postby Fizzlebee » Wed May 18, 2011 8:45 am

Sorry, wrong thread, I changed it.
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Re: Silent Hills Academy for the Gifted(Indecisive about fut

Postby Fizzlebee » Wed May 18, 2011 2:29 pm

The stars were bright, and the sky was a deep blue color as we walked along the empty coastline. Everyone else was still night swimming, but we were talking and planning. My hair whipped my face as the wind blew by. I shivered and suggested that we head back to the dorms. "Nah, we still have two hours until curfew," objected Joey. Suddenly, Kristin tripped over something and went sprawling. Ben and Ryan were at her side instantly, and the rest of us quickly tried to help her up. "Oww, no, let me sit down for a minute," she exclaimed. I looked around for what had tripped her, and was about to give up when I found a hole. I cleared away the leaves and grass, and gasped. The hole was enormous! It was about four feet in diameter, and didn't seem to end soon. "Guys, come look at this! Kristin must have hit the edge with her foot. It's a wonder that she didn't fall in it!" I called to them, motioning frantically with my arms.
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Re: Silent Hills Academy for the Gifted(Indecisive about fut

Postby standardpoodleluv » Wed May 18, 2011 4:44 pm

Oooooooo mysteryious hole
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Re: Silent Hills Academy for the Gifted(Indecisive about fut

Postby steadyasthestars » Wed May 18, 2011 6:06 pm

wow this is a really cool story i love it!!!! :) :) :) :D :D :lol:
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Re: Silent Hills Academy for the Gifted(Indecisive about fut

Postby CounttheStars03 » Thu May 19, 2011 7:04 am

I ♥ this story!!!!! It is soo amazing! I dont think you should change it to an RP cuz you are an amazing writer. And like standardpoodleluv said: mysterious hole! I wonder what's gonna happen.
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Re: Silent Hills Academy for the Gifted(Indecisive about fut

Postby Fizzlebee » Thu May 19, 2011 9:23 am

Thanks guys! ^-^ Unfortunately, I'll be on a class trip up North on Friday and Saturday, so I won't be able to post then.
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