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Re: Silent Hills Academy for the Gifted

Postby SkyeInfern0 » Fri May 13, 2011 5:24 am

This story is amazing!
Please write more.
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Re: Silent Hills Academy for the Gifted

Postby ZombiePoodle » Fri May 13, 2011 12:26 pm

Amazing! Absolutely love it! ^^
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Re: Silent Hills Academy for the Gifted

Postby Fizzlebee » Fri May 13, 2011 3:13 pm

:shock: Wow, I'm glad you like my story. I won't be able to continue until Friday, however, because for some reason or another, my teachers decided to make a bunch of projects due this week. :thumbdown: I'm dying of sleep deprivation. D: I hope to be able to continue this weekend. Thank you so much for your comments!
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Re: Silent Hills Academy for the Gifted

Postby Fizzlebee » Sat May 14, 2011 7:21 am

To outsiders, we must have looked like a sad bunch. Ben's wild hair was sticking up everywhere; Morgan's amber hair was sticking to her face and her Michael-Jackson-style hat was soaked. Joey's usually straight hair was now plastered on his forehead, while my toffee-colored hair was so wet that it looked dark brown. Kristen's dark curls were drooping, and Anna's hair was falling out of her ponytail. It was all thanks to Bruce, and Ben, I guess. The thing is we weren't upset, but so amused that when Anna started laughing, no body could keep from letting out a giggle. There's something about our akward situation that makes it so funny. Maybe that's because your friends are with you. Thing is, we barely know each other, yet here we are,dying from laughter. That is, until they appeared. Two guards, in their black uniforms, marched by, rifles in hand. Everyone on the beach stopped moving and talking. Nothing happened, the guards just walked by, but they brought us back to the mysteries of our school. Then there was the issue of having to go to school tomorrow. Luckily, due to small classes, school was only five hours. A nudge from Morgan brought back my attention, as she pointed to the others, who were getting up.
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Re: Silent Hills Academy for the Gifted

Postby ☪ℓυηαя∂яσρ☪ » Sat May 14, 2011 8:32 am

dun, dun, dunnnnnn. :)
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Re: Silent Hills Academy for the Gifted

Postby BPeppers » Sat May 14, 2011 3:24 pm

Oh goodness, this is intense. xOx

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Re: Silent Hills Academy for the Gifted

Postby Fizzlebee » Sat May 14, 2011 3:30 pm

Really? I didn't mean for it to be that intense. Hmmmm... Well, I'm thinking of maybe changing the story title. Any suggestions?

Oh yes, and I will be at a band competition tomorrow, followed by prom (My brother is going, not me). So the next part will either come out tomorrow morning, or tomorrow night. (I'm on Eastern Standard Time)
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Re: Silent Hills Academy for the Gifted

Postby standardpoodleluv » Sat May 14, 2011 5:23 pm

Nooooo.... Well ok. Have fun;)
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Re: Silent Hills Academy for the Gifted

Postby Fizzlebee » Mon May 16, 2011 3:35 am

Yeah, so I'm thinking of maybe closing this story down and turning it into an RP. Writing this is like RPing with myself, and I bore myself. I fear that I may be boring you guys as well. Other peoples' input and stuff always helps me write.

What do you think?

Should I continue writing, or turn this into an RP?

Also, title change, or is the title okay?
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