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Re: Little Bits~

Postby Foi » Sat Mar 12, 2011 3:21 pm

Piece four. I have wroten a short story about the death of Abby. Based on a true story, and how Abby died. Rest In Peace.
Abby lay on the deck, fidgeting and trying to get comfortable. At last she found a comfortable position, and she lay still on her back, her front paws tucked into her belly. The abyssinian let her heavy eyelids shut and she started the process of getting to sleep. Suddenly she heard something that got her jumping up, wide awake. It was the bark of a dog. More barks sounded in the back yard. Abby looked around, terrified. She jumped up onto a deck-chair and looked around once more. All of a sudden three big dogs burst out of the gate to the house, their eyes wild. Abby ran as fast as she could and leaped over the fence. She ran more and more until the barks died away. She swung her head around to see how far away thew house was. The house wasn't in sight. She had no idea where she was. She spotted the black smooth thing that the shiny fast metal things roared across. She decided to cross it, as she was sure that was the way. When she was in the middle of the road, she heard loud roaring. Extremely bright lights came into view and Abby squinted to see what was behind them. They were getting closer now, and she could make out the shape of a fast metal thing. She knew these were very dangerous and and she tried to scamper off the black smooth path. But she was too late. Abby felt a sudden pain burst in her side and she yowled in agony and flopped onto the ground. She felt the metal thing pass over her and she tried to drag herself off the road huffing, mewing and extremely sore. Abby heard her owners calling her name and she tried to mew back, but nothing came out as she was too weak. She made one last effort to drag herself to the side of thew road, where she couldn't go any further. The flopped onto the ground and mewed in agony. She heard footsteps and felt something stroke her side gently. Everything was getting blurry as somebody lifted her limp head. Abby heaved one last painful breath and closed her eyes. She felt herself slowly drifting away and then everything was gone. Abby had died.

In memory of Abby, the loving abyssinian, who put up with everything I did when I was four to her. We all still love you Abby, and we miss you.

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Re: Little Bits~

Postby Foi » Sun Mar 13, 2011 7:20 am

Bump, I'll have a new piece soon.
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Re: Little Bits~

Postby Foi » Sun Mar 13, 2011 7:46 am

My fifth piece. This is actually a recount, as it happened the other day. It was the funnest after school time in my life.
I glared at the girl furiously. That idiot. She had a monobrow and her eyes were extremely wide apart. She had picked a fight with us a few weeks ago, and wouldn’t drop it. She even rubbed mashed up banana into Niamh’s hair. How could she? Niamh is only 138 cm’s tall! I so badly wanted to punch her then break both her arms. But then I’d get in heaps of trouble, and lose my bus privileges. I’d probably be expelled too. So I just glared. We were only ten year old year sevens, after all. Well, nearly eleven, but oh well.

Caleb, Niamh’s boyfriend who was a year eight and was twelve, and Niamh sat behind Erin and I. Poor Niamh had gotten scared of the girl, and yesterday Caleb had asked Niamh out. So he sat by her now, making her feel protected. When Niamh was in year five Caleb asked her out, and they were boyfriend, girlfriend for two years, until he dumped her on his birthday. Now, he still likes her, and she still likes him. So, back to the bus scene, I was chatting away with Niamh, Caleb would talk with us too, and Erin was leaning over listening to our conversation. It was something about monobrow girl, who’s name was actually Christina.

Niamh felt uncomfortable going out of the door, because of that girl, and how she always hurts her. So, Caleb and I solved the problem by me going in front, Niamh in the middle, and Caleb at the back. That way, Niamh would be harder to pick out. And it worked! So we got out peacefully, pulled the finger at the girl on the bus and started walking home.

Then we remembered what happened yesterday, and how Sabrina and Jane had bought a water melon for a buck. Niamh and I had a dollar each, and Caleb had nothing. So we all ran across the road and bought a water melon each. Caleb asked us what we were going to do with them, so we showed him instead. We drew faces on our watermelons. Then he asked what we’d do now, and I replied;
“I’m gonna smash it against that concrete pole, over there, so I can eat it now.”
Niamh wanted to take hers home and eat it.

I smashed it on the pole, and it actually split in half! Then I nearly dropped half, and Caleb took it off me and thanked me for something I didn’t give him. He started eating it anyway, so I didn’t want it once he had done that. Niamh ended up cracking hers on the pole too and gave some to Caleb.

Once all of the insides were gone we had a watermelon fight. We tore up our pieces and threw them at Caleb, because Niamh and I didn’t want to throw it at eachother. Naturally, Caleb threw pieces at me, not his girlfriend. By the time we were done I still had two pieces and Niamh had half a watermelon still. So she gave it to me and I put it in the middle of the road. We would see if it got run over later.

We came to Niamh’s street and Caleb and I waved goodbye to her. Then Caleb realized that he had to pick up his sister, and it was already 3:30pm. I yelled “Bye” one last time to Niamh, then ran after Caleb, ready to throw my two extra watermelon pieces at him.

Yeah, I was ten. c:
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Re: Little Bits~

Postby Foi » Mon Mar 14, 2011 5:00 pm

Bump, do you guys want another piece? ^^
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Re: Little Bits~

Postby ZombiePoodle » Tue Mar 15, 2011 5:10 am

I do ^^
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Re: Little Bits~

Postby Foi » Tue Mar 15, 2011 3:03 pm

Okay, a new piece coming up!
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Re: Little Bits~

Postby Foi » Wed Mar 16, 2011 2:47 pm

I found this story yesterday.
I wrote it when I was nine, so don't blame me for it not being very good. :/
I woke up on the ledge of a stone cliff. Cold. Scared. Alone. The thing that I was scared of was, what was going to happen to me? Would I survive for more than a week? I’m a gray wolf, one of the most common species of wolf. I am 10 in dog years. (That’s like... 1.5 human years) I got separated from the pack in a snow storm. Thats when everything went black. I thought I was dead for a second, but then I realized that, how would I be able to think if I was dead?

So I was alive. My pack must have found me too weak to carry on and dragged me up to this sheltered ledge. Thats when it hit me. The pack wouldn’t come back. They would have left by now. They had abandoned in me. I was the youngest female in the pack though! I thought to myself ‘toughen up! Your not for sure going to die... yet.’

I shook the thought out my head. My stomach growled. I was hungry. So desperately hungry I would not think about anything else. I needed food. I knew a good forest called Moonstone forest. That had a lot of hares, but it was a 3 hour walk away. I thought I could handle that. I proved wrong.

Sure I got there and all that, but when I saw a hare, my stomach took over. I was running, chasing actually. I pounced. Darn! Missed it! But that didn’t slow me down. I was still charging at the hare. For the second time I pounced. This time my claws dug in to the hares white rump, staining it with blood. I pinned it to the ground snarling and snapping. My teeth sunk into it. I lapped up most of the blood. Then I ate the rest of the meat and left the carcass there to rot.

Suddenly I heard a rustling in the bushes. Then a low feline growl. Out jumped a young snow leopard. My age to be precise. She did something a thought was a smile with her mouth. Then suddenly a voice or something came up into my mind. Coming from her. It said ‘race ya!’ I said back ‘sure but I’ll win!’ We raced.

In the end it was a tie. The snow leopard decided to stick with me and help me find my family. As the days passed we got hungry. Hungrier than we’d ever been before. I decided to go and hunt. I crept into a forest and the bushes rustled. A rabbit shot out of them. I ran as fast as I could, chasing the rabbit, getting closer and closer. The rabbit and I were out of the forest now, the rabbit clinging onto its life. A cliff was appearing in front of us. Suddenly the rabbit turned. I tried but I couldn’t top, I was going to fast. I tried skidding but it didn’t work.

I was going to die. Suddenly there was no ground below me. I was falling. Plummeting to my death. My side hit the ground with a thump and I whimpered in agony as I felt my rib bones brake. My vision was going bleary and I could hear the snow leopard at the top of the cliff whining. I heard a shot. A gun-shot. Hunters. The snow leopard went rigid then fell and hit the ground beside me. Barely alive I told her in my mind ‘goodbye.’ She did the same. I wheezed my last breath and went limp.

Lol, I know, it sucks.
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Re: Little Bits~

Postby Foi » Thu Mar 17, 2011 6:36 am

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