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Should i bring a new guy in?

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Re: Blood Witch

Postby Innocence » Sun Jul 31, 2011 1:02 pm

Chapter 11


After Owen shut the door I got up to wander. First I tried the door and found it locked, I let a whoosh of air and looked closer at the room. A canopy bed was on one side of th room, a fireplace across from it. Beside the bed sat a nightstand, on the far side of the room sat a vanity and a wardrobe. A set of table and chairs were in front of the fireplace. The curtains and bedsheets were a light pink and the chairs and rugs were a baby blue. Off in the corner beside the wardrobe stood a full length mirror.

Since I hadn't seen myself in days I went and looked into the glass. Staring back at me was a girl who looked worn out and defeated, her hair was full of twigs and leaves, also her face was streaked with dirt. I turned from the glass and walked away, on the vanitywas a bowl and a pitcher of water. I poured the water into the bowl and washed my face. Once that was done I looked t the state of my dress. It was ripped to shreds and my shift was peeking through. I sighed and went over to the wardrobe and opened the door.

All of the dresses were fit for a princess, so I chose the most modest one and slipped it on. The dress was a forest green with gold trimming around the sleeves and hem. Lace decorated the bodice, under the drees and inside of the sleeves. Around the waist was a chain of diamonds and hanging from the chain was a teardrop diamond. The dress swished as I walked, when I reached the bed I sat down.
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Re: Blood Witch

Postby Manafest » Sun Jul 31, 2011 1:49 pm

Oooh what twist. Fancy clothes! I love it!!
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Re: Blood Witch

Postby Innocence » Tue Aug 02, 2011 12:54 pm

After what seemed like hours I heard a knock on my door. It opened at my word and a servant carrying a tray of food walked in, then she set the food on the table. She bowed and walked out of the room, in her place entered Owen. He walked over to a chair and sat down, Owen stared at me for several minutes before speaking " I have to tell you something, but I can't because then you won't help." I looked at him and replied "so don't tell me," he got up and began to pace "if I tell you then you won't hate me." I stood and snarled "I don't hate you I despise you." He gave me a look of understanding, then he walked over and kissed my cheek. Afterwards he walked of the room.
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Re: Blood Witch

Postby Manafest » Wed Aug 10, 2011 3:48 am

Write more.
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Re: Blood Witch

Postby Innocence » Wed Aug 10, 2011 12:27 pm

Chapter 12


The next morning after my strange meeting with Owen I began to think about what he said. Was he telling the truth or was he trying to trick me? None of my questions could be answered so I left them alone. After laying in bed for hours trying to answer the questions I got up. I slipped into a dress just like the green one except this one was silver and blue. Soon I heard a knock on my door as I was braiding my hair. I finished quickly and went to open the door, on the other side stood a small boy. I stared at him confused, but all he said was " follow me."
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Re: Blood Witch

Postby Innocence » Thu Aug 11, 2011 12:16 pm

{here is the different verison of this book please read viewtopic.php?f=57&t=714777&start=0}
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Re: Blood Witch

Postby Manafest » Sat Sep 03, 2011 3:05 pm

WRITE MORE?!?!?!
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Re: Blood Witch

Postby Innocence » Sun Sep 04, 2011 3:38 am

{click the link above your post there's a new one there. :D }
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Re: Blood Witch

Postby *Neon* » Sun Sep 04, 2011 6:10 am

WoW i love your writing i am currently working on a wolf story with mystery romance and survival
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Re: Blood Witch

Postby Innocence » Sun Sep 04, 2011 11:52 am

{pm me the link i wanna check it out 8-) }
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