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Should i bring a new guy in?

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Re: Blood Witch

Postby Manafest » Wed Jul 27, 2011 5:22 am

Okey dokey
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Re: Blood Witch

Postby iratePanthera » Wed Jul 27, 2011 5:23 am

Marking, will read later. My brother is kicking me off.
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Re: Blood Witch

Postby Manafest » Wed Jul 27, 2011 5:25 am

My sis kicks me off all the time! I just have to get over it! :lol:
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Re: Blood Witch

Postby Innocence » Wed Jul 27, 2011 5:39 am

After they had taken Alisa out of the room, I turned to look at Owen, he looked back at me and said "just listen to what my father has to say." I shrugged but didn't say anything. The King rose from his seat and began walking towards me. I raised my chin high and stared him down, when he reached me he grabbed my chin and study my face on both sides and then my eyes. He snickered and looked to Owen saying "I can see why you like her son." Then he clucked my chin and walked back to his seat, he sat down and then began his speech.

"You see Rebecca I have a daughter about your age and I love her dearly. But she was taken and is now being held captive in a tower protected by a magic barrier. So you can see my problem, I need a witch to break the spell." then he turned to me and smiled "that's why you are here Rebecca to help me." I gasped and then said "no, not until you free my sister." Benedict laughed and replied "no, you see if I give her back you won't do what I ask so I have to keep until you finish my task. Is that clear?" I nodded and he gave me a evil smile "good, now Owen take her to her room."

Owen led me away after he shut the hall doors behind him. He took up to one of the many towers and opened the door, I walked in and sat on the bed. I heard Owen try to say something but then he sighed and closed the door.
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Re: Blood Witch

Postby iratePanthera » Wed Jul 27, 2011 6:02 am

I'm on my phone now and I just finished reading. If I we're her I would use a spell to give Owen to the guys to took the princess so the King would freak out.
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Re: Blood Witch

Postby Manafest » Wed Jul 27, 2011 6:21 am

Haha yeah.
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Re: Blood Witch

Postby Ivara » Wed Jul 27, 2011 6:33 am

Bookmarking! I love this story!
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book rec;; Good Omens by Terry Pratchett & Neil Gaiman

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A girl with a passion for chickens and some really great friends <3
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{art shop} {an interesting adopt}

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Re: Blood Witch

Postby Innocence » Wed Jul 27, 2011 9:00 am

{all of you who have read this thanks and Puppydawg I could do that but it would end the story right there because Owen would stay there.}
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Re: Blood Witch

Postby iratePanthera » Wed Jul 27, 2011 9:21 am

I know. That was just what I would do.
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Re: Blood Witch

Postby surreal adventure » Wed Jul 27, 2011 9:23 am

Keep writing! I love this story! Please check out mine it's called Claire The Cat, and if you like cats, I hope you'll like my story.
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