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Should i bring a new guy in?

Poll ended at Mon Oct 17, 2011 12:34 pm

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Re: Blood Witch

Postby Innocence » Tue Jul 26, 2011 7:38 am

{thanks, mayeb i'll go back and switch some of it and of course i'll be writing soon.}
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Re: Blood Witch

Postby surreal adventure » Tue Jul 26, 2011 2:52 pm

I sure hope you do! I bookmarked this so I know when you write your next chapter! :D
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Re: Blood Witch

Postby Manafest » Tue Jul 26, 2011 2:55 pm

As have I.
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Re: Blood Witch

Postby Innocence » Wed Jul 27, 2011 5:06 am

When I felt the connection I screamed WHAT are you doing! Damen replied don't worry I'll get you out. I huffed yeah right and then I closed the link just as he said no wait Rebe..... I turned back to front and held my wrist to my chest. Owen chuckled and leaned down to whisper right in my ear "did your boyfriend leave you to the wolves?" I only said "buzz off." He laughed again, then began to ride faster, I had to grab the pommel with one hand and use my useless one to hang onto his arm. It hurt but that didn't matter.

We made back to the village in a couple of hours. Owen got off and then helped me off the horse, I strted to back awa as soon as I got off. Owen shot me a look and then turned to led me into the castle. I began to tense as we got closer to the Great Hall. When we got to the door Owen looked back and gave me a grim expression, then he pushed open the doors.

In the hall on his throne sat King Benedict, he was a stout man with black hair and cold blue eyes. On either side of him stood gurads, I looked away and took a glance at the hall. It was huge and looked like a catherdral, then my gaze went back to the throne and I saw a small figure with firey red hair. I gasped and rushed to Alisa, she also broke free and was running to me. When she reached me I was crying, and then I hugged with all my strenght and she back. Then I felt arms wrap around me from behind and pull me away. I screamed "no don't take her away," Benedict laughed and said "how touching, don't worry you'll see your sister again after we have a little heart to heart."
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Re: Blood Witch

Postby Manafest » Wed Jul 27, 2011 5:08 am

Why did she say no in the first place?
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Re: Blood Witch

Postby Innocence » Wed Jul 27, 2011 5:13 am

{because alisa is not in the room anymore and Rebecca really wanted to see her. Is that what you mean by her saying "no"?}
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Re: Blood Witch

Postby Manafest » Wed Jul 27, 2011 5:14 am

No. Why did she say no to helping the King? Is'nt she doing good by helping him? :?:
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Re: Blood Witch

Postby Innocence » Wed Jul 27, 2011 5:18 am

{well see i had it in the way that she dosen't want to be used by others, she rather do it if she see that it is the right thing}
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Re: Blood Witch

Postby Manafest » Wed Jul 27, 2011 5:21 am

Ok I get it now, but I would have said yes when it all started! :lol:
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Re: Blood Witch

Postby Innocence » Wed Jul 27, 2011 5:21 am

{write more soon}
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