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Should i bring a new guy in?

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Re: Blood Witch

Postby Innocence » Mon Feb 28, 2011 4:07 am

Chapter 4


We finished packing when Owen burst into the rom looking confused. "Where are you going?" he asked, I didn't lok up from my bag but said "we have to leave." Then I closed the bag and called out "Alisa time to go" and she walked out carrying her bag. Owen turned to her and said "go wait outside for your sister" Alisa nodded and walked out the door.

I turned to him and stammered "what is the meaning of this?" He didn't answer but walked over to me so I trapped between him and the wall. I swallowed and waited for him speak. Owen looked down and said "don't leave we need you" I looked at him confused and asked "what do you mean?" Owen sighed and said "well since your dad is dead we have no one with a magic ability at the castle so now we need you." I looked at him with shock and then out of the blue I said the word "nasa" and he flew backwards.

I grabbed my stuff and ran for the door. when I got it open I picked up the shocked Alisa and ran for the wagon. I threw her in the back and climbed up front.

Owen ran out and headed straight for the horses. I wasn't going to ran him and that was my first mistake. He looked at me with murder in his eyes and he said "get out of the wagon." I slowly got down and helped Alisa out.
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Re: Blood Witch

Postby Innocence » Mon Feb 28, 2011 9:46 am

Owen lead us back inside and told Alisa to go upstairs. She went up and I watched her go, when she was out of earshot I turned to him and stared. He locked the door and went to go and sit by the fire. I stood standing there waiting for him to say something. He looked at me cold eyes and said "that was stupid you know. If you hadn't done that i might have let you go." I thought now you tell me and then I looked away and stared into space.

I didn't hear him get up but he was suddenly behind and turning me to face him. He looked at me with desparate eyes and pleaded "please stay." i shook my head and said quietly "Owen it's not possible you know that." He groaned and kissed me.
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Re: Blood Witch

Postby ClosedAccount » Mon Feb 28, 2011 10:10 am

i like it..i haven't finished everything yet but i will
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Re: Blood Witch

Postby Innocence » Mon Feb 28, 2011 2:00 pm

{thanks and Owen has a deep sercet will write more soon}
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Re: Blood Witch

Postby ClosedAccount » Mon Feb 28, 2011 2:21 pm

((kay...i finsihed now by the way ...i quite like it
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Re: Blood Witch

Postby Innocence » Mon Feb 28, 2011 2:28 pm

{here is more and please tell me how you liked the sercet}

Chapter 5



I kissed him back for about a minute and then shoved him away. I did something that still haunts me. I fell to the floor and began to cry. he of course crouched down and began to comfort me saying "sorry Becca but it's the only way." I hiccuped and only cried harder, then I felt a sharp pain in head and I blacked out.

I awoke and didn't know what time it was or where I was. Owen was standing behind some bars and then I knew where I was. I was in the castle jail, I scrambled up and pleaded "please let me go." Owen shook his head and said "not until you help the king." I looked at him like he was crazy and then asked "where's Alisa is she safe?" and he said solemly "she is safe but you will only see her when you agree to help the king." I was about to answer when a servant comes up and says "my lord your father the King needs to speak to you about you-know-what" and the servant looked at me.

I looked at the servant then at Owen and sputtered "y...yo...your the pr......pri...prince?" Owen didn't say anything but left with the servant, leaving me alone with my thoughts. I sighed and sat back down on the hard bench and curled my knees under me. I stared at the wall and began to think of my options.

I could break out and leave my sister behind or I could say yes and free her. But guess what one I chose. I looked around and saw a weak spot in the stone. so I walked over and pulled out one brick and the whole thing came apart. I crept out and found it was still night but dawn was fast approaching.
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Re: Blood Witch

Postby Innocence » Mon Feb 28, 2011 2:41 pm

The cells were near the woods so that made it even easier. So I walked slowly out and as soon I as reached the woods I broke into a dead sprint. As I ran I could hear gurads yelling and dogs barking. I gasped and ran faster.

After a while of running I crashed into something and fell to the ground out of breath. When I finally caught my breath I looked to see what I crashed into. And you wouldn't believe who it was, it was the nutcase Owen. I quickly got up and ran in the other direction.
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Re: Blood Witch

Postby ClosedAccount » Mon Feb 28, 2011 2:59 pm

oh wow...didn't expect that i did..nope nope nope
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Re: Blood Witch

Postby Innocence » Tue Mar 01, 2011 2:23 pm

{don't worry ther's more hehehehehe}
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Re: Blood Witch

Postby ClosedAccount » Tue Mar 01, 2011 2:28 pm

oh really?...czn't wait! :D...yeahh......i'm a sucker for romance and witches yep yep yep
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