Dream Reaper and Random poems, critiqueand comments?

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Re: Mindstorm and Random poems, critiqueand comments?

Postby Coppertop11 » Fri Apr 22, 2011 8:28 am

BUMP AGAIN! MY GOODNESS!
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Re: Mindstorm and Random poems, critiqueand comments?

Postby Coppertop11 » Sat Oct 15, 2011 2:38 pm

bump?
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Re: Mindstorm and Random poems, critiqueand comments?

Postby FirepeltXColdpelt » Sat Oct 15, 2011 9:40 pm

Heres mine

The Darkness

When Brightest its darkest, when darkest its gone, when gone forever so are you.

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I love your ones.
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Re: Mindstorm and Random poems, critiqueand comments?

Postby Coppertop11 » Fri Mar 30, 2012 12:24 pm

Hey, that's pretty good too. And thanks!
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Re: Dream Reaper and Random poems, critiqueand comments?

Postby Coppertop11 » Fri Mar 30, 2012 2:36 pm

Bumppp, got some editted ness
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Re: Dream Reaper and Random poems, critiqueand comments?

Postby Coppertop11 » Sat Mar 31, 2012 8:49 am

bump...
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Re: Dream Reaper and Random poems, critiqueand comments?

Postby Coppertop11 » Sat Mar 31, 2012 3:38 pm

sigh bump
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Re: Dream Reaper and Random poems, critiqueand comments?

Postby Coppertop11 » Fri Jun 29, 2012 5:07 pm

bump!
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If anyone is curious as to why my name is Coppertop its because he was a horse I used to ride a long time ago and I got my first champion on him over two foot fences. I moved on to many different horses but I still remember him since he was so good and sweet for me! However, he has passed on :( so now its a way for me to keep the memory of him. :) Image
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