please lock,, i want to make a new thread <33

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favourite character so far?

londyn
1
50%
cheyanne
0
No votes
bishan
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No votes
andreas
1
50%
jessenia
0
No votes
keith
0
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marcus
0
No votes
alisha
0
No votes
ethan
0
No votes
 
Total votes : 2

please lock,, i want to make a new thread <33

Postby Guest » Wed Nov 14, 2018 1:09 pm

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yo. name's londyn, im warnin' ya now that im not exactly william shakespeare when it
comes to writin', i mean im not like a kindergarden child, but i am still getting into the
swing 'o things. so, this story is based off of me and som o' my friends irl. basically, we
all get these symbols on our hands,, the source of our "powers". we also get neckalaces
w/ little gems attached to them, if we crush the gem on the end of them, we go into so
mething i like to call "element form". i'll post some drawins of them someday,, but until
then, mystery!! anywaaaaysss,, the characters are part of a group named,, "the fit group".
nows a unusual time to mention this but don't post ty,, you can pm me if ya want to mention
somethin 'bout the series,, mainly bc i dont want the "pages" of writing to look all weird and
wonky thats al
l,, mods; if im breaking any rules,, please let me know!

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𝚂𝚄𝙿𝙿𝙾𝚁𝚃 𝙴𝙾𝚃𝙵𝙶?

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LEADER PLUSHIE
a plush of your least favourite leader!!

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(UNREVEALED IN STORY) VILLIAN PLUSHIE
strategize, hypnotize.

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♥ chars and descs ♥

Postby Guest » Wed Nov 14, 2018 1:52 pm

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here is the members of the fit group!
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londyn [aka me] is a very unfocused female who is defensive
when people try to bother her friends. she is the leader of the
fit group and the element of space. she's laid-back, easy
going and fun if you get on her good side, however, if you're one
of her many enemies, she can be menacing and violent. she often
admires andreas' personality and hair. (don't judge,, i really do,,)
she's also andreas' "official occasional bodyguard for life".
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𝙲𝙷𝙴𝚈𝙰𝙽𝙽𝙴
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cheyanne is a fiery red-head who has a VERY short temper. she
gets angry alot, but when she isnt angry she is pretty nice and
fun to be around~,, she has most the same enemies as londyn,
and screams at most of them, she enjoys soccer and singing.
she's also the element of life. she is the leader assistant.
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bishan is a strong male who likes anime and games. he is
quite active, and partakes in most sport-like things, like
cross country. he's often bothered by cheyanne, and is also
the element of mystery. he's also sad but like whatev--
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𝙰𝙽𝙳𝚁𝙴𝙰𝚂 x
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andreas is a delightful male who everyone loves to be around!
hes constantly smiling, making everyone around him happy too!
he is the element of speed, and also is active like bishan. he's
closest with londyn and cheyanne, and is the co-leader of the group.
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jessenia is obbsessed with memes and the internet, she often
is absent from the group, but always makes up for it. she is sad
like londyn and bishan, and is closest with londyn, cheyanne and
andreas. she's the element of time.
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keith is a short male with a rather.. "weird" mind..
he's closest with marcus and spends 75% of his time with him.
the other 25% of times he isnt, he's either herassing londyn,
andreas, or cheyanne (making fun of the fact she's short). he's
the element of romance.
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marcus is like a mini-keith, but faster, with more of a high
pitched voice. he does the same activities as keith, and en
joys his company alot. he also herasses londyn, andreas, and
cheyanne (making fun of the fact she's short). he's the element
of fire.
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alisha is the same as keith and marcus, with a even weirder
mind. she's seen often walking around with londyn, and breaking
in on londyn and andreas' chats, by screaming "KISS!", as a result;
londyn often pulls her aside and makes small talk untill andreas cools
down. she's the element of wind/
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ethan doesn't show as much emotion as the rest, he's the newest
member of the fit group, and the element of nature. he usually
has the same dull and emotionless voice even when he's happy,
and he occasionally forgets about his powers, alot.
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♥1♥

Postby Guest » Thu Nov 15, 2018 10:43 am

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xxxxx"UGGGH!!" cheyanne had lost a round of cards, once again. she got enraged and slammed her cards on the table. "YOU'RE CHEATING, AREN'T YOU?!" she insisted, looking at ethan, who has just looked up at her as she said that. "no?" he said, confused. "LET ME SEE YOUR HAND!". ethan showed cheyanne his hand of cards, it was totally normal. "i wasn't cheating." he corrected, calm, as usual. just at that moment andreas walked in the room, analyzing the scene. "whats going on here? i was trying to sleep guys.." andreas said, rubbing one eye. "ethan was cheating in cards." cheyanne said, looking at ethan, who looked confused. "i just proved to you i wasn't," he started, "i showed you my hand." "aaand? just because you showed me your hand, doesn't mean you aren't cheating!" cheyanne started to yell mid sentence, which woke most the people in the house up. "you shouldn't yell cheyanne.. it's 1 in the morning.." andreas mumbled. a pot with a plant in it across the room started to shake, and the plant in it started to grow, and shifted over to ethan, then to cheyanne. it picked up all the cards and put them away. "powers are neat.. when you remember you have them.." ethan chuckled at the end of the sentence, and got up. "im gonna head to bed.." he said, as cheyanne got up. he walked over to her, holding out a hand, "good game?" he asked. cheyanne hesitantly shook his hand, and hugged him, and they both went to bed.
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♥2♥

Postby Guest » Thu Nov 15, 2018 10:59 am

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xxxxxit was the morning. londyn sat up and rubbed her eyes, as she yawned. she picked up her phone, that was layed down on the nightstand next to her. "12:00?!" she exclaimed. she got up, and got dressed, running down the hallway in a panic. while looking around, she runs into bishan. "AH!" she yelps, grabbing bishan's attention, "what?" he mocked her, "y-you.. didn't feel me run into you?" she asked, confused. "nope.." he said, just as confused as her. "..." londyn walked by him, but bishan grabbed her shoulder and turned her around. "have you seen andreas?" he asked. "no.. i was supposed to meet him at 11:00.. poor guy, out in the cold.. he must be freezing.. maybe i should bring a coat for him!" londyn rambled, "i'm sure he brought one.." bishan added. "he'll forgive you, he knows you sleep in, and he's very understanding!". "okay.." londyn mumbles, "i'm bringing one just in case though!!" she insists, and she grabs a coat, and runs out the door. she ran a bit to a fountain, near the house. she ran to him and panted, catching her breath, "hello to you too.." andreas giggled. "h-hELLO--!!" londyn said, still catching breath. andreas waited untill londyn caught her breath, then they walked off to a nearby ice cream truck, to pick up some ice cream before their adventure.
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Postby Guest » Thu Nov 15, 2018 11:33 am

      you can post now if you want!!
      bump ♥
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♥3♥

Postby Guest » Fri Nov 16, 2018 1:09 pm

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xxxxxandreas and londyn walked around, both snuggled up in their coats, eating ice cream. "i think the idea to eat ice cream in the cold like this was a bad idea.." andreas said, with a forced chuckle. "yeah.. i'm 10x more cold now.." londyn muttered. they walked on for a while before walking back home, walking right into an argument.

xxxxx"SHUT UP CHEYANNE, I DIDN'T DO ANYTHING!" bishan screamed across the room to cheyanne, who was, as expected, screaming back. "YOU IDIOT! YOU RUIN EVERYTHING!" cheyanne slammed something on the table nearest to her, and went up to bishan and shoved him, and he shoved back. "GUYS, STOP IT!" alysha yelled from the hallway, while cheyanne and bishan were engaging in a psychical fight. alysha blew them across the room with wind powers, along with most of the light furniture, like lamps, plants, etc. ethan tried to hold bishan down with vines, but bishan broke free and copied ethan's abilities. (his only power is to copy one person's powers at a time.) he wrapped vines all around cheyanne, and was about to punch her, when andreas caught his punch. "STOP IT BISHAN!" he yelled.
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