❀ Kadupal - 珍しい花 ❀

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❀ Kadupal - 珍しい花 ❀

Postby Avisowl » Tue Jul 17, 2018 9:43 am

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❀Kadupal - Rare Flower - 珍しい花❀
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Image “I am not unwanted, I am not boring, and I...I am mother’s daughter...but I don’t know if I’m my father’s”

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❀Contents❀

Main Thread - メインスレッド

Relations - 関係

Finding Family - 家族探し

Invisible - インビジブル

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Relations - 関係

Postby Avisowl » Thu Jul 19, 2018 1:07 pm

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A similar kit to my sibling the soft pond fish. We’ve always shown a true connection, distant from the others. Taura and Tomiko two pees in a pod, the roses in a bush of thorns. The crowd favorite for mother and father. Through the many months and weeks my closest friend, my closest sister she grew away from me. I felt the weight of mountain crumble against my weak shoulders. The only person keeping me crushed from the boulders was my mother, but we slowly grew apart as well, but I still feel the warmth of her in my heart.
I had always thought, I had always doubted that my father...was truly my father. He would always visit and me and my...sister. We never felt the same connection. Perhaps mother had a fling, or a small romance before we were all born...perhaps, my father was out there waiting to find me.



The air brushed up and down the sides of my fur, I stepped into the sunlight. My eyes set one last gaze on my family the only missing part, a father. Not any father not their father, my true father. I turned and didn’t look back. If I had, the pull of my family would keep me against their comforting grip. I continued down the mountain, a simple trail of my mother’s flowers connecting to the town. I trotted against the flowers, a small Asphodel crushes under my paws. I wandered through the lights and yellow sunflowers of the village. The sun had begun rising, reaching its hand and pulling the moon down. I had to hurry!
I stepped outside the village, I felt a numbness overcome my body. I struggled to move forward with my new problem. I finally adjusted to the circumstance and moved even father along the mountain trail. The village was small behind me. Where I stopped, a small meadow had surrounded my body. I saw a small wooden house perched on a little hill. My bones were weary I had gone far. I needed rest, so I walked up the steps to the little shelter.

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Finding Family - 家族探し

Postby Avisowl » Tue Jul 24, 2018 10:14 am

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Finding Family - 家族探し
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I felt the warmth of the cabin fill the spaces between each strand of my fur. A satisfied shiver rand up my mane. I walked forward...who was that? A black kalon with gold horns....Kenzo! I stepped forward, and in front of him, Kenzo didn’t even flinch. I waved my paw in front of him. “Kadupal!” Kenzo stood in slight panic. “Your forgotten !” I stopped and felt my heart quickly beat in my chest, I felt waves of bad luck on myself... I was my father’s daughter. I felt dizziness hit my head, and fell to the ground.
I lay in bed, Kenzo...dad kept squinting at me, it was like he could barely see me. “Kadupal, its really bad...I don’t think that you will ever be...seen again.” I choked and stared at my paws, they were there! It’s almost as if I had forgotten myself in the process of trying to find my “real” father. Kenzo was my real father but, I faded away in his arms.


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Invisible - インビジブル

Postby Avisowl » Thu Jul 26, 2018 12:24 pm

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Invisible - インビジブル
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Nobody could see me, unless I saw myself. I trudged back to home, tears stung my cheeks as I looked at my mother and siblings talking, wondering where I was...nervous, and worried. I then realized, how much I really loved them, I need them to know I did and that I was safe. I grabbed paper and a pencil and wrote a letter in the language my mother really spoke, poetry.

Kadupal a rare flower, caught in the shower of truths and lies.
As it’s family cries just know I’m thinking of you
It’s true that I love you
I found that, but I need to find myself too.
Love Kadupal



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