1300 - deer in the headlights

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1300 - deer in the headlights

Postby chunkypeanutbutter » Thu Feb 15, 2018 3:51 pm

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⋆ ☽ . . . under the moonlight . . . ☾ ⋆

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. . . sometimes it's safer to lurk in the shadows . . .
. . . but fate always has a different plan . . .

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⋆ ☽ . . . giselda ' s story . . . ☾ ⋆
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    She was born to a family of strict tradition and hard work. Her parents were stern and silent bakers who took little joy in their work. After several years of working in the arduous wheat fields, a sudden pregnancy brought on by the cold winter freeze left Giselda’s mother ill and unable to work. The town doctor had told her father that his wife would sadly perish during the birth their only child. After nine month’s time, his prediction had come true and Giselda was born to a single father with no idea how to care for a child, and no love in his heart. They had been passing down their family business generation after generation, and he could plainly see no talent in her to continue it. It wasn’t that her father hated her, he just didn’t know what to do with this child that clearly wasn’t even his. It took Giselda many years to get accustomed to her strange magic, and she was soon forbidden to romp around the wheat fields since she had a habit of uncontrollably freezing the crops over. She felt awful for letting her father down time after time, and eventually the two just stopped interacting for anything outside of eating supper and travelling to compulsory family events, which she would also come to feel shunned from. After Giselda was old enough to move out on her own, there were no tears or heartfelt goodbyes. It just felt inevitable that it was time to go, and they were both happier for it.

    Unfortunately, Giselda felt like she fit in even less in the city. Everywhere she went she could feel eyes on her, she spoke too loudly, her accent was strange, she stood a head over everyone, and her horns kept scraping every door she walked under. It seemed everything she did only brought more attention to herself, and Giselda quickly discovered she was terrified of others. Her uneasiness grew each day as she distanced herself further and further from the life of normalcy she had desired her entire life. In dark alleys, she dwelled, living off of whatever scraps would be thrown to her from the restaurant busboys. She formed her personal alcoves in the deepest growths of vegetation at the park, changing every night and covering her tracks out of intense fear of being found. At night, when even the most diehard of night-owls had finally gone to rest, she felt free to take long runs to the beach and relax. One such night, she decided for once to take a route by the new nightclub to see if she could scrounge up any leftover food. Sniffing around, she soon found herself surrounded by the freshly-tossed, deep-fried goodies, and she was in heaven. Unfortunately, as she started stuffing herself with as much as she could carry, she heard a startled gasp and a metal clink of something hitting the pavement. Giselda let out a loud cry and, oddly, started hiccuping out of pure shock of hearing herself produce such a strange noise--and turned around to see a dark grey kalon looking her right in the eyes. Embarrassed, Giselda cowed away from the piercing stare and looked down, but she couldn’t move. Looking down, she discovered that her hooves had been frozen to the ground, and out of her surprise she had frozen over half the side of the club. The dark kalon chittered at her, and kicked a can towards the surprised Giselda thinking she was a deer. Her eyes suddenly adjusting to the dark, she gasped again when she realized the “deer” was actually another kalon, and she looked as though she had been frozen to the pavement! The kalon rushed to help and chip her away, and to get her to a hospital. Giselda yelped and tried to explain the situation, but the kalon helped her up regardless and insisted on taking her back to her place. These streets are no place for us young gals, it’s too dangerous, and besides that, and you’ll get a cold…

    Arriving at a shuttered little apartment door, the kalon introduced herself as Sharai and you sure were lucky I stayed back late, and I have some microwave pizza bagels we can share, and where are ya from? Do you have a place to live? Giselda’s head was spinning. Why wasn’t she afraid of me? Did I just make a friend...? Sharai grinned and, almost as if she had read her mind, told her she could live with her as long as she needed to. It seemed way too good to be true… Giselda blushed and hid her face away. Looking over at the chattering kalon fold out a battered couch-bed, she saw a face of kindness for the first time in her life.

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and then there were two . . .

Postby chunkypeanutbutter » Thu Feb 15, 2018 3:52 pm

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Months later, in Sharai's apartment, a storm had been brewing around Giselda's fate.
Whether she liked it or not, a big change was coming to her safe and cozy lifestyle...


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Giselda loved spending time indoors.

She could be whoever she wanted online -- no one could see her giant horns or her tall stature if she only took a picture of her face as her icon. It was wonderful, and it was great having people to talk to without ever going outside.

This became a bit worrying for Sharai, and she kept encouraging her friend to give the real world a try. They would only get a few feet out the door before Giselda screamed and went back outside from fear. It was damn near infuriating for Sharai. When evening came around, she had to abandon her friend to her own accord while she went to work...worried as she may be, at least she's no harm to anyone else at night. But people were beginning to suspect that she no longer lived alone, and rumors had been spreading...

While at home, Giselda watched lots of movies and cartoons to pass the time before her online friends came back on. She was watching some old Christmas movies and decided to take her art pad out to sketch. Though not the best artist by any means,
she scribbled out a few characters from Frosty the Snowman and took note of his magical powers. It made her reflect on herself and think, what do I feel about my powers? Could they be used for good? She frowned and shook her head. There was no way she could see herself being anything but a freak. Still, she gave it a shot and froze her drink to see if she could...oh, great, now she can't drink it. Sigh. See, it's just as pointless as you thought. She turned her attention back to her sketch and now she had moved on to Rudolph the reindeer. What a funny guy ... she put a hoof to her chin. Wish her body could just make up its mind... She decided to go to bed.

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The next evening, doing a bit of house-cleaning for her friend while she was at work, discovered some old dusty books in her attic. That's so strange...Sharai doesn't seem the type to have a lot of old literature around. She took some of the books back to her room to study them while the internet was down. They were all about ancient magic, and she had a good chuckle at a few. There were a couple of made-up spells to conjure up a tree, light a candle without a match, and other silly little spells that seemed more like benign party tricks than anything. Really weird that someone would write these down...perhaps it was a book made for fun before the time of television. Giselda went to put the dusty books back, when a loose stack of papers fell out of one...great, more things to clean up. She bent down to pick it up and stopped in her tracks when she read: REVERSING MAGICAL ABILITIES in big block letters.

Giselda started to sweat. Maybe this book wasn't all fun and games... she looked down at her hooves and wondered if it had anything to do with her situation. After all, no one really knew the real cause of her birth -- maybe there are others out there like me? Hurriedly, she picked up the pages and began to organize them in the proper order. She learned of a magical stone that had the ability to revert an abnormal birth into a normal child with the absence of magical influence. Her entire body chattered with excitement and the hope that she might be able to become normal. But, wait...where would she be able to find one of these stones, anyways? Scanning over the pages, she found an invoking spell to guide her to the nearest one. All she had to do was go outside and....grab a stone...but she was too afraid to go outside. Her heart dropped. What was she going to do now?

She felt more wary as the time went on. Giselda paced nervously as she waited for night fall, for Sharai to leave, and for everyone to start going home. Slowly creeping down the fire escape, she hurriedly searched around for a little rock--something, anything. There weren't a lot of pebbles around in the city, oddly enough. She ended up settling for a jagged piece of sandstone from a neighboring restaurant's botanical garden out front, careful not to disturb anything else. Giselda huddled under the fire escape with the rock, a slip of paper, and a candle: "O', stone of the old earth, guide the moon and the stars, and blessed be my journey--" she coughed at the silliness of it all -- "Guide me to the stone of powers which I seek." Wow, what a lame spell... she really hoped no one heard her just then..

Just as the words left her mouth, her sandy stone began to glow a deep purple from inside. It said right here, the closer she got from red to bright blue, the closer she was. A dark purple means it must be somewhere around. She snatched up the pebble and floated up over the city to catch her bearings. It became a game of hot and cold-- she would fly in one direction and see if her stone had gotten any bluer until eventually she started seeing the purple faze into a deep blue. Headed to the source, she found herself in the forest just outside of town. She lowered herself to the ground and began to walk deep into the woods. Getting very nervous, she noticed around her snow had begun to fall and ice forming around her horns again. Why does this always happen when I'm stressed?? She huffed, becoming even more determined to finish her quest.

She finally found what she came all the way out here looking for -- the stone was a bright blue and before her lay a lovely, shiny orb. Giselda nuzzled it out with her hoof and proceeded to carry it back home. What she didn't realize is that she just roused a pack of wolves from their slumber, in the cave nearby. Hey, why's that tasty deer stealing our fun ball?! Giselda heard a deep, guttural growl and found herself face to face with a crazed wolf.

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Of course, she booked it as fast as she could. In the commotion, the orb fell out of her grasp and smashed onto the frozen ground below. Giselda felt her heart break, as the wolves chased her out of the forest for disturbing them. The chase went on for a good while, and Giselda's endurance eventually saved her. That crazy deer's too fast, the leader growled, and slunk back into the woods. She sighed a breath of relief and started back towards her house

Finally, everything would be able to go back to normal. She couldn't wait to go home and tell Sharai about her crazy journey. Not realizing, she had been chased out right into a neighborhood where everyone was coming outside to see what all the fuss was. It was dead quiet, save for a few hushed whispers as kalons began to mutter rumors that had already been circulating. Suddenly, hundreds of eyes were on her, just as bewildered as she was.

Her heart stopped and she was frozen on the spot -- this time, not literally. Everyone could see her plain as day.

What was she going to do now?

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Postby chunkypeanutbutter » Mon Mar 05, 2018 10:49 am

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the above art piece was completed by me,
and took a total of 36 hours overall in paint tool sai.

the story and concept is all original, written and revised by myself.
character designed by kalon staff.

top post - 800 words
second post - 1,275 words

character by herself:

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my reference images used:

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please do not steal my artwork or writing and use it as your own.
please give proper credit to the owners of the images above.
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