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Postby coolwhipp » Sat Nov 04, 2017 4:12 pm

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a lil place to organize my mind for ; story ideas , little updates , and rants
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Postby coolwhipp » Sat Nov 04, 2017 4:16 pm

sometimes i just . space out n think of so many things at once n then i think im in one place when im in another , , like today i was sitting @ my cousins drinking cider n i thought i was in my room drinking coffee but when i tasted cider i spat it out and thought " this isnt coffee ? ? ? ? "
well no wonder it doesnt taste like coffee . . . . . . . . * rubs chin *
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Postby coolwhipp » Sat Nov 04, 2017 4:28 pm

rip yes another post so soon
i have this issue where i get obsessed with something too easily ( like for instance a tv show or an aesthetic or a song ) and i cant ever get it out of my head n i find for some reason my head not just relating to it myself but other completely random things , , i get addicted to great things to easily rly ? ? and then i just . drop all interest so so suddenly and abruptly
esp people ; i can meet a person that i just want to have complete happiness and love and i find myself trying to drift away but its like , , an anchor ?
so i cant rly deal with people dying or a character dying vry easily , , which doesnt help since my classmates are going through some rough times and a few people ive known since diapers have already cut the line
on a lighter note , i bought a vaporizer for my bloody noses and hopefully ill get to setting it up instead of sitting and eating crackers + candy corn and watching stranger things and random movies constantly
also ive been listening to this for abt 3 hours now n its kinda uplifting but depressing at the same time . its an oxymoron song
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Postby coolwhipp » Sun Nov 05, 2017 8:43 am

ive always had this issue where people think that im purposely trying to sound weird with my s's bc theres this giant gap between my two front teeth and whenever i talk too fast i lisp or when im tired i lisp so i have to focus on talking and i sound like a squeaky tire when im talking rip
also ! i did get to putting up the vaoprizer , but since my brother has some contagious illness n his throat is swelling he needs it so ill Suffer™ for a few more days if it means he can get better . i also woke up with random scratches on my legs so thanks 3am me for running into so many things & burning your fingers on a candle you pyromaniac - insomniac
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Postby coolwhipp » Sun Nov 05, 2017 11:14 am

i just had sm rly tasty alfredo but i guarantee in abt 2 hours im gonna throw it up
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Postby coolwhipp » Sat Nov 11, 2017 6:51 pm

a few small facts n quirks of mine ! !

    iii - i lisp if i dont focus on my s's ( i wrote abt that already so i dont wanna like . b annoying and retype that all , , )
    iii - if i don't think that what im saying is more like a song , i WILL stutter badly on five or six words
    iii - i crack my neck every 3 - 4 minutes loudly ( apologies to my chiropractor )
    iii - i have around 5 - 6 bloody noses a day , rip any white or pastel clothing of mine
    iii - i also crack my knuckles a lot , and its rly obnoxious to everyone around me and myself aswell
    iii - i snap my fingers a ton
    iii - whenever there's a silence or an argument between my friends , or mayb they mentioned something emotional , it's instinctual to make a bad joke or yell out of nowhere / do something dumb to lighten the mood or i just break down
    iii - i will remember something pointless from when i was like 4 but i cant remember a simple algebra concept
    iii - if i see a flower , i have to smell it or pick it
    iii - ive always disliked the taste of bananas
    iii - i will keep a quote or joke in my head until i use it and then forget it exists
    iii - whenever im bored or telling a story i change my entire voice n character into someone new and try to start a convo by talking like whatever they are ( an old man or mayb a child , idk my voice is rly weird ? ? )
    iii - i have never ( or i never remember ) abandoned a book i've gotten before
    iii - each year school starts , i listen to one specific song - an old favorite by tally hall , a band i used to be obsessed with - and never listen to it again until the next year
    iii - smtimes i quote song lyrics without even thinking abt it . . . . . . . gjlhgjhf
    iii - if i dont try to act like a nice n Great Person each second ofc my life im rly obscene and dramatic + emotional , sometimes extremely offensive and vulgar , so i take a hiatus from cs or my other social media for a bit . its like a scheduled thing that happens ; like a periodical existential crisis but with more crying and bad jokes
    iii - its way too easy for me to get sick , ,
    iii - i've read 56 books ranging from 300w to 1000 words since september 1st ! !
    iii - if i dont wear these weird things in my shoes my foot bones will stick out and my legs + back will buckle in , but only if i walk for too long . its painful as hell
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Postby coolwhipp » Sat Nov 11, 2017 6:56 pm

hey kids yes im back quickly ! ! ! ! my brother finally got better n now im using the vaporizer , my nose is kinda better but i might just get it cauterized to have it over with . i had two stranger things shirts , a sweatshirt and sweater , ordered yesterday - along with this rly heckin cool fleece blanket that i cant wait to use ! ! c :
+ my parents just got a new couch + chair n i have to put my turtle in my room now . myrtle is gonna have to wait tho , shelves r being put in rn n im vry excited for them ! !
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Postby coolwhipp » Sat Nov 11, 2017 7:09 pm

" i'll give you anything .
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i love you "

- best song quote ever
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Postby coolwhipp » Sun Dec 03, 2017 2:13 pm

ok so been a while
my arms are p weak from carrying around all of my friends' blankets , though ill give it to them , they were carrying a lot of food + candy + drinks too ! ! we all watched elf @ my school gym , & it went out p chill until sm kids started pestering us abt lgbtq + n such . there were quite a few slurs there , but it went p smoothly after all of that . im confident in my friends , they're strong , and we watch out for eachother .
earlier today i had 2 do a lot of chores but i slept in till like 1 & drank sm chai tea ( i think that was it ) + decided to eat sushi at meijer bc im cheap ah ; ; n to continue the asian food trend i had today , i got sm tasty sweet n sour chicken fr dinner + pocky fr later ! ! also hauled a ton of foreign candies that im p gonna try , excited to eat these little japanese peach gummies .
my hands r getting shaky so i cant rly wrk on myos or due art , but fr now , ill b writing n responding to pms / da stuff !
also im rly digging christmas aesthetics rn so i decided to get hot cocoa w / a warm sweater n my Sausage On Legs ( doggo ) but im just gonna drink my coca cola till i need to do myos . whgoha
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Postby coolwhipp » Thu Dec 07, 2017 9:03 am

hey im back ! ! hand was smashed two days ago when trying 2 get away frm some kids @ my school in the locker room , so drawing is painful but i need the practice ; ; ; ;
joined a new roleplay since i need to get back into writing , and ive gotten into a ton of new book series ! ! ( thanku harv fr suggestin 2 read , , , , <33 )
im p happy 2 bc a girl ive liked fr a rly long time apparently likes me 2 n i dont know what 2 do ? ? n im afraid that if i ask hr out my school & life in general will b a lot more dangerous n uninviting . not to mention i have 2 get a lot of junk done today , just hope my hand or nose dont start bleeding again ! ! c :
bt im also p happy bc a guy who ive always thought was v intimidating came up 2 me today n said he was proud of what i was doing n strives 2 b brave like me , but all im doing is sitting here drawing gay stuffn being a Lesbean ; ; i want evrything 2 be good fr my fellow lgbtq + friends at school & all over !
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