PlutonianOpal's Library - Writing Challenge!

[noctonia]

These stories are for Flo's Challenge!

Please PM me any comments for my stories. I like writing but I don't think I'm too good at it. Please tell me where I can improve!

Thank you to my friend, RedGem3, for editing my work.

Edits made: Changed Number 57 from "Oh crap..." to "Oh no..."

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1.// "Did you steal my Poptart?"
2.// "We could be heroes!"
3.// "We should be lovers..."
4.// "SNAAAAAAAAAAKE!"
5.// "What do you mean, NO?!"
6.// "THIS IS JUST BUSINESS!"
7.// "Maybe, just one more slice."
8.// "You can't leave! You'll die..."
9.// "I was a fool to believe..."
10.// "It all ends, today."
11.// "You must..."
12.// "You're just a silly girl!"
13.// "The show must go on..."
14.// "Just one more day, please..."
15.// "You can't just kill people!"
16.// "Seriously, who ate my Poptart?!"
17.// "I only speak the truth."
18.// "Don't let go Jack! Wait... you already did... rats."
19.// "I did not want this!"
20.// "What do you mean he's dead?!"
21.// "I haven't eaten in three days!"
22.// "Who am I? Not Jean Valjean..."
23.// "Did you just..."
24.// "Do. Not. Touch. That."
25.// "YOU JUST TOUCHED IT!"
26.// "I would never say that to you."
27.// "My receding hair line has been kissed..."
28.// "You have Elvis Presley eyes... I would know."
29.// "Dude, chocolates are bomb."
30.// "Could you... stay with me tonight?"
31.// "I can't lose you!"
32.// "Please... marry me."
33.// "I can't hug you..."
34.// "You call that a kiss?"
35.// "Since when did I ask for it to snow?"
36.// "I'M BATMAN!" "No... no you are not."
37.// "NEVER SAY THAT WORD!"
38.// "I HAVE TB!" "No, you have a cold!"
39.// "Can you not?!"
40.// "'Tis only a flesh wound!"
41.// "Could you stop jumping for one minute?!'
42.// "Please repeat that, I wasn't listening."
43.// "You love me?"
44.// "Never do that again."
45.// "I dare you to lick that..."
46.// "What do you think of children?"
47.// "I like, like you."
48.// "BY GODS..."
49.// "I just wanted you..."
50.// "Damn it! I died again!"

51.// "I'm a mess."
52.// "Hey! Little ears are around!"
53.// "Please, don't cry..."
54.// "YOU PLAGIARIZING PIG!"
55.// "Since when did Disney add this?!
56.// "It only gets worse"
57.// "Oh no..."
58.// "Please tell me that is not what I think it is."
59.// "What did you think I was doing?"
60.// "ALL HAIL...!"
61.// "Now, why did you do that?"
62.// "You have beautiful eyes."
63.// "Let's travel the world!"
64.// "I DON'T SPEAK FRENCH!"
65.// "What ever happened to Joel?"
66.// "No way in, no way out."
67.// "I will have my vengeance."
68.// "Grow up!"
69.// "I found the ring!"
70.// "We should run... like now!"
71.// "Can you please shut up?" "No."
72.// "I found that cliff..."
73.// "Are you sure that is safe to eat?"
74.// "I TOLD YOU TO GOOGLE MAP IT!"
75.// "Who died and made you queen?!"
76.// "Ich Sprechen Deustch."
77.// "Now wait a second, buster."
78.// "I would kill for you."
79.// "The greatest thing, is you."
80.// "I am a literary vampire."
81.// "A stake through the heart would kill anybody..."
82.// "Bon Jovi is my jam!"
83.// "Kiss me... now."
84.// "I seem to have lost my contact."
85.// "TURN THE LIGHTS BACK ON!"
86.// "DON'T SHOOT!"
87.// "Oh no... he has a sword too."
88.// "Are you sure it's dead?"
89.// "Ummmmm..."
90.// "I can't write anything good."
91.// "We aren't in Hogwarts!"
92.// "Please, stay with me."
93.// "He's not breathing!"
94.// "I...love...yo-"
95.// "She's gone."
96.// "Sir, where are your pants?"
97.// "I can't even."
98.// "I believe in you."
99.// "What can I say... you're welcome."
100.// "The sea... it calls me."

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Word Count: 551 | Finished: October 1st

After a long, long day at school, I almost tripped over the front step of my house. I was exhausted, and really tired of everyone at school. It was just another “ordinary day” at school. I audibly groaned. Everyone just kept talking, and talking, and talking about that... incident that happened last week. I had sat through many classes that day, as well as some tests. It was very stressful, made even worse by everybody at school and now? I had to face my brother. My pesky, annoying brother. He was always stealing my stuff, provoking me... this list could go on for days. “Why are you taking so long?” He appeared out of nowhere, stood in front of me and smirked, like the very devil he was. “Did you grow a tail?” I glared at him. “My, I haven’t seen you for a few hours and you grew a tail?”
“Shut up! Don’t you have anything better to do? And what do tails have to do with anything?!”
“No.” There his evil smirk went again. “Annoying you is the best thing I can do.”
I stomped off to the kitchen. “I don’t have time for his stupid nonsense.” I muttered under my breath. All I wanted was something from my hidden food cache in the fridge. Specifically, my Poptart. I had saved that treat for a really bad day. And if today wasn’t bad, I didn’t know what was. Well, it wasn’t that hidden, but who cared? I turned around as I heard the footsteps of my brother.
“Oh, I’m surprised to find you in here,” he remarked sarcastically. “My wittle baby sister, always looking for food.”
“Stop following me!” I yell in his face. No matter how much he tried to annoy me right now, all I needed to do was to find that Poptart. I moved my food out of the way, and tried in vain to find my Poptart which I had saved for so long. It wasn’t there! I started panicking. “But... but it was there yesterday!” Suddenly, I heard my brother trying to stifle his laughter. I turned around, rage rushing through my veins and with fire in my eyes, I turned around once again to face the devil himself. “Did you steal my Poptart?” I asked nicely, trying not to let my anger show.
“No, of course not. Why would I do that?” he asked back, barely able to contain his laughter. That’s it, I thought. I’m done being nice to him and being the subject of his torments. And I knew he was the type of person that would laugh when they were lying so his laughter further confirmed my suspicions.
“You stole my Poptart?! I’M DONE LETTING YOU STEAL MY STUFF. YOU OWE ME A POPTART AND AN APOLOGY!” I screamed, my fists clenched, knuckles whitened. “You do NOT want to cross me today.”
He looked surprised, and then meekly mumbled a quick “Sorry.”. And then he pulled out a Poptart from a nearby cabinet. “Here,” he blurted. “I didn’t eat it. You can have it back. I’m sorry, okay?”
I nodded in response, and he left the kitchen, presumably going back to his room, but he rarely would apologise to me. Why had he been so nice all of a sudden?

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[munchqueen]

Cool take on the first prompt! I wish my older was that scared of me. c;

[noctonia]

Cool take on the first prompt! I wish my older was that scared of me. c;

Thank you! As an older sibling, I've learnt that sometimes, you do not want to make a cranky younger sibling any more cranky than they already are. Bad idea.

[munchqueen]

Haha, yeah. cx
Although, my friends do find me kind of scary, I think... Maybe not my sister, but they do. I don't get angry very easily, so they get pretty frightened when I do. c;

[noctonia]

Well...luckily you don't angry very often then!