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My story :) The cave

Postby tūī » Sat Jul 22, 2017 8:09 am

The Cave

By: Rainbow3553

Once upon a time, a kingdom was risen from a forest. People randomly appeared in the kingdom, making some people wanting to know where they came from. Everyday and everynight people wondered about where they came from.

Year after year, people looked to see if anything was proven for there excantace. They looked around the world trying to find where they came from. One night they found a dark cave, full of wonder and discovery, they went right in it. One of the soldiers were never found the rest were mysteriously hanged by a noose. No one ever dared to go back in the cave, or even go alone out to the forest.

People as they got older got way more smarter and way more skilled. Once again, now more prepared, all the soldiers marched in the cave. After 5 minutes one the soldiers came out without a hand or a mouth all people standing around the cave were screaming and tried to help him. The man yelled bloody murder as he came toward them. They backed away this time step by step the people stepped back the man screamed. Suddenly the man falls, head first. All the people went up to him after 4 minutes to see if the man had a pulse. People felt his neck, yelling’’ he is dead!”

After the accident people never ever went in the cave. People who told stories about the the cave where cursed for eternity.

The end

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Re: My story :) The cave

Postby tūī » Sat Jul 22, 2017 8:10 am

The Cave

By: Rainbow3553

Once upon a time, a kingdom was risen from a forest. People randomly appeared in the kingdom, making some people wanting to know where they came from. Everyday and everynight people wondered about where they came from.

Year after year, people looked to see if anything was proven for there excantace. They looked around the world trying to find where they came from. One night they found a dark cave, full of wonder and discovery, they went right in it. One of the soldiers were never found the rest were mysteriously hanged by a noose. No one ever dared to go back in the cave, or even go alone out to the forest.

People as they got older got way more smarter and way more skilled. Once again, now more prepared, all the soldiers marched in the cave. After 5 minutes one the soldiers came out without a hand or a mouth all people standing around the cave were screaming and tried to help him. The man yelled bloody murder as he came toward them. They backed away this time step by step the people stepped back the man screamed. Suddenly the man falls, head first. All the people went up to him after 4 minutes to see if the man had a pulse. People felt his neck, yelling’’ he is dead!”

After the accident people never ever went in the cave. People who told stories about the the cave where cursed for eternity.

The end

For now :)
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