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Life still has hope

Postby Thebattleangel » Fri Jul 14, 2017 3:51 pm

This is a viscet story featuring Valentine, Cerulean, Drax, Clara Lilium & Hope.
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An unexpected begining

Postby Thebattleangel » Fri Jul 14, 2017 4:23 pm

The enclosed space felt like it was getting smaller and smaller by the minute, it was hard to sit in one place for too long without getting uncomfortable, "where was I?", I couldn't see a thing, I felt trapped in this small contraption, what it is, I do not know, is this really what happens now?, stuck in here for an eternity?, huh, I am so confused, all of my senses were useless to me except my sense of touch, my claws scrapped against the tiny prison, but I couldn't seem to break it no matter how hard I tried, so I slept most of the time.

I feel so squished, I tried to wriggle around but with little success I was stuck in the same position, I started to get annoyed, so I tried a new strategy, I pushed my paws against the side up the cage and started to use force against the sides, there was a sudden crack and light shone against my eye lids, where was I now, it was so dark before, but this place felt different, I felt free from the cage I was in, but why did my surroundings change?, I felt a warm paw touch my underbelly which made me flinch and shiver, I was unaware who or what was touching me, it felt strange since I was stuck in that prison for so long, humming broke the silence, the voice was warm and sweet, then I heard a harsh voice, which quickly angered the one who was nuzzling me, I felt her heart beat faster as she stood up to face the one who I thought was male but I wasn't sure, it went silent for a long while until something picked me up gently by my neck tuft, the wind swept through my little bit of hair on top of my head, I had so many questions fizzling around in my mind, the world seemed so silent around me, but who was carrying me?.
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Here comes trouble

Postby Thebattleangel » Fri Jul 14, 2017 4:49 pm

I dropped slightly, I slowly opened my eyes to see what was going on, I cocked my head slightly trying to get my eyes to focus, we were in some sort of forest, surrounded by trees, shrubs and animals, but I couldn't see who was carrying me anywhere, did they just abandon me?, I looked at what was beneath me and got a feel for it, it looked like an old tree stump with a few mushrooms growing on the side along with moss, it had a rough consistency to it, which felt pleasing beneath my paws, I jumped a bit and swivelled my head to the right to find some bushes, they were rustling, the noise frightened me, I hid my muzzle underneath my paws, I heard a soft giggle and removed my paws and gazed upwards to see a viscet staring down at me.

She had a very comforting smile and a light pink coat with white swirls and sweet candy apple red eyes, she placed her muzzle against my own, which settled my nerves, she looked into my eyes for a little while, sighed and looked at the ground, I tilted my head at her and whimpered, she giggled, she picked me up, placed me at her side, wrapped her fluffy leopard like tail around me, which sent me right to asleep.

The ground shifted slightly, I heard the rough voice again, this time from the trees, a dark viscet with green eyes approached us,
"Ah so there you are Valentine".
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Left for dead

Postby Thebattleangel » Fri Jul 14, 2017 5:22 pm

Valentine growled deeply,
"Get away from me Cerulean, you will not harm my daughter",
She stood in front of me, with her tail covering my face, teeth bared,
"Incase you have forgotten Valentine, she is also my daughter, I am her father and you cannot rob me of that title,
"Yes I can, just watch me",
Cerulean laughed,
"You women really are stupid, she will be my little devil, I will raise her to be strong and obedient unlike you",
He swung his tail around to try and hit Valentine, but she dodged it with grace and clawed Cerulean on his right eye leaving him muttering with pain, Valentine acted quickly, she put me on her back,
"Hold on",
She said as she held her breath, I dug my little claws into her long fur and closed my eyes as she broke of into a run further into the forest, she breathed lightly every time her paws took a stride in front of each other, I wanted to ask many questions to my mother, but every time I tried open my mouth, no word escapes, yet they can speak effortlessly.

The earth was silent as she sprinted which slowed to a walk, she stayed silent and didn't speak a word, she sighed a lot however, every noise she heard set her on alert, my tummy grumbled loudly, my mother got startled by the noise and set me down on the ground,
"Stay here, i'll be back with food",
I nodded my head slightly, I curled up and slept. I slept for what felt like days, I yawned and slowly got up on my wobbly paws, it was hard to keep balance, my tummy grumbled again, this time louder, I looked around and whined for my mother, there was no response, I sat down and sniffled.
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