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Sandstar's journey

Postby Jealousy Empress » Sun Jul 09, 2017 5:16 am

~Soon a death too hard will come, and all in the Mist will despair.~
that was a prophecy given to Sandstone when she was just a kit - only five months, and living happily with her twoleg. then her life changed.
Her mother, Heather was a kind soul. however the she-cat wad was killed by rogues, and young Marshmallow ran away stumbling across the moorland and the beaches to a clan that was willing to take her in for a price - the young she-kit would give her life for the clan and she would be loyal above all else.
that is how it is, and how it will always be.

Characters
Leader ~ Sunstar
Deputy ~ Rubblerook
Medicine cat ~ Rosesong
Medicine cat apprentices ~ Rowanpaw, Goldenpaw
Warriors ~ will be added as story progresses
Apprentices ~ Sandpaw
Silverpaw
Softpaw
Queens and kits ~ Creamgaze [mother of Goldenpaw, adoptive mother of Sandpaw]
Bluemist [mother of Buzzardkit, Cinderkit and Applekit]
Elders ~ Primrosepuddle


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Re: Sandstar's journey

Postby Jealousy Empress » Mon Jul 10, 2017 4:44 am

When the she-cat arrived back at camp, she sighed. it had been a tough day for her. she laid the food on the fresh-kill pile, before being interrupted by her friend - Goldenpaw.
the younger she-cat was the medicine cat. she had dark cream fur, with long orange and black stripes covering her pelt. her eyes were a deep green. she was extremely pretty, and Sandpaw knew that some of the toms thought it was a waste she had decided to become a medicine cat.
the two chatted away, discussing how the prey was, and what the sea was like at this time of the night. then, Goldenpaw asked the question that had bugged her this whole time. "what was it like? in twoleg place?" the medicine apprentice asked, in a hushed voice.
Sandpaw looked taken aback. "it was ok, i guess..." she finally replied. "there was always enough food, and a roof over your head, but you never had enough freedom. our names were chosen by twolegs and there was no leader."
"twolegs chose your name? but it sounded so clan like!"
"what, Marshmallow? yeah right. i guess i could have become Marshpaw, but Marshmallow? sounds too set up. like i was born to be named after a plant."
Goldenpaw fell silent.
Sandstar raised her eyebrows. "why?"
"i saw a kittypet. he said he'd travelled a long way. he said his name was Vertigo."
"i don't know him, if that's what you're wondering."
"oh... okay. i don't think we need to report this to Sunstar. he'd only worry."
"okay. well, i'm going to sleep, yeah?"
"yeah. see you later, Sandy."

with that, Sandstar left her companion standing in the clearing, and she returned to her own nest.

[so i accidentally edited this post instead of quoting it, so my previous post was lost. it basically described how she was hunting at night, and she was returning to camp.
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Re: Sandstar's journey

Postby Jealousy Empress » Mon Jul 10, 2017 8:25 am

The next morning, Sandpaw was awoken rudely by a loud clap of thunder. Although it was green-leaf, the thunderstorms were heavy. However, the rain was not cold, and the waves made barely got a few fox lengths from camp. It was morning already, and the paw was excited. Rubblerook, her mentor and the deputy, was a fine trainer and knew every skill.
She wandered out of the den, shaking moss from her pelt. Her green eyes glistened in excitement as she approached Rubblerook. "Rubblerook? Are we doing more battle training today?" She asked, a small gleam of hope in her eyes.
The senior warrior sighed. "I was going to take you to the Moonpools. You're nearly old enough to be a warrior, and it's time you visited your Ancestors. It's a trip almost every apprentice will make."
This got Sandstars hopes up. A warrior name? A journey close to the end of her apprenticeship? She was excited, and bouncing around on her paws, at least until Rubblerook spoke again. "Go and get some sleep. It's a long journey."
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Re: Sandstar's journey

Postby Jealousy Empress » Mon Jul 10, 2017 6:59 pm

[quote="~*~ LAURENTIA ~*~"]
sandpaw awoke again just before mid-day, when Rubblerook returned from a patrol. She had visited Rosesong and had all the traveling herbs she'd need. Her tail twitched in excitement, and happiness from being so close to her warrior name. What would she get? Sandsong? Sandstorm? Sandfur? Her mind brewed with possible names, and her mind was elsewhere when she left the camp.
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