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by pareo » Sat Jul 01, 2017 6:14 am
xxxThe pair of kits eagerly stepped onto the new-found land. Surely, the two kits had been exposed to the large forest that this area was filled with, but never had they seen the outcome of the plague the darkness sent on it. What was once a peaceful woodland, filled with sweet bunnies and charming jays, now became something of nightmares. It was a forest of myths, something that shouldn't exist in reality- for it truly was a curse. A sign of the inevitable demise of the land. However, these two kits would not stand for that. They would leave their imprint on the land- and save it from it's uncanny fate.
xxxStill, though, the forest had it's beauties. The trees remained evergreen- as dull as they were, they gave off life to the forest. The darkness allowed for one to sit down, and feel as though they have made an escape from reality. An illusion, it was. The serene and tranquil area was meant to lure you in. That was what Eliza thought- as, at any moment, someone could jump you- leaving you penniless and alone. The forest was your only company.
xxxAs the two kits trekked through the dry soil of the forest, an aura began to radiate- stronger and stronger. The stabbing feeling of a thousand eyes that had stayed from the beginning jolted up to a million. They were not alone.
xxxThe kits paused. Minutes passed. What seemed like an eternity seemed to flash before their eyes, as their paws remained stagnant. It was then that Zeus spoke.
"Who is ther-"
He was abruptly cut off by the other kit.
"Shush! Inna area like this, you don' know what's gon' happen. For all ya know it could be a thief."
xxxZeus sighed. Eliza kept a paw to the younger kit's mouth as they trekked on. The tensity of the forest seemed to increase- the green of the trees grew duller, as the soil became more wet than ever before. It felt like, at any moment, the soil could grab at the kits' paws and take them into the underworld. Zeus could see the strain in Eliza's eyes as they wandered through the forest.
xxxEliza glanced over at Zeus, flashing him a comforting smile. That was when it all seemed to tear away, as, then, Eliza came down as a new figure replaced her original pose. In a blurred motion, a sweet punch of reality sent Zeus flying, as it all went, in a blurry motion, to black.
xxxThe kits' eyes opened. The only light source was Zeus' brightly glowing eye. Suddenly, a kit appeared. Paws cupped to it's maw, it cried,
"Oh gosh! I didn't mean to do that..."
xxxEliza growled at the kit, before seeing the tears leaking down, matting the kit's fur in elegant strips. Eliza continued to hold a calm, yet still intimidating, glare.
"Well, alright then. We'll be on our way, g'bye."
The other kit gasped.
"No, no! Please don't go!" The purple colored kit shuffled it's paws vigorously at the ground. "I'm so alone. Let me come with you. Please."
Eliza glared, and Zeus stared at the other kit.
"D'ya really think-"
"You can come, definitely!"
Eliza grunted, not wanting to argue with the young kit. Rather than voicing her complaints, she let out a grumble.
"W'ever. Long as you ain't dead weight, you're welcome aboard. Was' you're name, 'nyways?
The kit stared, before stating,
"My name's Callie."
* Callie has joined your party
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by pareo » Sun Jul 02, 2017 1:43 am
xxxThe trio of kits glided through the forest quickly, as the beginnings of dawn
cracked through the green-coated forest. The lowly croaks of toads and the dea
thly chirps of the crows rung through the forest, as the quiet pats of the kit's pa
ws to the forest floor hit the ground. Eliza held onto her bow with incredible fo
rce, almost to the point where it looked as though the weapon would give away
and crumble to the ground. The twins, Eliza and Zeus, carried the luggage they
had brought with them in quick steps, with Callie racing ahead, only holding a
shank of sorts- well, it looked more like a knife. The knife was an old one, with
a rusted tip and dried blood stains littered on the originally glowing old knife.
xxxSoon, a loud roar rang through the forest, and the sound of the earth rumbl
ing before them rang through. It was then that the kits became filled with horr
or, and their originally quick steps became faster, faster, and faster. The quick
pitter patter of their feet only made it easier for the approaching predator to
catch them, but the quick-thinking and foolhardy kits only could think of one
thing- running. And they couldn't stop- not when whatever created that horrib
le sound quit it's chase. Looking behind, or falling behind, was a death sentenc
e- and no one desired to have the gruesome fate of being mauled by a wild, un
known creature. It was then that Callie, the youthful purple kit turned back.
A scream cracked through their maw, as she raced ahead, almost tripping the
other kits through her quick and startled run. Soon she leapt upwards, graspin
g onto a hanging branch. The kit's weight began to weigh the branch down, ho
wever, in a quick motion, she leapt onto the hunter. The massive brown-furred
figure roared it's mighty roar, as the once brown patch of fur became coated in
a thick red liquid.
xxxThe kit screeched, the only thing keeping her on the bear was the bloodied k
nife buried deep in the creature's thick skin. It tossed and turned, leaped and ju
mped, but it's massive motions only caused for it's pain to go on and on, and on.
Zeus and Eliza, in an incredibly far distance from the commotion, quickly skidded
and turned towards the squealing kit, handle in paw, knife in bear.
xxxEliza took her bow and grasped onto several arrows quickly, pulling the arrow
back into the string of the bow, aiming steadily at the stomping bear. Zeus held
onto his worn plush, treating it as a baby would, stuffing his face into it and squ
ealing. He was sure something bad was to happen, and he definitely was not go
ing to stick around to witness it. Immediately, the bear let out a loud roar, one th
at symbolized death. Zeus lifted his head to see Callie laying against a tree, and
the bear continuing it's stomping, though clearly, it was weakening. The knife th
at was once stuck in the bear's thick flesh was in Callie's limp paw, as Zeus quick
ly slunk towards Callie, kneeling down to feed her one of his home-brewed potio
ns. Callie steadily drank it, as Zeus grasped her by the arm to take her to safety.
xxxEliza continued fire on the bear, arrows raining down, multiple at a time. Her
supply slowly drained, but she thought nothing of it. She would grab her arrows w
hen she was done with taking down the massive bear. An arrow that was sent flyi
ng came down on the bear's eye, blinding it slightly, When the third arrow hit it's
chest, it collapsed.
xxxEliza brushed her paw swiftly across her forehead. Her paws were exhausted fr
om shooting off all the arrows, but all she could think about was her triumph agai
nst the mighty bear. She walked over to where Zeus was, and was only able to wh
isper,
"Is she okay?"
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zeus
inventory;;
- potion of life [ healing ] x5
- worn plush
- worn blanket
- apple x2
- raspberries x3
- jug of water x1
eliza
- bow x1
- arrows x25
- tent x1
- quilt
- jug of water x1
callie
- knife x1
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by pareo » Sun Jul 02, 2017 12:20 pm
xxxEliza padded along, keeping her eyes on Callie, who was walking
at a slower pace than she had been before the attack of the bear. Still
nearly traumatized by the previous series of events. Eliza kept strong,
making sure Zeus properly cared for the damaged youth. Truly, Eliza
knew little to nothing about healing anyone- Zeus didn't truly have
an affiliation with anything, but he always had an interest for brewin
g potions. Particularly ones that helped in benefiting others. Ya see,
Zeus wanted to be something- he wanted desperately to be known a
mong the land, and the only way to do that was to concoct somethi
ng beyond expectations- this quest for heroes was more of a side-jo
b, one he had volunteered in only because his business in potion bre
wing wasn't going too well- or, at least, not as well as he would've li
ked.
"Urgh. How longs'sit gon' take 'til we get through this darn forest?"
"An eternity perhaps.
xxxThe kits looked back at Callie, and, in a sudden realization, the
twins realized how crazy the look in Callie's eyes was. The quick chatt
er of the two kits had blocked off the sudden noise, the noise of a sing
ing voice. It appeared that poor Callie thought it was a ghost haunting
her.
xxxEliza listened to the soft humming, slowly increasing in tone, and
chose to follow the eerie singing. The other two kits followed begrudg
ingly, with soft steps across the forest-ground.
xxxThe voice was like a doll's- as beautiful as it was, the only thing it
gave off were intense chills, for who would be in a forest such as this
one? The voice grew stronger, stronger, and stronger, as they pondere
d the forest, in search of the source of the voice.
xxxSoon enough, they reached the source. Or so it appeared to be.
The song was much more strong now, the creature's voice singing rapidly.
The trio backed up, petrified by the wisp-like creature. What was it?
xxxEliza stepped forward, reaching a hand out to the wisp. It flicker
ed in such a quick motion that it startled Eliza, causing her to jump back.
The singing grew distorted- the pitch lowering. Eventually, it disappeared.
xxxThe sudden realization that this forest was no normal forest hit t
hem. It was obvious that the once beautiful forest was now corrupted, but
the inhabitants of it were hit with it as well. The only thing the kits could t
hink was, what was next to come?
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zeus
inventory;;
- potion of life [ healing ] x5
- worn plush
- worn blanket
- apple x2
- raspberries x3
- jug of water x1
eliza
- bow x1
- arrows x25
- tent x1
- quilt
- jug of water x1
callie
- knife x1
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