@~teypie~ ; of course you are exited about Ambrosia City xD
I am halfway through Abyss' chapter.
@anxious ghost; thanks i kinda died a little. And I'm not going to put Demon's Past on here, because of many reasons. but the only thing that I'm going to put on Cs is Ambrosia City, since the Gallery would have my actual name in the thng becasue i'm da artist c:
@ranger; Ambrosia is the least liked from everyone lol xD
The Gallery and A Demon's Past are both tired together lol.
@anxious ghost & RangerAnd the answer to your question from me is that I'd just write something down, like a boring chapter, before actually developing the plot. Just like in the demon's past, it used to be a small Chara and Asriel story, but it turned to be a demon judging a man's soul, in which he turns out guilty.
@DaigurenHyorinmaru; hehehe. I just finished The Devil is a Part-Timer! And i could pick out a few parts to where I could add a few ideas from there onto my story. but I'm going to push past that lol. but the haunted manor seems to be a fine part to add as Anna and the Demon -Whose name is Vakal- goes to a ball together lol.
There was at least one other person who said that, but its surprisingly not based around Ib.I honestly did not mean it to have it like Ib, but as I was typing it, it did remind me of Ib. but it did not dawn on me when I wrote a few pages of it. And don't worry, its not horror. The only horror its going to be A Demon's Past because something happens. >:3 and surprise the artist is meeeeee! only because i said before that I wanna try by putting myself into the story like Markus Zusak did and it was pretty interesting c;
Nanna is going to be this laid-back character, refusing the call. but she ewill eventually accept it when one of the characters explain to her that they would not fit well into the world that she lives in because on how they have different things about them. Like how Vakal is a demon and how people will think wrong about him and all. Along with Aster and Discord.
As for Ambrosia City, what I mean by that the queen was beside them the whole time, I meant physically there. I'm going to stop there because i'm not going to spoil the plot twist hehehe.
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What's in your writer's survival kit?
Notebooks, pencils, erasers, sketchpad, laptop, water (or hot chocolate), music, online dictionary, an actual dictionary (if the wifi goes out), grammerly, comfy pajamas, slippers, and my Umbreon & Espeon plush c; (Also tv for comfort as well)
Are there any stories you're putting off writing? Why?
...Many. I'm putting off A Demon's Past since I have lost a little inspiration, along with everytime I open my school email and i listen to music (i use youtube) and its restricted. aND I'm a bit stuck.
What would you consider your magnum opus?
I say the characters since it gives me inspiration to draw adn to be put in the stories as well.
;3
What are your favorite character tropes to use in your writing? To see in other writing?
i like to have a character thats in denial of the call at first, but gets to understand of why this is happening to them. I would like to see that the character is struggign with real like troubles, like how the world is changing around them. However, I prefer to have it back in the days, like 1987 or somethin like that.
Do you prefer developing characters or plot first? Why?
I prefer developing characters first because it would help me with the plot line, however if I do not have anything for character development, I come with up with the plot.
What do you do to help get you "in the mood"?
Exercising. And doing chores along with drawing. i guess drawing is the crucial part of it because of character development.
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Here's an expert from the two stories, the reason why Ambrosia City is not lister because I'm not done with the first chapter yet:
A Demon's Past:
There was no telling if the man was lying or not. Although it would be rather much easier if the demon would choose for him to die. That's what demons do... Right? I glanced over to the side before looking back at the demon who's back was facing me. there was really no reason for the demon to take this long to judge a soul. They shouldn't really be judging souls after all, angles were supposed to, but ironically this demon was judging.
The demon reached about 6'7" and wielded a black and golden trident that was probably 7'7". He wore a dark grey turtleneck and black pants with no shoes. Usually the town hall would have a sign up in the window, alerting the visitors that if they did not have clothes, such in this case shoes, they were not permitted to enter. But why did he get to enter with no shoes? Well obviously I mentioned that he was judging souls. Back to the demon, he had white fur and black ram horns that reached the bottom part of one of the side prongs of the trident. One of the horns was longer than the other, indicating that he might've broken one of them some time ago.
I watched as the demon twirled the giant fork around in his hand before forcing it down upon the man who was now guilty.
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This is just the beginning of the prologue. of A Demon's Past, since it goes into detail of what happened to the man. cx
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The Gallery;
It seems like the most important characters are always in the foreground. The second most character (or characters) are by the first most important character while the least important character(s) are all in the background. Or dead and not on the masterpiece so they could be forgotten. Or they are just not that important.
Whoever the artist who created this masterpiece was trying to tell us something. But what?
I turned to my sister Brooke, who was examining the artwork right next to the one I was looking at. I quickly glanced down at the golden plate that was below the framed canvas that displayed the caption and the artist name. I read the black letters and sighed in disbelief. The plate read: 'Just a Secret' - Artist Unknown, just the like the one in front of me.
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That''s part of the prologue of The gallery. Actually just a fun fact Just a Secret is one of the oekai's that I have done on Chicken Smoothie.
I am halfway through Abyss' chapter.
@anxious ghost; thanks i kinda died a little. And I'm not going to put Demon's Past on here, because of many reasons. but the only thing that I'm going to put on Cs is Ambrosia City, since the Gallery would have my actual name in the thng becasue i'm da artist c:
@ranger; Ambrosia is the least liked from everyone lol xD
The Gallery and A Demon's Past are both tired together lol.
@anxious ghost & RangerAnd the answer to your question from me is that I'd just write something down, like a boring chapter, before actually developing the plot. Just like in the demon's past, it used to be a small Chara and Asriel story, but it turned to be a demon judging a man's soul, in which he turns out guilty.
@DaigurenHyorinmaru; hehehe. I just finished The Devil is a Part-Timer! And i could pick out a few parts to where I could add a few ideas from there onto my story. but I'm going to push past that lol. but the haunted manor seems to be a fine part to add as Anna and the Demon -Whose name is Vakal- goes to a ball together lol.
There was at least one other person who said that, but its surprisingly not based around Ib.I honestly did not mean it to have it like Ib, but as I was typing it, it did remind me of Ib. but it did not dawn on me when I wrote a few pages of it. And don't worry, its not horror. The only horror its going to be A Demon's Past because something happens. >:3 and surprise the artist is meeeeee! only because i said before that I wanna try by putting myself into the story like Markus Zusak did and it was pretty interesting c;
Nanna is going to be this laid-back character, refusing the call. but she ewill eventually accept it when one of the characters explain to her that they would not fit well into the world that she lives in because on how they have different things about them. Like how Vakal is a demon and how people will think wrong about him and all. Along with Aster and Discord.
As for Ambrosia City, what I mean by that the queen was beside them the whole time, I meant physically there. I'm going to stop there because i'm not going to spoil the plot twist hehehe.
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What's in your writer's survival kit?
Notebooks, pencils, erasers, sketchpad, laptop, water (or hot chocolate), music, online dictionary, an actual dictionary (if the wifi goes out), grammerly, comfy pajamas, slippers, and my Umbreon & Espeon plush c; (Also tv for comfort as well)
Are there any stories you're putting off writing? Why?
...Many. I'm putting off A Demon's Past since I have lost a little inspiration, along with everytime I open my school email and i listen to music (i use youtube) and its restricted. aND I'm a bit stuck.
What would you consider your magnum opus?
I say the characters since it gives me inspiration to draw adn to be put in the stories as well.
;3
What are your favorite character tropes to use in your writing? To see in other writing?
i like to have a character thats in denial of the call at first, but gets to understand of why this is happening to them. I would like to see that the character is struggign with real like troubles, like how the world is changing around them. However, I prefer to have it back in the days, like 1987 or somethin like that.
Do you prefer developing characters or plot first? Why?
I prefer developing characters first because it would help me with the plot line, however if I do not have anything for character development, I come with up with the plot.
What do you do to help get you "in the mood"?
Exercising. And doing chores along with drawing. i guess drawing is the crucial part of it because of character development.
--------------------------
Here's an expert from the two stories, the reason why Ambrosia City is not lister because I'm not done with the first chapter yet:
A Demon's Past:
There was no telling if the man was lying or not. Although it would be rather much easier if the demon would choose for him to die. That's what demons do... Right? I glanced over to the side before looking back at the demon who's back was facing me. there was really no reason for the demon to take this long to judge a soul. They shouldn't really be judging souls after all, angles were supposed to, but ironically this demon was judging.
The demon reached about 6'7" and wielded a black and golden trident that was probably 7'7". He wore a dark grey turtleneck and black pants with no shoes. Usually the town hall would have a sign up in the window, alerting the visitors that if they did not have clothes, such in this case shoes, they were not permitted to enter. But why did he get to enter with no shoes? Well obviously I mentioned that he was judging souls. Back to the demon, he had white fur and black ram horns that reached the bottom part of one of the side prongs of the trident. One of the horns was longer than the other, indicating that he might've broken one of them some time ago.
I watched as the demon twirled the giant fork around in his hand before forcing it down upon the man who was now guilty.
--------------------
This is just the beginning of the prologue. of A Demon's Past, since it goes into detail of what happened to the man. cx
--------------------
The Gallery;
It seems like the most important characters are always in the foreground. The second most character (or characters) are by the first most important character while the least important character(s) are all in the background. Or dead and not on the masterpiece so they could be forgotten. Or they are just not that important.
Whoever the artist who created this masterpiece was trying to tell us something. But what?
I turned to my sister Brooke, who was examining the artwork right next to the one I was looking at. I quickly glanced down at the golden plate that was below the framed canvas that displayed the caption and the artist name. I read the black letters and sighed in disbelief. The plate read: 'Just a Secret' - Artist Unknown, just the like the one in front of me.
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That''s part of the prologue of The gallery. Actually just a fun fact Just a Secret is one of the oekai's that I have done on Chicken Smoothie.







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