Aw. That was so soft and lovely, Aloe!
erik to christine wrote:my love, my love,
my beautiful girl
how sweet is the song that you sing!
my heart, my heart,
i give it to you
though opera ghost i may be.
he laughs, he laughs,
that ignorant fool,
believing you lie to his face -
but oh, but oh,
how soon he shall see
your angel of music am i!
track 2 wrote:your comments oh so lovely,
your laugh is oh so sweet,
but everything you say
just makes my knees go weak
my head, it goes all swimmy,
my fingers become numb
i know it’s not my body
and it makes me feel quite dumb
it can only take a minute
of your bright voice in my ear
before i get all antsy
and am bordering on tears
a good day wrote:today has been a good day.
before i left for the bus, i told my dad i loved him
and i packed myself a lunch that was more than just crackers.
i sang along to silly songs as i waited for the bus to arrive.
before school began, i passed my teacher in the hall.
she seemed genuinely happy to see me.
she smiled at me and greeted me; it felt like we were friends.
i sat down to do my homework before the bell rang.
my thoughts were interrupted by a thank-you note
handed to me by a boy i made feel safe and included.
in chemistry i got back my test that so many failed
and saw that i got a ninety-nine on it.
the teacher called me naturally bright.
in spanish i sat in the front of class as everyone wrote compliments on the whiteboard.
as i packed up my things, i told the teacher to have a great day.
she seemed surprised and touched; she said it back.
in english, i reconnected with an old friend.
she made me feel welcome and we talked the whole class.
i didn’t realize how much i loved talking to her.
in math, i understood what the teacher was talking about.
he joked with us and we said we’d bring in crowns for him.
i had the homework that he assigned; it was complete and correct.
in business, i started writing my research paper.
i learned that one of my idols was openly gay
and that he was as married as you could be in the sixties.
in history, i finished my assignment early and decided to write.
the coach has imagine dragons playing and keeps joking with us all.
i had my homework for him for the first time in weeks.
today has been a good day.
and to think i started it with an anxiety attack.
polysaccharide wrote:sup y'all. it's been a while, huh?
i really haven't written much, but i want to do more this year! fortunately my mental health has been on the up and up, so i'll probably be able to focus on writing poetry that isn't just me venting all my awful feelings onto a google doc!
here's some fun poetry i've written semi-recently!erik to christine wrote:my love, my love,
my beautiful girl
how sweet is the song that you sing!
my heart, my heart,
i give it to you
though opera ghost i may be.
he laughs, he laughs,
that ignorant fool,
believing you lie to his face -
but oh, but oh,
how soon he shall see
your angel of music am i!track 2 wrote:your comments oh so lovely,
your laugh is oh so sweet,
but everything you say
just makes my knees go weak
my head, it goes all swimmy,
my fingers become numb
i know it’s not my body
and it makes me feel quite dumb
it can only take a minute
of your bright voice in my ear
before i get all antsy
and am bordering on tearsa good day wrote:today has been a good day.
before i left for the bus, i told my dad i loved him
and i packed myself a lunch that was more than just crackers.
i sang along to silly songs as i waited for the bus to arrive.
before school began, i passed my teacher in the hall.
she seemed genuinely happy to see me.
she smiled at me and greeted me; it felt like we were friends.
i sat down to do my homework before the bell rang.
my thoughts were interrupted by a thank-you note
handed to me by a boy i made feel safe and included.
in chemistry i got back my test that so many failed
and saw that i got a ninety-nine on it.
the teacher called me naturally bright.
in spanish i sat in the front of class as everyone wrote compliments on the whiteboard.
as i packed up my things, i told the teacher to have a great day.
she seemed surprised and touched; she said it back.
in english, i reconnected with an old friend.
she made me feel welcome and we talked the whole class.
i didn’t realize how much i loved talking to her.
in math, i understood what the teacher was talking about.
he joked with us and we said we’d bring in crowns for him.
i had the homework that he assigned; it was complete and correct.
in business, i started writing my research paper.
i learned that one of my idols was openly gay
and that he was as married as you could be in the sixties.
in history, i finished my assignment early and decided to write.
the coach has imagine dragons playing and keeps joking with us all.
i had my homework for him for the first time in weeks.
today has been a good day.
and to think i started it with an anxiety attack.
AestheticNature wrote:Hey everyone! So I'm trying to get better at writing and I am currently having writer's block(of course) Anyway, I was wondering if any of y'all can provide me with some writing prompts? Anything is appreciated!
polysaccharide wrote:sup y'all. it's been a while, huh?
i really haven't written much, but i want to do more this year! fortunately my mental health has been on the up and up, so i'll probably be able to focus on writing poetry that isn't just me venting all my awful feelings onto a google doc!
here's some fun poetry i've written semi-recently!
~snip~
haddaway wrote:
hey y'all i have a lil fun question i've been wondering about!
do you find that what you read influences your writing style? how much? and how do you use that to impact your writing?
i find that it's really big for me, and sometimes gets in the way. when i write period pieces i'm always drowning in primary sources to adapt to the writing/speaking style during that time. :0 and that when i want to convey something specific, i start by reading someone who has that style. but, on the other hand, i sometimes stop myself from reading a book to avoid my style changing while i'm in the middle of something! it's a lot of fun, i think, and i'd really like to know other people's experiences. (:
AestheticNature wrote:Hey everyone! So I'm trying to get better at writing and I am currently having writer's block(of course) Anyway, I was wondering if any of y'all can provide me with some writing prompts? Anything is appreciated!
AestheticNature wrote:Hey everyone! So I'm trying to get better at writing and I am currently having writer's block(of course) Anyway, I was wondering if any of y'all can provide me with some writing prompts? Anything is appreciated!
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