❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

[TheSongOfTheStars]

(I'm actually writing right now, Lol.)
But I'm tired and sick and I might fail today. nuuu.

[Woogwoo Wren]

I didn't even finish one advent day, so y'all who gave up partway through still did infinitely better than me.

In more positive news, I just found the site Notebook.ai, which is place to organize worldbuilding stuff. I haven't been using it long, but it seems really cool and well-designed!!

That looks awesome! The only problem is that it is moving very slowly for me... I will probably use it a bit.

[NyxxofStars]

I didn't even finish one advent day, so y'all who gave up partway through still did infinitely better than me.

In more positive news, I just found the site Notebook.ai, which is place to organize worldbuilding stuff. I haven't been using it long, but it seems really cool and well-designed!!

Ooh, it seems like it's still super new from the looks of the forum! I really enjoy the layout of it though, it seems more organized than scrivener! I don't really like that it has "premium features" that you have to pay for though.

[Ranger of the North]

Don't worry guys, I didn't even commit; and it's the thought that counts, right? XD

In more positive news, I just found the site Notebook.ai, which is place to organize worldbuilding stuff. I haven't been using it long, but it seems really cool and well-designed!!

Oh, how does it work? c:


Hey, Nyxx! You're back!!

[NyxxofStars]

Don't worry guys, I didn't even commit; and it's the thought that counts, right? XD

In more positive news, I just found the site Notebook.ai, which is place to organize worldbuilding stuff. I haven't been using it long, but it seems really cool and well-designed!!

Oh, how does it work? c:


Hey, Nyxx! You're back!!

Haha I've sort of been lurking. I'm on the discord pretty regularly, I just don't usually say much

[Yubel Fated]

So far the beginning of Tempting Fate has been violent. Showing Lukas to be.... Well I can't say here. But he's prone to strike out when angry. Which is 99 percent of the time.

Should I keep going with this route or have Ari have a happier beginning? Lukas could probably be out on a trip while Autumn and Ari kinda just nope outta there.

Ive had one draft where Ari was at least a bit normal. I think it started with him filling out paperwork for Team Rocket or something to get out of it as someone, Archer, accidentally burnt the place down whilst Giovanni was gone. Actually yeah that was how it started out. He and his mother having a bit of an argument because he wanted to go away again. (At this point he's been through ****** and Rocket)

Changing this also requires changing chapter 1 because Ari wouldn't be scratched by a Liepard.

Though he'll have enough trouble with Team Plasma already. So maybe no drama would be better? That kind of Parent trope is kinda overused but meh. :T Ju-just meh.

Ranger, from what you've seen do you like Lukas as a beginning antagonist? (Yes he and Autumn are mine too. I forgot to say that in PM bc i momentarily forgot about his parents xD) I mean he never shows up past the Prologue because I have no clue how to shoehorn him in with the rest of my plot and the plot of pokemans. So at this point he's a short ended plot point that basically serves no purpose and never really shows up again.

I'd thought about integrating him into the story as the main boss, but that'd make no sense. It would also make -spoiler- his brother... Well adopted brother for original story reasons. Spoiler reasons. You should probably Play Black or White reasons. Not much context is really needed but it's highly encouraged.

Chuggaaconroy's Lping the game if you do want context but don't want to play it for yourself

Also Autumn cant cook. Which is funny.

[TheSongOfTheStars]

Merry Christmas guys! Hope y'all had a great day, I did.
Also! I finished the Advent Challenge, yay!

[winged-backpack]

A bit of a late merry Christmas/happy holidays/happy December 25th to everyone and congrats to everyone who actually did the advent challenge and completed it!

(I might be taking a bit of a break from the thread for a while, I'll be lurking sometimes but I probably won't be posting for a while)

[BucketORandomness]

Merpy Christmidays! Random challenge/prompt thing. Using word choice and tone in your writing, write a scene that gives this sentence emotion:

"You don't fight well with others," she said.

A quote out of context for the greater good. My creative writing teacher absolutely hates words like announced or cried or exclaimed as a substitute for said. His reasons are that the way the person should have said it should be evident by their actions before and after, the words they used, and the tone of the scene in general. I've personally taken it as a challenge in my writing and thought I'd share something that came up in conversation today >^.^<

[TheSongOfTheStars]

I highly disagree with your teacher, I find it so boring if you just use said over and over, especially if someone is asking a question it sounds so wrong in my mind and sometimes a sentence needs help from the tag to define what exactly it was meant to accomplish.