This is really good! I like the idea you've had, and Imala has a unique personality. In my opinion, multiple VSSs and subject sentence starters together makes part of it rather choppy, but that could just be my personal preferences; Idk c:
But keep it up, I'd love to see more from you! Your writing-style is great c:
But keep it up, I'd love to see more from you! Your writing-style is great c:
