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✿Cherry Blossom Description~✿

Postby inspiration. » Sat Dec 24, 2016 10:58 am

The body of the tree is standing tall, reaching for the array of colours setting in the sky; within the gradient I can see orange, red, pink, purple, violet, and a musky yellow. Right here in this moment, I am relaxed. Calm. Nothing can snap me out of my focus as I listen to the pink trees whisper all around me. The grass is a pillow underneath my knees. I take a deep breath and breathe in the scent of cherry blossom- it is sending my soul to sleep with its light odour. As I look up once more, I see the branches of the tree are coated with tiny pink buds and flowers as they gently sway in the melody of the breeze. Clouds slowly float across the sky...they seem so close, with their tint of orange and pink hue- I can almost taste them. I imagine their sweet taste, like cotton candy, and my tongue sprouts little plants of sweetness. My blue eyes focus upon a pastel pink butterfly camouflaging within all the different shades of pink nestled on a nearby branch. Birds sing and tweet their lullaby, hiding in the overhang. I feel my eyes close and lay down in the comfort of the green grass- only for a moment, or so I say. I am surrounded by nature- nature is my friend.

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~ Meh, i got bored. This took about 20 mins. Opinions and criticism are welcome!
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Re: Cherry Blossom Description~

Postby inspiration. » Sat Dec 24, 2016 11:03 am

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Re: ✿Cherry Blossom Description~✿

Postby inspiration. » Sat Dec 24, 2016 11:18 am

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Re: ✿Cherry Blossom Description~✿

Postby EssalureLenara » Sat Dec 24, 2016 2:54 pm

I like it a lot! I would suggest not using the word "infested" though, since that has a negative connotation.
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Re: ✿Cherry Blossom Description~✿

Postby inspiration. » Sat Dec 24, 2016 8:28 pm

ErulasseAranel wrote:I like it a lot! I would suggest not using the word "infested" though, since that has a negative connotation.


Yes, i was also thinking that whilst writing. I meant to change it, but i couldn't think of anything to change it to. Thankyou!
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Re: ✿Cherry Blossom Description~✿

Postby Nitro Indigo » Sat Dec 24, 2016 8:42 pm

You should capitalise your "I"s. (Uppercase i, not lowercase L.)
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Postby inspiration. » Sat Dec 24, 2016 9:16 pm

Nitro Indigo wrote:You should capitalise your "I"s. (Uppercase i, not lowercase L.)


Whoops, silly me! Thanks, i have done it c:
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Re: ✿Cherry Blossom Description~✿

Postby Ranger of the North » Mon Dec 26, 2016 2:35 pm

Oo I like it! :D

Since you don't want the word 'infested', maybe something like 'coated', 'dotted', or 'splattered'? Or something...
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Re: ✿Cherry Blossom Description~✿

Postby inspiration. » Tue Dec 27, 2016 10:17 pm

Ranger of the North wrote:
Oo I like it! :D

Since you don't want the word 'infested', maybe something like 'coated', 'dotted', or 'splattered'? Or something...


Hello again my writing friend ^^ OH just incase your like 'what?' then i used to be Luminosity. ^^*

I like 'coated' , thank you for your comment!
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Re: ✿Cherry Blossom Description~✿

Postby Ranger of the North » Mon Jul 02, 2018 12:52 pm

inspiration. wrote:
Ranger of the North wrote:
Oo I like it! :D

Since you don't want the word 'infested', maybe something like 'coated', 'dotted', or 'splattered'? Or something...


Hello again my writing friend ^^ OH just incase your like 'what?' then i used to be Luminosity. ^^*

I like 'coated' , thank you for your comment!

Oh, yes! I know you! Hello, again! :D XP

Hey, no problem! c:


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