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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby Mz. Hyde » Fri Dec 28, 2012 7:19 pm

The ominous drones
Of the disapproving
Loom above us
Sickly, bitter
And grotesque
Their eyes ooze
The poison with which
They try to change us
And their mouths
Preach the lies
On which they were raised

although we are
Simply human
Nothing more
Nothing less
I'm your rock 'n' roll Joan of Arc
The queen of broken hearts
I'm here to save the world, but who will save super girl?


- Hate It When You See Me Cry, Halestorm
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby Brooketail » Fri Dec 28, 2012 7:27 pm

bella monkeyy wrote:this is a song i wrote; currently it is unfinished, so please bare with me <3 COPYRIGHTED.
any person(s) who use this without written or express permission by me can be prosecuted. /ty.

warning; pg-13.
for mention of drug-use, abuse, & self-harm.
that said, enjoy and please give feedback!<3 thanks.

- -- --- : :: {: When She Sings :} :: : --- -- -


She was born in the arms of a loving mother,
she didn't have a daddy but she had a brother.
Her step-father first hit her at the age of five,
he threw her to the floor and cut her with a knife.
And she never told another living soul..

Her brother left to join the military;
he died a young man, true and free.
She wrote his story on her arm with a razor blade,
she didn't feel it anymore 'cause it was all the same.
And she kept waiting for her heart to be whole.

it was just the start when mama left to get stoned,
and a false ending.. when she didn't come home.

she'll steal your love, creep into your mind, and
melt your heart with a beautiful lie.
but she forgot how to love a long time ago;
and the pain she feels only the lord knows.
but when she sings, the angels weep,
even though they know the tears are hers to keep.

still her voice braves throughhh..

---

that's all so far, what you all think about it? ;~;



I dont like what its about, but its so good!! Keep writing so I can keep singing it!!
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby warrior cats rock » Fri Dec 28, 2012 7:35 pm

Thay fear for thoes lost long a go
They fare for thoes fgoten and gone
They faec for the kids that weep
Thy fear for the end that won't come
They cryed for the children left to die
The angles cryed and sang
The divles hid in fear of them
The kids ran for form there lies
A life left so for behind
The trees wisperd a song long lost
The lost found hope but lost there sight
The rain stoped it's long lasting crying
But they fare for dark that comes
The dark that blows there
The dark that comes even in the light
The darkness that has no name
The lone child that sang to the light died so long ago
The child that palyed with the dark vanshed with no trace
But the happyness thay shered no srames with pain
As the darkness rises
And the lost and forgotten ask
Does the darkness have a name
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby Tanetane » Fri Dec 28, 2012 10:12 pm

The wind idly blows
the willow tree,
as it sways slowly
Souls tangled in it's branches
Mourn for their lost chances

A hue of red,
a strawberry bed
A pillar of roses,
tickle our noses
leading us to stems adorned
With twisted thorns

A thistle, a knot
A tangling plot
Who would ever think
That among the soft and pink
Within them, evil is dominion

Willow tree, willow tree
What do you see, what do you see
Among the frost and the freeze?
Will you free us, oh will you just teeze us
We tire of swinging in your branches
Will you return to us our chances?

Your petals are blooming
The wind is still grooming
The leaves, carelessly swimming
In the breeze

And you are dooming
Our souls, you are consuming
Our tears, carelessly swimming
in the years

Weeping tree, weeping tree
Angel of gray, who never seeks night
Never seeks day, and stays in between
Oh let us redeem
Weeping tree, weeping tree,
please hear our screams

Shadows can and may
blot out the sun,
but through it all, here we will stay
Subject to your crown,
tangled and bound,
Like your roots stuck in the ground

Our clattering bones
Are heard by no one and no one alone
For your swaying ropes, have diminshed our hopes
You suffocate all of our calls, so you may display
your leaves proudly in the winter thaw

Always upon our cheeks
Biting at us for something sweet
Our tears had frozen an eon ago,
who will know, shall our song go
On, and on, and on, and on
Must we sing it long, and long?

Dyed bold,
with ashes old
And studded with pins
But that won't keep us grim!
We'll just has to gone on singing
And our voices will keep on ringing

The wind idly blows
the willow tree,
as it sways slowly
Souls tangled in it's branches
Mourn for their lost chances

..................


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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby Brooketail » Fri Dec 28, 2012 10:14 pm

Tanetane wrote:
The wind idly blows
the willow tree,
as it sways slowly
Souls tangled in it's branches
Mourn for their lost chances

A hue of red,
a strawberry bed
A pillar of roses,
tickle our noses
leading us to stems adorned
With twisted thorns

A thistle, a knot
A tangling plot
Who would ever think
That among the soft and pink
Within them, evil is dominion

Willow tree, willow tree
What do you see, what do you see
Among the frost and the freeze?
Will you free us, oh will you just teeze us
We tire of swinging in your branches
Will you return to us our chances?

Your petals are blooming
The wind is still grooming
The leaves, carelessly swimming
In the breeze

And you are dooming
Our souls, you are consuming
Our tears, carelessly swimming
in the years

Weeping tree, weeping tree
Angel of gray, who never seeks night
Never seeks day, and stays in between
Oh let us redeem
Weeping tree, weeping tree,
please hear our screams

Shadows can and may
blot out the sun,
but through it all, here we will stay
Subject to your crown,
tangled and bound,
Like your roots stuck in the ground

Our clattering bones
Are heard by no one and no one alone
For your swaying ropes, have diminshed our hopes
You suffocate all of our calls, so you may display
your leaves proudly in the winter thaw

Always upon our cheeks
Biting at us for something sweet
Our tears had frozen an eon ago,
who will know, shall our song go
On, and on, and on, and on
Must we sing it long, and long?

Dyed bold,
with ashes old
And studded with pins
But that won't keep us grim!
We'll just has to gone on singing
And our voices will keep on ringing

The wind idly blows
the willow tree,
as it sways slowly
Souls tangled in it's branches
Mourn for their lost chances

..................
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby squirelife » Sat Dec 29, 2012 5:02 am

I will create a world
where you are still here
with no one else around
and nothing to fear
it will be like a dream
you will be in my arm
you will finally understand
and there will be no more harm
finally i will be able
to tell you how i feel
and it will not be an illusion
this time it will be real
I will create a world
one without pain
no longer will i suffer
no deaths will be in vain
you will be my queen
I will be your knight
together we will rise
and together we will fight
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby comcom123 » Sat Dec 29, 2012 5:06 am

A girl,
walks into the bathroom
crying.

Because some one called her
fat,
stupid,
ugly.

She whishes for ut to end.
She goes to the sink.
Turns on the water and stares in.

She lookes up,
at the dirty mirror,
and sees a sticky note.

"Smile,
because you are
beautiful.


Her tears stop.
The random kindness,
brightens her day.

She gets her own note,
"Smile,
you are you,
and you are perfect.
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby TheIdiotNextDoor » Sat Dec 29, 2012 5:37 pm

A flower bed
Of lilies
Silence all around
I can't speak
But somehow I know you don't care
You know I hate this dress
But I wore it for you
Even though you can't see me
I know you're watching
How will I live?
Will the sun rise in the morning?
Will dad be okay?
He's the one you really hurt
I hope it's nice, wherever you are
I hope you see grandma
She'd like that
Everyone's leaving now
I guess I have to go
Bye, mom...
I had a 6 year hiatus and now I'm in art school Babey!!!!!!
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby comcom123 » Sun Dec 30, 2012 6:40 pm

A light too bright,
The dark too dark.
A lover too loving,
And none to care
About the girl alone
Under the mighty maple.
The girl writing
The girl reading
The girl weeping
The tentative steps
Into a new world,
Crushed by the hate
Of everyone in sight
She writes out her sorrows
She draws out her fear.
She reads
To take her away from all that is
Bad.
She weeps to get the tears out.
She's done now.
She can deal now.
As everyone thinks she always does.
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby Mz. Hyde » Sun Dec 30, 2012 6:42 pm

Let me down slowly
Lay me to rest
Amidst the waves
At high tide
Wash my body out to
Sea
With all your arms
Let me go
And I promise that
I'll never hurt you
Again

Set me free
And I'll be
Finally

Gone
I'm your rock 'n' roll Joan of Arc
The queen of broken hearts
I'm here to save the world, but who will save super girl?


- Hate It When You See Me Cry, Halestorm
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