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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby cherry claw » Thu Dec 27, 2012 7:18 am

When we're small,
We're taught all is fair,
When life's never easy,
'Cause no-one really cares,
At the real toy store,
Nothing comes to life,
It's al about profit, gain, money,
And the ones that look a bit shabby,
Are tucked away in the back,
The ragdolls, the tin soldiers, the mis-shappen teddy bears,
And you're the new toy,
The cute boy,
Who has fallen for the barbies,
Glamorous, beautiful, fake
Didn't you know,
They're churned out by the hundred?
I'm the ragdoll at the back of the store,
I'm the loner in the back desk,
Why don't you notice me?
'Cause I'm so uncool
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby Onearmwonder21 » Thu Dec 27, 2012 7:28 am

Once long ago two souls clung to one another,
For comfort and help from remorse,
They pretended their lives were okay,
But the reality was they were each equally broken.

One lost her soul so long ago,
Clinging to someone she couldn't let go,
Making her soul bleak and dark,
She longed for many years to hear the words, "I love you" from the one she pawned after.

But alas it never happened,
And by clinging to her obsession with those words never said,
The vibrant talkative teenage girl slowly grew insane,
Until she lost her soul and a piece of her mind.

The other soul had lost her way as well,
Diving into deppression,
And lies,
Pretending everything was a-okay.

The other soul wanted nothing more than someone to be there for again,
Wanted to have a child to care for again,
Wanted to pretend to have a big happy family,
So she pretended the other soul was her daughter.

But alas this did not happen as planned,
For the young soul grew close to the older soul until she became like a sister,
And then she found herself caring for the older soul,
Told her she cared when the older soul believed no one cared for her.

The older soul wanted to reach out to the younger soul,
But how could she when everything she said was a lie,
When she had to pretend everything was right in her world,
And she cried tears when her 'daughter' left her again.

It reminded her of an event she'd rather forget,
But little did she know that it reminded the younger soul of something rather forgotten as well,
They were both broken and Jaded,
Their souls ripped, cut, and broken at the seams.

Still they forced the other to relieve such a horrid event,
That tension began to grow and spread,
Sara Saun didn't want to remember the one she pawned after so long,
And Carly Ann didn't want to remember the night she lost her children.

And, yet, the irony is that they both left each other without as much as a trace,
For they each reminded each other of someone or someones they had left behind,
And still they say reason and love keep little company nowadays.
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby oakdenugg » Thu Dec 27, 2012 2:37 pm

    Cry, my beautiful.
    Drown your doubt.
    Inside your soul,
    You'll never get out.
    The wind won't kiss,
    The sun won't smile.
    Why won't you stay,
    For a little while?
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby Cloverstream » Thu Dec 27, 2012 3:30 pm

when you lie to yourself every day, does it make the nightmares go away?
when you lie to me every day, do the monsters go away?
when you scar with words does your pain go away?
when you criticize can you go on every day?
when theres someone else to blame, does your shame go away?
when you turn a blind eye, do the crys fade?
when you sit lonely and depressed, do you feel better now?
when you repeat the same excuse, can you ignore the doubt?

(Vent...)
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby Lady Mekka » Thu Dec 27, 2012 3:33 pm

Snow falls softly
Layering on the ground
Hushing the world around
The beauty makes me stop
And stare, if for a while.
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby Mz. Hyde » Fri Dec 28, 2012 11:18 am

Changing a life with
Two simple words
Make them feel accepted, understood
Loved

I understand

All you had
To say
I'm your rock 'n' roll Joan of Arc
The queen of broken hearts
I'm here to save the world, but who will save super girl?


- Hate It When You See Me Cry, Halestorm
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby Mz. Hyde » Fri Dec 28, 2012 11:21 am

Overprotective
A thousand tongues of hatred
Spitting venom when
Anyone tries to touch
A stray hand could kill
Her eyes are wild, manic
As is she

With anyone else
She is
Tame as a house cat

We must be
Monsters
I'm your rock 'n' roll Joan of Arc
The queen of broken hearts
I'm here to save the world, but who will save super girl?


- Hate It When You See Me Cry, Halestorm
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby vanilla kitten » Fri Dec 28, 2012 11:40 am

this is a song i wrote; currently it is unfinished, so please bare with me <3 COPYRIGHTED.
any person(s) who use this without written or express permission by me can be prosecuted. /ty.

warning; pg-13.
for mention of drug-use, abuse, & self-harm.
that said, enjoy and please give feedback!<3 thanks.

- -- --- : :: {: When She Sings :} :: : --- -- -


She was born in the arms of a loving mother,
she didn't have a daddy but she had a brother.
Her step-father first hit her at the age of five,
he threw her to the floor and cut her with a knife.
And she never told another living soul..

Her brother left to join the military;
he died a young man, true and free.
She wrote his story on her arm with a razor blade,
she didn't feel it anymore 'cause it was all the same.
And she kept waiting for her heart to be whole.

it was just the start when mama left to get stoned,
and a false ending.. when she didn't come home.

she'll steal your love, creep into your mind, and
melt your heart with a beautiful lie.
but she forgot how to love a long time ago;
and the pain she feels only the lord knows.
but when she sings, the angels weep,
even though they know the tears are hers to keep.

still her voice braves throughhh..

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that's all so far, what you all think about it? ;~;
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby Thief. » Fri Dec 28, 2012 11:42 am

bella monkeyy wrote:this is a song i wrote; currently it is unfinished, so please bare with me <3

warning; pg-13.
for mention of drug-use, abuse, & self-harm.
that said, enjoy and please give feedback!<3 thanks.

- -- --- : :: {: When She Sings :} :: : --- -- -


She was born in the arms of a loving mother,
she didn't have a daddy but she had a brother.
Her step-father first hit her at the age of five,
he threw her to the floor and cut her with a knife.
And she never told another living soul..

Her brother left to join the military;
he died a young man, true and free.
She wrote his story on her arm with a razor blade,
she didn't feel it anymore 'cause it was all the same.
And she kept waiting for her heart to be whole.

it was just the start when mama left to get stoned,
and a false ending.. when she didn't come home.

she'll steal your love, creep into your mind, and
melt your heart with a beautiful lie.
but she forgot how to love a long time ago;
and the pain she feels only the lord knows.
but when she sings, the angels weep,
even though they know the tears are hers to keep.

still her voice braves throughhh..

---

that's all so far, what you all think about it? ;~;


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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby vanilla kitten » Fri Dec 28, 2012 11:56 am

i know, i debated that--
but people post about 'the a team' all they time.
which is about somewhat similar things.
i suppose a mod can fix it if they see fit, i have no problem.
i mean, i said 13+ xD
people should read warnings(: and if they don't like it, they should have listened, yanno?(:
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