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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby Mz. Hyde » Fri Jul 20, 2012 4:22 pm

Yeah.. :)

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Disproportionate, tis this twisted life which we lead each day
Their burning ashes, the shards of the lonely corpses
To these twisted smiles which they hide their innocent faces behind
The possessed, the venomous
Th gnarled roots who lead us toward our eternal end
A solitudinous demon, to let us die alone, with only a devil possessing our hearts for any sign of reality, of comfort
Te arms, the arms, to lift us up, to spin us to the sky
To entangle us in their web, to be devoured by the subhuman spiders of the sky
Alas, tis what shalt become of us, on the day that we too are taken
Burn bright, children, let your skeletons ignite the fires of the sky
To burn out your wicked souls, your naive dead eyes
On the day that you too are left
Behind
To travel this final journey, with the eternal haunting screams
As you join them, the fallen, the dead black winter branches
The creatures with the glazed, broken eyes

Join us, you know that you're already gone..
I'm your rock 'n' roll Joan of Arc
The queen of broken hearts
I'm here to save the world, but who will save super girl?


- Hate It When You See Me Cry, Halestorm
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby pond. » Sat Jul 21, 2012 2:04 am

It was perfect
My whole life coming to this point
Everything was in its place
He was ours

And then they came,
They came and tore my dreams away
Crushed my soul, my heart
They took away everything I have ever wanted, needed
They killed me inside
But they do not know
They took him away
And all is lost
Everything
They don't know
That they have torn me apart
They took him away
They set my soul afire and watched it burn
He is gone now
And I have nothing left besides a broken heart.
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All that is gold does not glitter,
Not all those who wander are lost;
The o l d that is strong does not wither,
Deep roots are not reached by the f r o s t.
From the ashes a fire shall be woken,
A light from the s h a d o w s shall spring;
Renewed shall be b l a d e that was broken,
The c r o w n l e s s again shall be king.

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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby glitters » Sat Jul 21, 2012 4:16 am

Everyone has some serious talent here...

I'm gonna base it off my fav song "The drug in me is you" by Falling in reverse (song in my sig)

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I woke up to see death in my face
Reality takes in And suddenly life becomes a race

Your secrets keep you sickened like a
Lie keeps you alive,
Like a certain secret you've held all your life.

I felt the darkness as it reached out for me
I only closed my eyes and clenched my teeth

Ive lost my damn mind
It happens often times

I can't believe I'm actually meant to fit in
Here

Trying to consume
The drug in me is you


((OKAY I only switched up some words. I lost muse lol and Yeah. Some lines are from the song... My best friend sent this song to me, He moved a few years ago so yeah xD ))
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby snowykay » Sat Jul 21, 2012 3:08 pm

This is about one of my characters who I drew in real life. :3 (please note that I am really bad at poetry.)

The wind dances
And the night does dawn

I draw my bow, my arrows
I shoot one up to the moon
Only for it to come falling back again

I sing with the wolves
Their long gentle song
My voice is too high
I must move along

I hunt with the tigers
Our steps match
Beat for beat
We bring down elk
Deer, waterbaffalo
Until they see
The tiger skin
Draped over my back

I'm not good at any of this wild stuff
Archery
Singing with the wolves
Hunting withthe tigers
It's all to hard
When they realize you're human
Why are animals so prejudice?

I hear mama calling
Time for supper
The forest melts away
Into my cozy room
I run down to the kitchen
Where mama hands me a bowl

Maybe I'm not meant
To be with tigers and wolves
This may be where I belong
In the comfort of my own home
Maybe I should stay here...
At least until my next adventure


(My creative juices weren't in for a poem I guess. x3)
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby Mz. Hyde » Sat Jul 21, 2012 3:32 pm

Everyone's really good :)

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Nothing works
I am simply a dead autumn leaf
Hassled by the breeze
With no say in what happens to me, what goes on in my life
I just let the cold rush through my veins
As I surrender

I tried so hard to stay a part of this world
To fit in, for so many long years
It seems like an eternity
But finally the world tore me away, with many promises of a better life
Where I could stand alone

But, as it seems
I am nothing but a puppet on a string
Left crumpled in a heap on the floor
Choking on the strings that otherwise hold me upright
Wound around my neck like a noose
My little clothe face is turning blue
And to the harsh realities of this life, the bright lights and broken promises of the big city
I surrender

Knowing
That I will be let down again

Still, I surrender..
I'm your rock 'n' roll Joan of Arc
The queen of broken hearts
I'm here to save the world, but who will save super girl?


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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby Mz. Hyde » Sat Jul 21, 2012 4:34 pm

Where are you
Where did you go
I heard your footsteps in th silence of the night
Saw your arm reach out to open the door
Then the gate banged closed
And my heart began to beat ever fast, like the steady beat of the drum
Or the mocking jeers of a crowded room
The sky returns to grey, and my body shudders with the harsh winter night
Their frozen fingers tap slowly against the glass, their breath fogging up the windows
The world is black and grey, with crimson patches where you once lay
But there is no longer anything left of you, not ashes nor dust
Not a body where you used to stand
The scarlet shards of you splatter the sky, paint me a harsh red reality
As I fall further, deeper it's very passing moment
Into this eternal night.
I'm your rock 'n' roll Joan of Arc
The queen of broken hearts
I'm here to save the world, but who will save super girl?


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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby Moceanu » Sat Jul 21, 2012 4:37 pm

I'll have four to post soon, I just need to print them + copy. I did them for an English assignment.
"remember how we forgot?
remember how no one ever really died in the wars we fought?
because each gunshot came from our fingertips
and we never really kept them loaded, just in case
because each enemy was a friend and none of it was about oil, religion or land
it was all just pretend;
remember how we used to bend reality
like we were circus strong men
like our imaginations were in shape then
like we were all
ninjas trained in the deadly art of "did not"
like "i totally got you!"
"...did not"
remember how we forgot?
"
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby Mz. Hyde » Sat Jul 21, 2012 5:13 pm

Cool, can't wait to read them :)
By th way, I know that the standard of my poetry as gone slightly downhill recently, but itll only be until I get used the keyboard on this iPad :)

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A thousand lost souls float silently toward the sky
Te brightest prospects, the ones that everyone who met them loved
Soon to become stars, to light up the sky, to guide their way
The children that they tore apart, the people that they so loved
To grow our wings, to follow their broken bleeding hearts
As th monitor flatlines, though no one is t the bedside to mourn
Another star lights up the sky, another soul accepted in a better place
An angel finally loved and accepted, turn a blind eye to their flaws
For they are all perfect

A million white balloons, on their journey upward to the atmosphere
Take me with you
Show me where you come from, and where we

Belong..
I'm your rock 'n' roll Joan of Arc
The queen of broken hearts
I'm here to save the world, but who will save super girl?


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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby Moceanu » Sun Jul 22, 2012 12:28 pm

What, downhill? Never noticed...... odd.. You think it's getting worse? I'd say level..
"remember how we forgot?
remember how no one ever really died in the wars we fought?
because each gunshot came from our fingertips
and we never really kept them loaded, just in case
because each enemy was a friend and none of it was about oil, religion or land
it was all just pretend;
remember how we used to bend reality
like we were circus strong men
like our imaginations were in shape then
like we were all
ninjas trained in the deadly art of "did not"
like "i totally got you!"
"...did not"
remember how we forgot?
"
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby glitters » Sun Jul 22, 2012 2:43 pm

Your fake savior
I don't know
What
To believe anymore....
About this thing
We call
Religion...
All I've been told
Is lies.
Of how
It'll get better...
Why
Cant this
Hopeless
Savior
Make it all better???

In
Gods plan
I'm just in the
Background

My silhouette
As black
As the night

You see me fall
To
(The
Ground... )

Help me get out
Of this hole
I've fallen
Into...

What will I do?

Will


I


Do?
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