Poetry and short stories :) Feel free to post your stuff

[Octember]

Flowers may die,
And the Sun may set,
But someone like you,
I'd never forget.
Your name is precious,
And will never grow old.
It's engraved on my heart,
In letters of gold.

That is beautiful. C: It says a lot with few words.
One of the reasons I come here is to attempt to give people helpful feedback, but there's nothing that could be done to make that any better. It's amazing. C:

Please read: The fire within It's a vampire themed book I'm writing, but I only posted part of the first chapter to see how people like it. Feedback is recommended.

I'll go read it now. ^^

[A Day To Forget]

I'd post my latest one but it's two pages long and I cant be bothered typing it..plus It's a bit dark...and yeah.....It's way to blantently obvious what it's about....
keep the good work up guys

[wickedbvnes]

So many beauts. Here is another one.

' Things I'll Regret '

Now, I have many things I can regret,
so let me spell them out before I forget.

The day I met you, my hell on earth,
the day I lied I knew you from birth.

The day I became your girlfriend, standing all proud,
all I wanted was to be caressed by the crowd.

The day I said I lost my virginity, and daddy took a turn,
he cursed you to hell, and condemned you to burn.

The day I married you, despite daddy's wise pleas,
I didn't care a jot, you loved me for me.

The way I told you I loved you, too,
that you really were cheating on me, I had not a clue.

That I cried when your death came around,
you had me ever so tightly bound.

The day I committed suicide,
hung myself high,
I can't believe
I let myself die.

[Octember]

So many beauts. Here is another one.

' Things I'll Regret '

Now, I have many things I can regret,
so let me spell them out before I forget.

The day I met you, my hell on earth,
the day I lied I knew you from birth.

The day I became your girlfriend, standing all proud,
all I wanted was to be caressed by the crowd.

The day I said I lost my virginity, and daddy took a turn,
he cursed you to hell, and condemned you to burn.

The day I married you, despite daddy's wise pleas,
I didn't care a jot, you loved me for me.

The way I told you I loved you, too,
that you really were cheating on me, I had not a clue.

That I cried when your death came around,
you had me ever so tightly bound.

The day I committed suicide,
hung myself high,
I can't believe
I let myself die.

I love this one as well! C: It's beautiful. In particular, I love how it has a unique story to it.

The writing is of such a high quality in this thread, it embarrasses me to post mine. You are brilliant. C:

[A Day To Forget]

without a face,
without a trace,
I will slowly leave this place,
without a whisper,
\or a word,
my screams and cries not to be heard,
without a care,
I will dissapear.
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Thinking of a freedom this world once brought,
until it crashed to the ground with a deafening silence,
I couldnt heard what was happening,
my world stood still,
as I watched your body get crushed under the rubble.
then everything seemed like it had been paused.
I screemed but everyone was frozen,
I cried until my world went black,
I try..
I try to look back,
on what happened but I just can remember the fact,
that you are gone.
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I made some new ones up on the spot.....
That is a really good one!

[wickedbvnes]

Everyone says I should be an author or a poet. Bleh. I'll be a solicitor, cuz writing is just a hobby.

[Octember]

without a face,
without a trace,
I will slowly leave this place,
without a whisper,
\or a word,
my screams and cries not to be heard,
without a care,
I will dissapear.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Thinking of a freedom this world once brought,
until it crashed to the ground with a deafening silence,
I couldnt heard what was happening,
my world stood still,
as I watched your body get crushed under the rubble.
then everything seemed like it had been paused.
I screemed but everyone was frozen,
I cried until my world went black,
I try..
I try to look back,
on what happened but I just can remember the fact,
that you are gone.
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I made some new ones up on the spot.....
That is a really good one!

Okay, I should really stop posting before I spam up this thread completely, but those are awesome. C:
I like how you are able to write different types of poetry to an equally high quality. I can't decide on a favourite between them. C:

Vintage - Well you're very skilled, you could easily be an author or poet. C: But yeah, it's harder to get well known.

[A Day To Forget]

THankyou vewy much Octember C:
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The water was still but stained with her blood.
only to be followed by a thud.
the wind whisperd its screams and rained out it’s tears.
for it held back all of its fears.

[A Day To Forget]

SORRY FOR DOUBLE POSTING...But I felt like writing another.
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When the world celebrates I just go visit your grave,

the cold I brave, reduces me to tears.

I’m surrounded by my fears.

I can’t feel anything, everything is all a mess,

even when I try my best,

its never enough,

the earth beneath my feat is so rough.

I have blisters on my feet, and in my heart,

caused my the life you stole from me, when you took away my heart,

you said it was only the start.

well, do I have news for you.

you will never ruin me, you may have torn me apart.

but my immortality will save me.

my chance to believe,

be seen.

I look up at the moon,

and all to soon.

you will never see it again,

my friend.

my ex-best friend

this is war.

but you have already lost,

and for that it will cost,

your life.
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I look at the ground,

my emotions are the only sound.

I reach into my mind,

but all I find, Is dust and cobwebs.

I look into the darkness of my heart,

suddenly I fall apart.

I am swallowed by the blackness,

I put aside my slackness…..

leaving me falling,

calling.

please stop the pain,

this is not a game.

I can’t feel my toes, all the way up to my noes.

there’s a tangled ball of emotions in my throat,

I scream to let them out

to get them out.

let the tears run down my face,

hopefully I can leave this place…..

or I will not survive.
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The words you speak burn my brain,
like acid, falling in rain.
the blood that trickles down my cheek,
is showing signs that I grow weak.
I try to run away from you,
I can’t get away.
the world is not here to stay.
I close my eyes and drift away,
Hoping that I will not wake to a new day,
but a new pain awaits me wherever I go.
whatever I say.
It shall still end this way.

[Mz. Hyde]

@Vintage : I'm going to b a psychologist and everyone tells sm the same thing lol

@Octember : You're not spamming lol..

@Party : I double post all the time lol.. On this thread, I couldn't care less about double posting .. :3

@Everyone else : You're all amazing :)

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You've already lost it all
Even the darkness evades you
Your soul is helpless to the soft calling of the creatures beyond the world's core
The sight of their hearts alone duces you to tears
What happended to being strong.. ?
You've already lost it all


Then, when you hear their footsteps beneath your skin
The harsh pulsing of their venom within your veins
You feel nothing
For you know you cannot fight them

For their army of thousands screams, their guns aloft
Against your army of

One

Where have they gone ?