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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby AninaAna » Sat Jun 09, 2012 7:19 pm

That's very lovely lol

.............. I got one!

Look up to the sky
And tell me what you see
Are there clouds?
Is the sun blocking your view?
Are there stars?
Is the moon too bright to see?
now look back down to me
And close your eyes
Shut them tight
And try to see
What is there?
Can you see the red of light
Shining through your eyelids?
Or is there something else
Something different
That no one else can see?
Can you tell me?
What is the answer
And why is that so?
Think of your answers
And repeat after me
we are family!


Lol that ended really weird you don't expect it do you?
nothing to see here
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby A Day To Forget » Sat Jun 09, 2012 8:49 pm

lets be Killjoy! wrote:this poem is about a young couple, from the perspective of the girl.
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Leave the words locked in your mouth,
held by a zip,
you and I try to kiss.
I push away your comfort,
It only makes me worse.
you punch me in the gut one last time.
I scream at you not to leave,
the sound of your name makes me grieve.
for the one day I was happy,
you were sitting next to me,
all I could hear was the sound of your voice,
but this was your choice,
to leave me here,
all I have is a jar of tears,
a sickening feeling a loss,
a table covered in moss.
I still lay on the floor from when you struck the last blow,
my face felt so numb as I was forced to watch you go.
I screamed at you not to leave,
the sound of your name makes me grieve.
I scream as the blood runs down my cheek,
I never thought you would do such a thing.
it kills me inside to let you go,
but is it better for me?
to seperate our souls?
I stab the table as we eat and scream about the things you did,
baby I didnt meant it.
I screamed at you not to leave.
when they say your name it makes me grieve.
I throw your suitcase across the room,
you cant leave, I cant live without you,
I know I shouldve thought about that before I opened my mouth,
baby I didnt mean it.
look me in the eyes and tell me you really want to leave.
please I beg you as you slam the bedroom door.
I cant take any of this sh*t no more.
I watch te key turn in the lock,
baby I'm begging you please just stop.
I scream at you one last time begging you not to leave.
thinking your name makes me grieve.
------------------------------------------------
wow writing that made me cry...


I be adding to this
---------------------------------
the garden hasn't been watered the socks not hung out,
I'm screaming, and you yell, baby please just get out!
you backhand me and everything goes so slow,
baby I'm begging you please dont go.
you say your sorry one thousand times,
baby I know you dont mean it.
-------------------------------------------
now I'm putting it in the perspective of the guy.
----------------------------------------
leave the thoughts in your head,
I dont want them shared with me,
you and I try to kiss,
you reject my comfort,
you say it makes you worse, babe your makin me cry.
I punch her, "why do you have to make me so god d*mn angry" I scream,
I didnt want to hurt her.
you scream at me not to leave,
baby bein here makes me scream.
I wish we could go back to the time we were happy,
you were sitting on my lap,
all i could hear was the sound of your voice,
I didnt want to make this choice.
all I have now is a pair of jeans,
stained with blood and the sound of screams and a sickening feeling of loss,
a body covered in moss.
I wonder if you are still on the floor from when I struck the last blow,
I wonder how it was to watch me go,
baby did you mean it?
you scream at me not to leave.
baby bein here makes me scream.
as the blood runs down your cheek,
I never thought it would come to this,
it kills me inside to slam the door,
leave you on the floor,
but is it better for me,
to grieve and leave?
you stab the table with your fork and scream at me,
you say you dont mean it.
you scream atme not to leave,
baby bein here makes me scream.
you throw my suitcase,
your heart is in peices your telling me baby I cant live without you
my heart yearns to whisper 'I cant live without you to" and hold you in my arms,
I know I shouldve thought before i opened my mouth,
baby I didnt mean it.
your yelling now, "baby look me in the eye, tell me you want to leave!"
'please' your begging me as I slam the door,
"well you know" what I scream, "I cant take this sh*t no more"
I turn the key in the lock now your on your knees begging,
baby please, just stop.
you scream one last time begging me not to leave
"baby" I scream "bein here makes me scream"
I come home, the gardens not watered, the clothes not hung out,
I scream at you "baby just get out!"
I backhand you, I wish I hadve thought before i did,
now your yelling for all the things that I did,
but your begging me not to go,
baby I know you dont mean it.
-----------------------------------------
wow I loves this sooooo much.
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I'm counting the seconds until you break the silence, So please just break the silence The whispers turn to shouting. The shouting turns to tears. Your tears turn into laughter. And it takes away our fears.
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby Moceanu » Sat Jun 09, 2012 9:23 pm

Don't you remember?
The days of fun,
in the summer sun,
Don't you remember?
Under the eaves,
in the autumn leaves,
Don't you remember?
Digging down low,
In the Winter Snow,
Don't you remember?
Happy, Laughing,
In The Spring,
How could you forget?

This may be a W.I.P, I might think of stuff to add, might not. Depends on how angry I get at *no-one knows who* or Sad...
"remember how we forgot?
remember how no one ever really died in the wars we fought?
because each gunshot came from our fingertips
and we never really kept them loaded, just in case
because each enemy was a friend and none of it was about oil, religion or land
it was all just pretend;
remember how we used to bend reality
like we were circus strong men
like our imaginations were in shape then
like we were all
ninjas trained in the deadly art of "did not"
like "i totally got you!"
"...did not"
remember how we forgot?
"
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby Exia » Sat Jun 09, 2012 10:34 pm

The rage was there.
Screaming inside my pounding head.
It was gone.
I couldn't believe it.
I couldn't feel anything.
I was numb.
Numb to the world.
The shock causing making my mouth hang open.
Then came the tears.
Along with the sadness.
I'm slowly slipping into madness.
I cannot undo what has been done.
I can't get back my lost thoughts and memories.
They took them from me.
And are now reading the very essence of my soul.
And laughing at what they see written there.
Panic, causes more tears to flow.
They keep looking back at me.
I wish they would stop.
Embarrassing.
They laid me out on a slab.
And cut open my heart.
And laughed at what was inside.
They have power over me.
And that is --

Unforgivable.
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby Exia » Sat Jun 09, 2012 11:11 pm

I guess I died with the fire.
All that's left are the smoldering
Ashes
Of the life I once lived
And that flame is extinguished forever
For embers need oxygen
To live
And you took all of it
From my very lungs
When you revealed to me
What you were--
A Demon.
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby A Day To Forget » Sat Jun 09, 2012 11:24 pm

lets be Killjoy! wrote:
lets be Killjoy! wrote:this poem is about a young couple, from the perspective of the girl.
------------------------------------------------------

Leave the words locked in your mouth,
held by a zip,
you and I try to kiss.
I push away your comfort,
It only makes me worse.
you punch me in the gut one last time.
I scream at you not to leave,
the sound of your name makes me grieve.
for the one day I was happy,
you were sitting next to me,
all I could hear was the sound of your voice,
but this was your choice,
to leave me here,
all I have is a jar of tears,
a sickening feeling a loss,
a table covered in moss.
I still lay on the floor from when you struck the last blow,
my face felt so numb as I was forced to watch you go.
I screamed at you not to leave,
the sound of your name makes me grieve.
I scream as the blood runs down my cheek,
I never thought you would do such a thing.
it kills me inside to let you go,
but is it better for me?
to seperate our souls?
I stab the table as we eat and scream about the things you did,
baby I didnt meant it.
I screamed at you not to leave.
when they say your name it makes me grieve.
I throw your suitcase across the room,
you cant leave, I cant live without you,
I know I shouldve thought about that before I opened my mouth,
baby I didnt mean it.
look me in the eyes and tell me you really want to leave.
please I beg you as you slam the bedroom door.
I cant take any of this sh*t no more.
I watch te key turn in the lock,
baby I'm begging you please just stop.
I scream at you one last time begging you not to leave.
thinking your name makes me grieve.
------------------------------------------------
wow writing that made me cry...


I be adding to this
---------------------------------
the garden hasn't been watered the socks not hung out,
I'm screaming, and you yell, baby please just get out!
you backhand me and everything goes so slow,
baby I'm begging you please dont go.
you say your sorry one thousand times,
baby I know you dont mean it.
-------------------------------------------
now I'm putting it in the perspective of the guy.
----------------------------------------
leave the thoughts in your head,
I dont want them shared with me,
you and I try to kiss,
you reject my comfort,
you say it makes you worse, babe your makin me cry.
I punch her, "why do you have to make me so god d*mn angry" I scream,
I didnt want to hurt her.
you scream at me not to leave,
baby bein here makes me scream.
I wish we could go back to the time we were happy,
you were sitting on my lap,
all i could hear was the sound of your voice,
I didnt want to make this choice.
all I have now is a pair of jeans,
stained with blood and the sound of screams and a sickening feeling of loss,
a body covered in moss.
I wonder if you are still on the floor from when I struck the last blow,
I wonder how it was to watch me go,
baby did you mean it?
you scream at me not to leave.
baby bein here makes me scream.
as the blood runs down your cheek,
I never thought it would come to this,
it kills me inside to slam the door,
leave you on the floor,
but is it better for me,
to grieve and leave?
you stab the table with your fork and scream at me,
you say you dont mean it.
you scream atme not to leave,
baby bein here makes me scream.
you throw my suitcase,
your heart is in peices your telling me baby I cant live without you
my heart yearns to whisper 'I cant live without you to" and hold you in my arms,
I know I shouldve thought before i opened my mouth,
baby I didnt mean it.
your yelling now, "baby look me in the eye, tell me you want to leave!"
'please' your begging me as I slam the door,
"well you know" what I scream, "I cant take this sh*t no more"
I turn the key in the lock now your on your knees begging,
baby please, just stop.
you scream one last time begging me not to leave
"baby" I scream "bein here makes me scream"
I come home, the gardens not watered, the clothes not hung out,
I scream at you "baby just get out!"
I backhand you, I wish I hadve thought before i did,
now your yelling for all the things that I did,
but your begging me not to go,
baby I know you dont mean it.
-----------------------------------------
wow I loves this sooooo much.


now both there views at once,
-----------------------------------------------
baby I'm screaming, your yelling we;re pushin and shoving,
your getting closer to the stairs, I'm getting closer to the stairs,
I fall, I watch you fall,
I scream, I hear your scream,
I cry, I watch you cry,
she screams, I scream
I hear my bones crunch, I hear her bones crunch,
................. she dies.
---------------------------------------------------
gotta think of another point of veiw, ooh the guys again!
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the ambulance drives away,
she broke her neck they said,
they wondered why,
"baby I didnt mean it" I scream at the top of my lungs.
I kick open the door, still locked from the struggle,
I move the broken furniture, also from the broken struggle,
I walk into our room, the mirror shards still on the floor, your blood still on the pieces left in place.
I will kill myself if I dont get out of this place.
"baby I'm sorry I didnt mean to make you gone, I was the one that shouldve left, gotten what I deserve"
------------------------------------------------
finish later.
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby Crocigator » Sun Jun 10, 2012 12:21 pm

Walking in the park
Chasing each other
Around and around.
They all joke that we're
gonna get married.
I don't know what to do.
Should I tell you
How I feel?
I think you might
already know,
might feel the same.
But I'm afraid
to know.
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby glitters » Sun Jun 10, 2012 4:27 pm

Broken heart
From the start
I play my part
The ends not far
I took the chance
By just one glance
I'm such a fool
I broke that rule
I crossed the line
In record time
I even lied
To avoid your cry
Since the day I met him
Oh I regret him
The tears I have seen
The way that I bleed
It comes to say
Oh by the way
Even I lie about the truth
Even I love
you.
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby Mz. Hyde » Sun Jun 10, 2012 4:38 pm

Do you know
How I feel
And do you care
How I got to this place ?

Everything I had has been stolen away
From me
No one believes anything I say anymore
I'm nothing but a dirty little liar
I'm trying to keep it all
As normal as I can
Trying to hide the fact that inside
I'm falling
Apart

Shards, parts, pieces, fragments
Of a once lived life
Now lost
Under pressure

Thank you for trying, everyone
But I'm too far
Gone

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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby happy-thump » Sun Jun 10, 2012 6:15 pm

I'm loosing you.
I'm forgetting you.
But when you sing,
I remember.

I remember how you were gentle,
and patient,
and excited in your own way.

I remember how I felt like an intruder.
I remember feeling inferior.
I don't remember you clueing in on that.
But it isn't expected.

I remember how you smiled,
when I would get mad at your skill.
I remember being jealous
of the others, who could say that they loved you,
when I couldn't.

I don't remember much,
I almost forgot your name.
But your singing brings me back.
And I'll see you again.
This summer.
Stay cool.

~Someone who loves you
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Anyone else ready for summer? Or is it just me?
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