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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf
by Moceanu » Sat Jun 09, 2012 11:33 am
Out of all your poems, ever, I don't think so.
"remember how we forgot?
remember how no one ever really died in the wars we fought?
because each gunshot came from our fingertips
and we never really kept them loaded, just in case
because each enemy was a friend and none of it was about oil, religion or land
it was all just pretend;
remember how we used to bend reality
like we were circus strong men
like our imaginations were in shape then
like we were all ninjas trained in the deadly art of "did not"
like "i totally got you!"
"...did not"
remember how we forgot?"
remember how no one ever really died in the wars we fought?
because each gunshot came from our fingertips
and we never really kept them loaded, just in case
because each enemy was a friend and none of it was about oil, religion or land
it was all just pretend;
remember how we used to bend reality
like we were circus strong men
like our imaginations were in shape then
like we were all ninjas trained in the deadly art of "did not"
like "i totally got you!"
"...did not"
remember how we forgot?"
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf
by A Day To Forget » Sat Jun 09, 2012 11:34 am
WELL XP josie, cos I like it so HA!
I'm counting the seconds until you break the silence, So please just break the silence The whispers turn to shouting. The shouting turns to tears. Your tears turn into laughter. And it takes away our fears.
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf
by Moceanu » Sat Jun 09, 2012 11:37 am
I never said I didn't like it.
"remember how we forgot?
remember how no one ever really died in the wars we fought?
because each gunshot came from our fingertips
and we never really kept them loaded, just in case
because each enemy was a friend and none of it was about oil, religion or land
it was all just pretend;
remember how we used to bend reality
like we were circus strong men
like our imaginations were in shape then
like we were all ninjas trained in the deadly art of "did not"
like "i totally got you!"
"...did not"
remember how we forgot?"
remember how no one ever really died in the wars we fought?
because each gunshot came from our fingertips
and we never really kept them loaded, just in case
because each enemy was a friend and none of it was about oil, religion or land
it was all just pretend;
remember how we used to bend reality
like we were circus strong men
like our imaginations were in shape then
like we were all ninjas trained in the deadly art of "did not"
like "i totally got you!"
"...did not"
remember how we forgot?"
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf
by A Day To Forget » Sat Jun 09, 2012 11:56 am
I dont think anyone will guess who this is for and/or what it means
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please let me,
I need to survive,
I cant walk around without you inside,
I cant even look at you, it makes me feel sick,
all your friends are making you worry,
I cant believe it,
I never thought this would happen to me,
I just looked at my hands while typing this,
I can see the bones,
please I need to survive,
I dont want to die,
PLEASE?
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like seriously I can see the bone in my wrist sticking out, my arm is way skinny...
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please let me,
I need to survive,
I cant walk around without you inside,
I cant even look at you, it makes me feel sick,
all your friends are making you worry,
I cant believe it,
I never thought this would happen to me,
I just looked at my hands while typing this,
I can see the bones,
please I need to survive,
I dont want to die,
PLEASE?
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like seriously I can see the bone in my wrist sticking out, my arm is way skinny...
I'm counting the seconds until you break the silence, So please just break the silence The whispers turn to shouting. The shouting turns to tears. Your tears turn into laughter. And it takes away our fears.
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf
by Moceanu » Sat Jun 09, 2012 12:02 pm
Wow, that's a pretty obvious one....
"remember how we forgot?
remember how no one ever really died in the wars we fought?
because each gunshot came from our fingertips
and we never really kept them loaded, just in case
because each enemy was a friend and none of it was about oil, religion or land
it was all just pretend;
remember how we used to bend reality
like we were circus strong men
like our imaginations were in shape then
like we were all ninjas trained in the deadly art of "did not"
like "i totally got you!"
"...did not"
remember how we forgot?"
remember how no one ever really died in the wars we fought?
because each gunshot came from our fingertips
and we never really kept them loaded, just in case
because each enemy was a friend and none of it was about oil, religion or land
it was all just pretend;
remember how we used to bend reality
like we were circus strong men
like our imaginations were in shape then
like we were all ninjas trained in the deadly art of "did not"
like "i totally got you!"
"...did not"
remember how we forgot?"
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf
by A Day To Forget » Sat Jun 09, 2012 12:05 pm
of course I new you would be the only one to figure it out T.T
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part two of my other young couples poem
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I slam the draw on your fingers as you reach for the keys,
no baby I beg of you please dont leave!
you screem at me while I lay starstruck on the floor,
my bleeding nose smashed into the door,
I scream at you baby please dont leave,
your name on the wall makes me grieve.
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brb going to throw up T.T
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part two of my other young couples poem
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I slam the draw on your fingers as you reach for the keys,
no baby I beg of you please dont leave!
you screem at me while I lay starstruck on the floor,
my bleeding nose smashed into the door,
I scream at you baby please dont leave,
your name on the wall makes me grieve.
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brb going to throw up T.T
I'm counting the seconds until you break the silence, So please just break the silence The whispers turn to shouting. The shouting turns to tears. Your tears turn into laughter. And it takes away our fears.
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf
by Moceanu » Sat Jun 09, 2012 12:07 pm
I'm surprised you haven't figured out any of the poems I've showed you over the past 2 months.
"remember how we forgot?
remember how no one ever really died in the wars we fought?
because each gunshot came from our fingertips
and we never really kept them loaded, just in case
because each enemy was a friend and none of it was about oil, religion or land
it was all just pretend;
remember how we used to bend reality
like we were circus strong men
like our imaginations were in shape then
like we were all ninjas trained in the deadly art of "did not"
like "i totally got you!"
"...did not"
remember how we forgot?"
remember how no one ever really died in the wars we fought?
because each gunshot came from our fingertips
and we never really kept them loaded, just in case
because each enemy was a friend and none of it was about oil, religion or land
it was all just pretend;
remember how we used to bend reality
like we were circus strong men
like our imaginations were in shape then
like we were all ninjas trained in the deadly art of "did not"
like "i totally got you!"
"...did not"
remember how we forgot?"
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf
by A Day To Forget » Sat Jun 09, 2012 12:13 pm
I cant remeber you showing me any T.T
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part three
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I yell down the corridor as you slam on the brakes.
baby I dont mean plaese my heart will break.
I know that I said sorry about a million times,
but baby I didnt mean it.
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part three
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I yell down the corridor as you slam on the brakes.
baby I dont mean plaese my heart will break.
I know that I said sorry about a million times,
but baby I didnt mean it.
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I'm counting the seconds until you break the silence, So please just break the silence The whispers turn to shouting. The shouting turns to tears. Your tears turn into laughter. And it takes away our fears.
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf
by Moceanu » Sat Jun 09, 2012 12:18 pm
I painted the walls of my mind today.
Red, to show my love.
Orange, to show my happiness.
Yellow, to show my joy.
Green, to show I care.
Blue, to show my freedom.
Purple, to show my peace.
Then I painted over it all in Black, to show I lied.
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What about that one? You think I wrote it from MY point of view?
Red, to show my love.
Orange, to show my happiness.
Yellow, to show my joy.
Green, to show I care.
Blue, to show my freedom.
Purple, to show my peace.
Then I painted over it all in Black, to show I lied.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
What about that one? You think I wrote it from MY point of view?
"remember how we forgot?
remember how no one ever really died in the wars we fought?
because each gunshot came from our fingertips
and we never really kept them loaded, just in case
because each enemy was a friend and none of it was about oil, religion or land
it was all just pretend;
remember how we used to bend reality
like we were circus strong men
like our imaginations were in shape then
like we were all ninjas trained in the deadly art of "did not"
like "i totally got you!"
"...did not"
remember how we forgot?"
remember how no one ever really died in the wars we fought?
because each gunshot came from our fingertips
and we never really kept them loaded, just in case
because each enemy was a friend and none of it was about oil, religion or land
it was all just pretend;
remember how we used to bend reality
like we were circus strong men
like our imaginations were in shape then
like we were all ninjas trained in the deadly art of "did not"
like "i totally got you!"
"...did not"
remember how we forgot?"
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf
by A Day To Forget » Sat Jun 09, 2012 12:18 pm
no.
I'm counting the seconds until you break the silence, So please just break the silence The whispers turn to shouting. The shouting turns to tears. Your tears turn into laughter. And it takes away our fears.
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