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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby Mz. Hyde » Fri Jun 08, 2012 7:03 pm

Nice work everyone :)

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Take it
Take it all
Take everything that I own

Watch
Watch me
Watch me fall

I lied to her
And I lied to you too
I am as broken as you may think

Standing
Standing alone
Standing on the brink

Let me go
It's my time to leave
And from the broken world below
My corpse you may retrieve
I'm your rock 'n' roll Joan of Arc
The queen of broken hearts
I'm here to save the world, but who will save super girl?


- Hate It When You See Me Cry, Halestorm
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby A Day To Forget » Fri Jun 08, 2012 7:06 pm

awesome Dead alive and wolfie.
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one more brathe before I leave,
before I decive,
decive you one more time.
Leave me,
to cry about what I may be.
I know that I am pretty,
but on the inside I am ugly,
do not hug me.
it is contagious.
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I'm counting the seconds until you break the silence, So please just break the silence The whispers turn to shouting. The shouting turns to tears. Your tears turn into laughter. And it takes away our fears.
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby Exia » Fri Jun 08, 2012 7:59 pm

I can't help but love all poetry <3
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Could you not see it in my eyes.
Running away from all your lies.
You told me I could fly, fly so high.
I guess you lied, once again.
Now I’m falling, my wings were broken.
Goodbye;I guess this was your way of showing me how much you really loved me.
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Anger is something hot and boiling that grows deep inside you--bubbling until it shows itself.
Anger smells like coal—and sulfur – it fills your lungs like poison, charring them black until you can’t breathe.
Anger tastes like blood – good at first, then disgusting as it moves around inside of your mouth.
Anger sounds like the roaring of blood in your ears – that drowns out any other noise.
Anger feels like a massive explosion of energy – filling you up until you must do something.
Anger looks like a deep crimson – that masks your vision and blurs out everything else in your path but the person or thing you want to hurt.
Anger is something hot and boiling that grows deep inside you--bubbling until it shows itself.
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby A Day To Forget » Fri Jun 08, 2012 10:15 pm

this poem is about a young couple, from the perspective of the girl.
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Leave the words locked in your mouth,
held by a zip,
you and I try to kiss.
I push away your comfort,
It only makes me worse.
you punch me in the gut one last time.
I scream at you not to leave,
the sound of your name makes me grieve.
for the one day I was happy,
you were sitting next to me,
all I could hear was the sound of your voice,
but this was your choice,
to leave me here,
all I have is a jar of tears,
a sickening feeling a loss,
a table covered in moss.
I still lay on the floor from when you struck the last blow,
my face felt so numb as I was forced to watch you go.
I screamed at you not to leave,
the sound of your name makes me grieve.
I scream as the blood runs down my cheek,
I never thought you would do such a thing.
it kills me inside to let you go,
but is it better for me?
to seperate our souls?
I stab the table as we eat and scream about the things you did,
baby I didnt meant it.
I screamed at you not to leave.
when they say your name it makes me grieve.
I throw your suitcase across the room,
you cant leave, I cant live without you,
I know I shouldve thought about that before I opened my mouth,
baby I didnt mean it.
look me in the eyes and tell me you really want to leave.
please I beg you as you slam the bedroom door.
I cant take any of this sh*t no more.
I watch te key turn in the lock,
baby I'm begging you please just stop.
I scream at you one last time begging you not to leave.
thinking your name makes me grieve.
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wow writing that made me cry...
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Postby excalibur. » Fri Jun 08, 2012 10:20 pm

The flowing mane has left the station
and now he is gone
but I will never forget him
he's the golden sun
his hooves still thunder in my heart
for I love the horse
he is now dead
there's not another course.
Now we have shed our tears it's time to look forward
to the life we have ahead
oh hickstead
I'm going to miss you now you're dead!
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Postby rampagingpickles » Sat Jun 09, 2012 7:59 am

You put on that act
I thought it was true
We went in the games
That's when the truth came through

I just don't wanna loose,
don't wanna leave,
don't wanna say goodbye,
This won't be your death bead,
I promise, because
I don't wanna loose...
The boy with the bread

Some believed
Some objected
I loved you,
The boy I respected

I just don't wanna loose,
don't wanna leave,
don't wanna say goodbye,
This won't be your death bead,
I promise, because
I don't wanna loose...
The boy with the bread

Then the night came,
I've never felt the same,
The night of our kiss,
And it went like this:

I just don't wanna loose,
don't wanna leave,
don't wanna say goodbye,
This won't be your death bead,
I promise, because
I don't wanna loose...
The boy with the bread






Yep, a Hunger Games song, basically a poem I created. This is from Katniss's point of view that Peeta did actually love her.
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby Exia » Sat Jun 09, 2012 8:48 am

The world was light as was my heart; then he came and it was dark. Her voice had sung a song so sweet it lifted me right off my feet. Then the darkness came and the world was never exactly the same.
~~~~~~~~~

Nothing left but shackles swinging; my dead heart is barely beating. No, not me, the lost soul hung in the tree, hanging by a thread so thin; I’m so weary from this thing.
~~~~~~~~~~~
“Love,” she says (that’s what they say). “Love?” I ask, “will fade away; it always does and always will. That is only God’s ‘great’ will.”
~~~~~~~~~~

Without the light it’s cold and dark, I wake up with a start; wake up from what is not a dream, but only from my memories. Long forgotten -- bitter cold -- freezing ice -- and darkness folds.
~~~~~~~~~~~~

Clouds, moving slowly across the dark blue Sky, weeping tears, that become the Rain. Mother Earth, warm, loving, with fertile hands that care for the tall slender Trees that grow. The Sun, hanging over Mother Earth and giving her warmth. The Moon is watching with envious eyes and she brings the cold, the darkness too. And the lonely howls of the Wolf.
~~~~~~~~~~

His broken wings did no good. He fell from heaven; like I knew he would, I watched the Angel fall.....And did nothing to help him......Nothing at all.



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{{Just some poems I wrote.....not as good as some of yours but....I guess they're good enough.}}
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Postby A Day To Forget » Sat Jun 09, 2012 8:51 am

They're awesome wolf!
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Postby Moceanu » Sat Jun 09, 2012 10:49 am

And I'll paste on a smile before you go,
What they never see- they'll never know.
The lake of tears, slowly shrinking,
Lost in a world of constant thinking.
Can't you see, all the pain,
You bring to them?
Can't you see how much they care?


Geez, this turned into less of a poem at the end... o.o More of a....... whatever you want to call it...
"remember how we forgot?
remember how no one ever really died in the wars we fought?
because each gunshot came from our fingertips
and we never really kept them loaded, just in case
because each enemy was a friend and none of it was about oil, religion or land
it was all just pretend;
remember how we used to bend reality
like we were circus strong men
like our imaginations were in shape then
like we were all
ninjas trained in the deadly art of "did not"
like "i totally got you!"
"...did not"
remember how we forgot?
"
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Postby A Day To Forget » Sat Jun 09, 2012 11:29 am

lets be Killjoy! wrote:this poem is about a young couple, from the perspective of the girl.
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Leave the words locked in your mouth,
held by a zip,
you and I try to kiss.
I push away your comfort,
It only makes me worse.
you punch me in the gut one last time.
I scream at you not to leave,
the sound of your name makes me grieve.
for the one day I was happy,
you were sitting next to me,
all I could hear was the sound of your voice,
but this was your choice,
to leave me here,
all I have is a jar of tears,
a sickening feeling a loss,
a table covered in moss.
I still lay on the floor from when you struck the last blow,
my face felt so numb as I was forced to watch you go.
I screamed at you not to leave,
the sound of your name makes me grieve.
I scream as the blood runs down my cheek,
I never thought you would do such a thing.
it kills me inside to let you go,
but is it better for me?
to seperate our souls?
I stab the table as we eat and scream about the things you did,
baby I didnt meant it.
I screamed at you not to leave.
when they say your name it makes me grieve.
I throw your suitcase across the room,
you cant leave, I cant live without you,
I know I shouldve thought about that before I opened my mouth,
baby I didnt mean it.
look me in the eyes and tell me you really want to leave.
please I beg you as you slam the bedroom door.
I cant take any of this sh*t no more.
I watch te key turn in the lock,
baby I'm begging you please just stop.
I scream at you one last time begging you not to leave.
thinking your name makes me grieve.
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wow writing that made me cry...


I wreckon this is my fav poem I haves written ^^
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