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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby Mz. Hyde » Fri Jun 08, 2012 4:29 pm

@ Killjoy : It's awesome, a few mistakes, but that's easily fixed :)
I love it :)

@ Exia : Nice ;)

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I spill out my heart
You glue the pieces to your cardboard cut-out of me
And keep pressing me further
There must be a reason
There must be
There is

But there isn't
And as you push me further and further
All I can do I fall apart
As, to your cut-out
Of the perfect me
You glue each
And every
Piece

Of my already shattered
Heart
I'm your rock 'n' roll Joan of Arc
The queen of broken hearts
I'm here to save the world, but who will save super girl?


- Hate It When You See Me Cry, Halestorm
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby A Day To Forget » Fri Jun 08, 2012 4:46 pm

@ dead alive read through it..... I was using my ipod when I finished it so thats prob ehy, will fix later, thanks XP
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby Mz. Hyde » Fri Jun 08, 2012 4:58 pm

Your poetry is really good though :)
Lol, I make stupid typos all the time ;)

_________________

Crimson silver
Scarlet red
Don't try to change
Me, sinking deeper
Into this living
Nightmare-ish jet black
Inky midnight skies
Running like hell from these
Short lives
Light up the sky with your
Electric mind
Keep going and going and going
All year like an
Ever-ready battery
Metalic taste
The deep, delectable green
Of new growth
We have to fall before we can
Get back up again
And it has
To get worse before it can get
Better that life
Love
Dream-like velvet silky smooth
Running like a river through your veins
Melts like snowflakes on your tongue
Crimson red
Scarlet silver
Let's start over
New beginnings
But I'm not changing
Never
Changing for you
For
Anyone

Ever.
I'm your rock 'n' roll Joan of Arc
The queen of broken hearts
I'm here to save the world, but who will save super girl?


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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby A Day To Forget » Fri Jun 08, 2012 5:00 pm

thanks! you to.
the typo fairy is def not my friend T.T
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Leave the world to kill my soul
surely it doesnt matter, I was getting old.
as the time passes,
I skip all the important classes,
that will help me live my life,
keep me out of strife.
just because I put the knife back in the kitchen drawer,
doesnt meen I wont go back for more.
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wow, thats dark, even for me 0.0
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Postby Mz. Hyde » Fri Jun 08, 2012 5:09 pm

Lol, not my friend either..
Especially when you end up typing really dodgy things lol, can't say that hasn't happened before.. xD

And that's really cool... :)

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No we can't
I watch them
Infect you
Heart, body, soul
Pouring like sand out of your mind
Gushes like a thick crimson river
All arms and legs
As they fill you with their poison

Pointless existances
A million tiny spiders
Infinite ever sharp shards
Ready to take you
Take you away
They're taking over you
Your body is shaking so hard
That you can no longer breathe
Face distorted
With pain
So much pain
All the pain

I'm so, so sorry
I'm your rock 'n' roll Joan of Arc
The queen of broken hearts
I'm here to save the world, but who will save super girl?


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Postby A Day To Forget » Fri Jun 08, 2012 5:14 pm

I dont think anyone likes the typo fairy.. poor him/her
and thanks! yours to.
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leave me dying here in the cradle,
creature stirring my blood with a ladle.
I reach down and touch hells fire,
fuelled by hate and desire.
I scream my sorrows to the world,
reaching out to the unheard.
I kill the fears inside of me,
cant the evil let me be.
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wow the more I write the darker it seems to get.
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby Mz. Hyde » Fri Jun 08, 2012 5:41 pm

Lol :)

Well, I honestly don't think I do anyone who's trying to write or read nice and happy any favours.. xD

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Delicate bony arms
Unresponsive heart
But still they try
Paper thin
Escape it all
Take up your life
And fly away
On butterfly wings of gold
Silken strands of spider webs
Strong, but broken
With a single touch
Like the bones that dominate you
The thin mesh of skin that covers
Your brittle, broken bones
What have they done to you ?

My once beautiful baby girl

Look at you now.
I'm your rock 'n' roll Joan of Arc
The queen of broken hearts
I'm here to save the world, but who will save super girl?


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Postby Gothic_Wolf » Fri Jun 08, 2012 6:02 pm

@Dead Alive, Your poems are AMAZING as always :D

@Lets be a Killjoy, I love your name by the way as well as your poems.
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I stare out the window
Watching the snow fall
I stare at the frosted street
To see a black car go by
With gunshots to follow

I ran out side
A man laying there broken and bleeding
He tainted this perfect snow
Crimson red
And I just stand there smiling
Watching this man die
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I haven't posted in SO long, sorry everyone.
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Shut up you old bitch
I’ll do what I want
I want do what you say
You are boring, lousy
And I couldn’t care less
About what you got to say

If I wanna read I will
If I wanna write I will
If I wanna listen to music
You can’t stop me

I won’t do what you want
I won’t listen
I won’t do work
And I won’t spare your life

Fast track me
I’ll be alone continuing to read
Suspend me
I’ll stay at home watching TV
Expellee me
I’ll stay at home relaxing
You’ll work and I’ll play
Bitch it won’t work
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^^^^^I didn't have a good day at school
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby A Day To Forget » Fri Jun 08, 2012 6:22 pm

same....

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leave the wind
it is killing my kin.
I swear out the pain,
and laugh at the games,
you are playing with my head.
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sorry got lost in mah drawing, forgot I was replying at the same time..
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Thanx wolfie ^^
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Postby Gothic_Wolf » Fri Jun 08, 2012 6:24 pm

Nice :D
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I have too many thoughts
Such a scaring past
So many memories coming back

Every night I cry
Wishing to scream
Why’d it have to happen
Why can’t I be lucky

Mental scars that will never leave
Breaking me
Tearing me apart
No matter how hard I try suppressing them
They still haunt me

After all that
I’ve never been the same
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