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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby Mz. Hyde » Wed Jun 06, 2012 5:13 pm

I find it kind of amusing that my last poem was inspired by the pants I'm wearing..
They have holes in the knees, and I can see my tights through them ;)
Also, typically, by the snow..

I don't know why I thought you guys needed to know that.. xD
I'm your rock 'n' roll Joan of Arc
The queen of broken hearts
I'm here to save the world, but who will save super girl?


- Hate It When You See Me Cry, Halestorm
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby Gothic_Wolf » Wed Jun 06, 2012 5:42 pm

Chicken Smoothie needs a "like" button, because I LIKED reading that.....
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby happy-thump » Wed Jun 06, 2012 5:49 pm

Don't leave me here to die.
My body contorted,
silent scars covering it.
Don't leave my porcelain body to death.
To do as he pleases.
Don't let him take me.
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That's awful dark for me...
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby A Day To Forget » Thu Jun 07, 2012 12:31 am

The world leaves me no chance
it leaves me dangling from a branch
of broken hopes and broken dreams,
I can even hear the silent screams
Comimg from inside me,
beside me.
I release the voices in my head,
all the things that have been said.
I brake open my fragile wall,
along with it my sanity falls.
I let go my everlasting stream of tears,
besaide my fears.
I yell at the little creature sctteround around me,
I wish they had never found me.
I whispers worries to the wind,
I have let it win.
but I will not say sorry.
__________
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I'm counting the seconds until you break the silence, So please just break the silence The whispers turn to shouting. The shouting turns to tears. Your tears turn into laughter. And it takes away our fears.
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby Cosmic~Wallaby » Thu Jun 07, 2012 11:18 am

Piece by piece
You faded away
From the boy I so loved
To an empty hospital bed
Never showed it
Only told of it
The pain you endured
Hidden as were the tears
When I walked through the door
I was so stupid
You hid it so well
We said not to lie to each other
But you did it just swell
And comes the call
It's over, you lost.
I promised no black.
We wore green and blue.
My dearest friend
Forever I miss you.
~~~
Does that even make sense? I don't even know. Written for my pal Chase who passed away a few months ago.
Trying to hide it hasn't worked so I'll just say it.
Yes I'm being moody and awkward to people on CS. I'm sorry. I'm not coping.
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby Mz. Hyde » Thu Jun 07, 2012 3:39 pm

@Cosmic : I'm so sorry to hear about your friend..
That is an amazing poem though and it totally makes sense :)

@Gothic : Lol, good to know.. xD

@ Happy thump : It's awesome :)

@ Killjoy : It's awesome, definately finish it :)
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Telling you everything
Deceptively speaking every word
Encasing it in a seemingly truthful exterior
We smlie, we move our limp bodies
In an attempt to entertain you
We pull out the wires
When your backs are turned
So that when you finally decide to care
You can watch us
Spiralling
Ever down
Ever down
Forever and always

Lost to this world.
I'm your rock 'n' roll Joan of Arc
The queen of broken hearts
I'm here to save the world, but who will save super girl?


- Hate It When You See Me Cry, Halestorm
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby Mz. Hyde » Thu Jun 07, 2012 4:32 pm

Everything I write today sounds so.. Childish..
I will try again, for about the million-th time time today.. xD

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Build up the walls that
Seperate us from humanity
Scream in desperation
If there's anybody out there
Please, please save us
From this soliloquise life
This servitudous existance
Which keeps us bound
Chained down and calling out
Semi-conscious screams
Are only heard by our laughing 'superiors'
That beat us into submission
So that we continue without question

This monotonous life
That we were born into.
I'm your rock 'n' roll Joan of Arc
The queen of broken hearts
I'm here to save the world, but who will save super girl?


- Hate It When You See Me Cry, Halestorm
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby A Day To Forget » Thu Jun 07, 2012 6:36 pm

lets be Killjoy! wrote:The world leaves me no chance
it leaves me dangling from a branch
of broken hopes and broken dreams,
I can even hear the silent screams
Comimg from inside me,
beside me.
I release the voices in my head,
all the things that have been said.
I brake open my fragile wall,
along with it my sanity falls.
I let go my everlasting stream of tears,
besaide my fears.
I yell at the little creature sctteround around me,
I wish they had never found me.
I whispers worries to the wind,
I have let it win.
but I will not say sorry.
__________


I edited it and finished it, you like?
@ dead alive thnks, and I love your poems.
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby Exia » Fri Jun 08, 2012 10:13 am

I can’t help but feel
Alone
When I come into my own
Home
And have to hide
Who I am
From those who claim they love me
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby oakdenugg » Fri Jun 08, 2012 12:29 pm

ƒour wrote:
Once upon a time,
In a land of mystique
A bird looked at me,
And parted its beak

From the beak,
of the soft little bird,
there was a story,
begging to be heard

"I was not always a bird,"
the creature said to me,
"This body of mine,
is the result of greed."

With a sad look in his eyes,
The bird tipped his small head,
"I walk the earth
on behalf of the dead."

"I need your help,"
said the bird to me,
"I need you to do this,
for I cannot see."

I wondered and pondered
how could this be true?
"Please tell me sweet bird,
what do I do?"

"I have one request,
I place upon you.
Open your eyes;
That is all you must do."

"But, little bird,
what do you mean?
My eyes are open,
My vision is keen."

The bird simply chuckled,
as he played his own part,
"Not the eyes on your face,
but the eyes in your heart."


    Has a very good beat to it, and i love the meaning. 5 stars. <3
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